Reviews for When Two Worlds Collide |
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Cat chapter 3 . 12/12/2014 umm ok at the beginning of this chapter you make Elsa sound like a hyperactive teen. First she's wary of Jack then she's telling him everything and then she has complete trust in him. and when elsa runs from Jack and Anna why is he saying "let me explain" , what does he need to explain? |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2014 Not very creative for this chapter. You basically told the story of Frozen and a bit of Rise of the Guardians. I'm hoping that the next chapter will be more creative |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/25/2014 more please this is getting good |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25/2014 more please |
Guest chapter 7 . 7/25/2014 Oh my gods! This is amazing! Plz continue! I love Jelsa and I love how u incorporated the movie in it! Plz update soon |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2014 more please |
glee131313 chapter 7 . 7/25/2014 Loverly :) |
glee131313 chapter 5 . 7/25/2014 *adventure music* |
glee131313 chapter 4 . 7/24/2014 Ooo plot twist from the original. I love it! The cliff hanger makes me anticipate the next chapter! Can't wait! |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2014 more please . |