Reviews for Second Place |
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AsylumEscapee368 chapter 1 . 2/10/2017 You made me cry like crazy |
PothenaIsMyLife chapter 1 . 1/26/2016 Okay, so. I literally was crying by the end. Really. I am screaming right now, and I'm sobbing. It would be even worse if Draco found out (overhearing a conversation, maybe) and then he got really sad. And this seems like it could have happened, because Draco always is second place in the books. Second-best seeker, second in all his classes, second to Harry, and now second to his dead brother. His parents don't love him enough to love him as they did his brother. And, for most people, they would pity Lucius and Narcissa, and, I'm sure this isn't where you were trying to go, but this makes me dispise them all the more. All Draco wants is his father's love and attention. And that's all Lucius won't give him. It makes me angry. But this was amazing story, with an amazing plot. Thanks for making me cry |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 8/22/2015 this is very saddening |
TheTurquoiseBookworm chapter 1 . 12/19/2014 This is brilliant... sad, but brilliant. |
pen237 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013 Wow. This really got to me! Touching and sad. Thanks for the story! |
Eirian Erisdar chapter 1 . 8/22/2013 You know this has the potential to be a longer story, right? Depressing, but awesomely so. Heart-wrenching. I don't know why others don't write more Draco / Lucius father-son fics. It's a good idea! Very sad, and very good story. |
Accidentally Targaryen chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 How can you make it okay that Lucius doesn't love Draco? You broke me.. I never had anything left for Lucius, but you broke me, and now I'm crying because this story is so fantastic and actually makes it OKAY that he doesn't love his son. Can I marry your story? |
RainbowHeart chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 WAHHHH T_T T_T FOR ALL OF THEM! |
Cucumbermonster4 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012 Your story is really well written. I cried. * Sniffle* Beautiful. |
stay.traught.i'm.deactivated chapter 1 . 4/15/2012 It's just so... Sad. :( A very well written story. |
Hi chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 This hurts me. It explains so much about the way Draco is. Why he hated Harry so much in the beginning. Harry Hirt his pride and after being neglected after so many years he couldn't take being denied the thing he seeked,love & companionship. And why he fought so hard to beat Harry in quidditch and Hermione in academics. All in all what a lonely childhood. |
FoxFlyer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 That was... is... so sad... Why would you DOOOO that? *sniffle* |
juventus chapter 1 . 2/13/2011 Damn! That was a little depressing but it have sense in the and. It was sad. Good story. Keep writing! |
MoonsilverTwilight chapter 1 . 10/9/2009 aww that was sad! :( poor draco lucius! eww.. i made it sound like draco lucius... again.. ew.. but anyway, yeah.. lol |
goldengreaser chapter 1 . 6/21/2009 Good Job. |