I just love Othinus x Touma

What a splendid ending. Job well done. I salute you for your good work. Please make more fanfictions like this. Thank you!

As always not exactly that well-written, but I get the FEELS reading it so all is good in my book.

You're writing has improved since the first OTP, but a beta couldn't hurt. If only to have someone double check to make sure your grammar is correct and nothing sounds too out of place or worded strangely.

-Zetsumei

Okay, now that did it. My Othinus/Touma meter has reached maximum power. I should be on my back, having a heart attack from all the sweetness.

The only thing that could make this any better would be to have this proofread by someone so to get rid of the few grammar mistakes that pop up here and there. But even without that this is still great work.

Only one OTP fic from your list left to go. Can I possibly take any more Othinus/Touma...?

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Hell yeah I can.

THAT IT THAT IT FUCK! THAT IT GO LOOK FOR IT BRO! THAT IT. THAT SENTENCE.

Touma being Index' parent figure is possible. After all, he did save her and raise her and all those shit. But Othinus? You're drawing a fine line between In character and OOC bro. Very thin.

Make them a couple, but acknowledge the fact that Index is still a being who won't just suck up to people and start calling them mommy because they're dating her daddy.

Fuck yeah! Fuck yes! Fuck fuck fuck oh fuckeritoetomuchcoi\sss! !

delivering the ring and was so entertaining though a bit more romantic had not been on more,

fever not exaggerating about anyone benir saw him, and I compadesco of accelerator and touma with Worst and neighboring Othinius will be hell for those two

Your as impressive a always man kudos to you just fuck yeah its full of awesomeness and laughs I love it

pls make a continuation for this fanfic

BEST. ENDING. EVER!

God is really giving him the GO signal ever since he bought the ring! And now they have a child (adopted)! Looking forward to more OTP!

Most pleasant chapter so far. Definitely a good way to end this 'volume'.

Though the ring falling down into the river was quite hilarious.

A satisfying end to a good fic. I hope this doesn't prevent you from making more OTP stuff, though.

ajajs se ve muy interesante cuando vuelvan a ciudad academia no puedo esperar