Love this

:(:::... I want a sequel... pleeeeeeeeease that would be great. You can tell the story of how Benny asked Ethan to marry him. The twist could be something like... although Benny was about to propose, Ethan beat him to it and proposed first. I don't know, there's a reason I'm the reader not the writer haha. But i would like a sequel...

I loved this. You did a really good job.

the cuteness of this story got me like *insert emojis here*

so cute!

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Ed Sheeran's "Gold Rush", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

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Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

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catspats31
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oh my god. *tear* beautifully sweet and endearing. i think this story deserves another chapter or sequel for the proposal and marriage. and what happens when Benny is done with hi music stuff so he can spend more time with Ethan. Amazing though! and the ending was good, I thought it was perfect.

This was so BEAUTIFUL X'D Oh gosh I loved this so much *wipes tear* bravo! :'D

That was... tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo freaking cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'm on a Bethan high right now...

Benny's into music... sweet... that's also how he makes money along with that other job he has...

That was just a huge tease... "That day might come a lot sooner than the seer might've thought". The end. But either, way me loved it! I can't wait for more of your stories.

Such a nice one-shot. I really liked it. Actually, I like adult Bethan stories. Just too awesome.
The ending was great by the way. Don't worry.

If I weren't in public I'd squeal in delight. Extremely well written, put together and oer all great! I absolutely loved it! Couldn't put my phone down as I read it! Please continue on with like another chapter, maybe a proposal! Oh god it's just so good! Gahhhhh!