I'm TheCrititcalHit, and I love writing fanfiction. I update my stories whenever I can, but please note that sometimes personal things stop me from doing so (aka expect slow updates, but the updates will come!). Feel free to PM me if you have any questions about my stories.

My Current Stories:

Ashfall: A fic based off of my Y Nuzlocke, centering around Ash. In this story Ash is torn away from his world by Yveltal, and is thrown into one where Pokemon battles are to the death. Cursed by Yveltal, Ash must defeat this corrupted league in order to free himself.

Rising From the Ashes: A story about Ash when he is the champion of Kanto. He has aura powers and is married to Misty, who is excepting twins. After the death of Mewtwo Ash learns that he has a connection with Mew, which allows them to call on each other for help. Unfortunately Ash is captured by the reforming Team Rocket, who want Ash to summon Mew, who they want to use to create Mewthree, but with a darker twist to ensure the new clone doesn't meet Mewtwo's fate.

Hiatus for now.

Mirror Me: Ash Ketchum has earned all of his Kalos Badges, and decides to travel back to the mirror world to check on his timid counter part (who will go by Satoshi in this story). However family ties may cause some trouble in both worlds... (Watch Pokemon X and Y episode "Cave of Mirrors", or else story won't make any sense.)

I'm thinking of putting this story up for adoption.

To The Bitter End: A Minecraft story revolving around Steve, Alex, an Enderman, and a baby Ender Dragon-- and their fight to save the Minecraft world.

This story is on hiatus for now.