I have been a writer for a long time, with published short stories and poetry, and I am currently writing 3 interrelated novels still in progress.

This is my first attempt at fan fiction. I hope that you enjoy it, for its erotica and humor, but I am also hoping for its story value as I progress. Many ideas have been gelling in my head as first put this story together. I welcome p.m.'s on any thoughts, likes, dislikes. If you wish to do that instead of a public review, please bring it on. if you wish to do a public review, please be fair and give specific reasons why you like or do not like something to help me as a writer, and others as readers.

I know taste is subjective, but if there are specific writing techniques or errors I am making, I would like to know. thank you.

My writing of the adult world tends to include sex. Sex is a part of life and intertwined into it. Writing about life and ignoring sex seems silly to me. I also write young fiction and of course keep things like romance at an appropriate level.

I tend to be graphic, as I am in the rest of my writing, so my work is often pegged as erotica. I would rather just call it life without a rating, but society likes labels.

I hope you give my first story, Alterations, a shot. It will not be just a f*ck fest, thought there will be plenty of graphic sex, there will be a progression of story.. Just in life, relationships tend to start at base needs and attractions and progress to more complex emotions and feelings. I hope to capture that. I love the characters in the Harry Potter universe, and I thought of Harry and Petunia, because they are definitely two of the more "broken" ones. Petunia is filled with anger, and I want to delve into my thoughts on where that comes from. Harry has had very little love, grown up in a abusive environment that will continue to be abusive because all involved at the Dursley household started out as abused individuals and continue to perpetuate it. Harry has had very little positive role models for a loving relationship, so I believe it will take him a long time to form one. This particular relationship will only be the start to this process, albeit it a very perverse one, but with no idea of what a "real" relationship is like, I hope it is understandable that this is a starting point for him.

As I said, I welcome any and all feedback. I want to write enjoyable fiction, and want to hear from my audience specifically what works and what does not. I will certainly take that into consideration.