Arethusa Fellini
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Author has written 8 stories for Ragnarok Online, and Naruto.

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03.01.2008

Yeah, I know it's March. I said I'll post in January though it seemed that didn't work out, either. I'm here 'cause I had the measles. And my doctor made me promise not to go to work for a time of two weeks. Nice. When I get to work on Monday I'll have my salary without even lifting a finger. I even got promoted while I was away. Ohoho~

Expect more from me real soon.

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Naruto: One World
Completed: eight percent

A six-part AU romance series set in the world of the wealthy and in the competitive world of journalism.
Each part is a continuation of the previous but each can stand on its own without needing to read everything.

Genre: Drama/Romance/Humor/Alternate Reality
Length: 45,000 - 50,000 words (approx. 9-11 chapters each)
Rating: M

Yours for the Taking
Main: SasuHina.
Side Story: NejiTen.
Hinata is a painter who lives with her cousin, Neji. Sasuke has more than enough money to last him three lifetimes. They acknowledge their attraction to each other. Yet what's stopping Hinata?
Progress: Part VI (58/100); Part VII (2/100); Part VIII (15/100)

Acceptance
Main: NejiTen.
Side Story: ShikaTema.
Neji Hyuuga has a lot on his plate: the Hyuuga contention, the newspaper, Tenten, and the invisible presence of Lee, Tenten's departed husband.
Progress: Part I (5/100)

Au Contraire, Mon Chéri
Main: ShikaTema.
Side Story: NaruSaku.
Temari Sabaku, world-renowned war correspondent, was rarely (next to never) wrong. But she was wrong about dumping Shikamaru Nara, world-renowned gossip columnist. Now she wanted him back.

Never-ever Land
Main: NaruSaku.
Side Story: KibaIno.
A phone call from Temari goads Sakura to go back to Konoha to check things out for herself. Naruto has nothing to do with it, but why does it seem that they're spending more and more time together?

Lady Honey Pot
Main: KibaIno.
Side Story: SasuHina.
Ino Yamanaka has only one goal in life: marry any of the top ten most sought-after bachelors in Konoha. After all, she deserves nothing but the best!
Progress: Prelude (50/100)

The Money Game
(title subject to change)
SasuHina.
And it all comes down to this. Money is, after all, the root of all evil.

Note: This AU series will most probably be the last of my Naruto fan fictions.

The Ninja Game
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure/Humor
Progress: Under Reconstruction

Second Best
Genre: Drama/Action/Adventure
Progress: Chapter V (13/100)

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• Parts I think you need to work on
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• Rating (1-10)

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my animé/asian drama watch list
Bleach • Naruto Shippuuden • Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei • D-Gray-Man • The Liar Game

my manga read list
Princess (manwa) • Bleach • Claymore • Spicy Pink • Gantz • Lovely Complex • Koukou Debut • Naruto • Nodame CantabileNANA • Tenshi Nanka Ja Nai (Tennai) •

Note: users in my favorite authors list are friends, not favorite author per se.

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The Perfect Candidate by MissLe reviews
So when a girl's down on her luck, forced to live with her cousin and his frustratingly meddlesome wife and facing a divorce with her husband, what's she to do? Enter a contest to win the love of the world's biggest heart throb, of course. SasuHina.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 33 - Words: 89,174 - Reviews: 1509 - Favs: 690 - Follows: 716 - Updated: 12/14/2011 - Published: 1/13/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
Burning Leaves by Lyra Kamiya reviews
Street racing AU... Konoha's best racers have one thing in common: a love of speed and danger. Multiple pairings both now and eventually, but it's mostly about cars, speed, deception, and revenge.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 10 - Words: 23,871 - Reviews: 69 - Favs: 52 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 4/14/2009 - Published: 11/1/2006 - Hinata H., Naruto U.
Today's Advice by Cassandra's Destiny reviews
Tenten has a fine job and a fine lover, but today's advice is DON'T LIE. Okay, so her job isn't all that, and she lied about the lover part too. But that doesn't mean she has to take orders from a hot bastard who calls himself executive director, right?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,843 - Reviews: 118 - Favs: 56 - Follows: 82 - Updated: 11/1/2008 - Published: 5/14/2007 - Neji H., Tenten
Descent into Rapture by clockwork starlight reviews
AU A modern spin on the ol' 'arranged marriage' fic. Take one Heiress. Add two really hot suitors. Mix several complications in. Let set. ItaHinaSasu scalene triangle, with background noises. HIATUS because all notes were stolen along with laptop.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 35 - Words: 84,017 - Reviews: 370 - Favs: 170 - Follows: 154 - Updated: 4/7/2008 - Published: 1/2/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
My Eyes by Shiranui the Brave reviews
Hinata leaves Konoha to become stronger. When Sasuke conveniently appears and decides to train her, everything changes. The mysterious Akatsuki, furious Bijuu, impossible odds and love await the two on their deep dive into destiny. Ch. 13 uploaded!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 15 - Words: 161,142 - Reviews: 166 - Favs: 128 - Follows: 91 - Updated: 2/16/2008 - Published: 2/5/2007 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Shikamaru Plus Glasses Equals by therealesther reviews
Shikamaru could never have imagined the consequences of such an image change...dedicated to phishychan EPILOGUE NOW UP! THANK U AND GOODNIGHT!
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 27,068 - Reviews: 502 - Favs: 867 - Follows: 351 - Updated: 2/15/2008 - Published: 2/15/2005 - Shikamaru N., Sakura H. - Complete
The Jailer by coalesce reviews
[SasuHina] Obsessed with reviving his clan, Sasuke kidnaps Hinata and imprisons her. She is to give birth to his children, the hybrids of the Byakugan and Sharingan. What he didn't call for, however, was falling in love with his prisoner.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 14,239 - Reviews: 374 - Favs: 417 - Follows: 417 - Updated: 8/24/2007 - Published: 5/7/2007 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
What Are We? by Audriel reviews
What happens when two of the most unlikely people are united in the holy matrimony? Especially when there is no love between them to start with. [Sasuke x Hinata]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 13 - Words: 62,610 - Reviews: 484 - Favs: 351 - Follows: 303 - Updated: 8/19/2007 - Published: 6/26/2005 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Present's Future by XFH12147 reviews
Tenten was tired of having Neji treat her so coldly, so she decided to cut sparring short and returns home only to fall asleep and get plunged into the future. She wakes up and finds that she's not alone. NejiTenten, NarutoSakura
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 22,362 - Reviews: 244 - Favs: 110 - Follows: 86 - Updated: 7/11/2007 - Published: 10/9/2006 - Neji H., Tenten
An Accident of Fate by umeboshi-girl reviews
Sasuhina AU fic. I took one comparatively well adjusted Uchiha Sasuke, plopped him into the canon Narutoverse, and threw poor Hinata along for the ride.
Naruto - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 20,137 - Reviews: 95 - Favs: 69 - Follows: 76 - Updated: 6/3/2007 - Published: 2/21/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
Cutting Water by NessieGG reviews
In Tang Dynasty China, the House of Long fights to protect their way of life from the Uchiha clan. Hyuuga Neji of Japan is sent to assist them and finds a secret war, a deception to the Empress, and a woman unlike any he has known. [AU][NejiTen, SasuSaku]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 20 - Words: 53,876 - Reviews: 509 - Favs: 412 - Follows: 118 - Updated: 5/18/2007 - Published: 1/6/2007 - Neji H., Tenten - Complete
Who We Are Now by inconstant heart reviews
He's back. She's changed. They meet. //Futurefic, vaguely Sasuke&Hinata.//
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,374 - Reviews: 53 - Favs: 120 - Follows: 23 - Published: 5/17/2007 - Hinata H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Corresponding With Strangers by eriloca reviews
Who knew you could find love in the mail! AU. SasuHina oneshot.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,367 - Reviews: 100 - Favs: 385 - Follows: 50 - Published: 2/27/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H. - Complete
Stretching Paradise by Jacal Ste. Worme reviews
SasuHina. Is Jiraiya's Icha Icha enough to poke Sasuke's manly passions for Hinata? You may not know it yet, but the sanin is as good as Dr. Phil.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,648 - Reviews: 94 - Favs: 100 - Follows: 92 - Updated: 2/1/2007 - Published: 12/3/2006 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
Snapshot Moment by Nkiseki reviews
AU Attraction only takes a moment to happen. Falling in love, however, requires thinking and on the occasion, a phone and alcohol. In which Sasuke was not happy when a pale eyed Japanese girl showed up at his apartment and shoved a mobile in his face.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 3 - Words: 10,766 - Reviews: 79 - Favs: 170 - Follows: 48 - Updated: 1/11/2007 - Published: 12/28/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Daring To Bleed by NessieGG reviews
Sequel to 'Right Before His Eyes.' Caught between her past and her present, Tenten has to decide who will be her future. Gaara doesn't want to let go and Neji never did. [Neji x Tenten, Gaara x Tenten triangle] [Complete]
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 10 - Words: 37,504 - Reviews: 267 - Favs: 159 - Follows: 70 - Updated: 12/9/2006 - Published: 8/12/2006 - Tenten, Neji H. - Complete
Look Into My Eyes by Yukishiro Madoka reviews
[AU] [Oneshot] And just that simple yet somewhat long look was enough to make him do something he hadn't done for several years. He looked straight back into her eyes, and he smiled. [SasuHina]
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,659 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 41 - Follows: 6 - Published: 11/3/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U. - Complete
Neji Hyuuga: Matchmaker by emilyjm reviews
Slightly AU. SasuHina, NarSak, LeeTen, ShikaIno. The Hyuugas want to ship off Hinata to another village through marriage, and it's up to Neji to see that they don't.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 16 - Words: 31,278 - Reviews: 582 - Favs: 668 - Follows: 172 - Updated: 10/4/2006 - Published: 7/10/2006 - Sasuke U., Hinata H. - Complete
Petals by NessieGG reviews
The petals can all fall. [Haji x Saya.] [Vignettes.] [Oneshot.]
Blood+ - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,344 - Reviews: 25 - Favs: 49 - Follows: 6 - Published: 10/2/2006 - Complete
Natsume Nullified by November Romeo reviews
Natsume has decided not to ask Mikan to the prom. Everyone's decided that he will. FINAL CHAPTER: What's the matter Natsume? You look completely nullified.
Gakuen Alice - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 10 - Words: 38,280 - Reviews: 551 - Favs: 1,018 - Follows: 177 - Updated: 8/13/2006 - Published: 6/10/2006 - Natsume H., Mikan S. - Complete
Ang Alamat ng Payless by syaoran no hime reviews
Lahat ng bagay ay may pinagmulan... maging ang paboritong meryenda ni Naruto.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - Filipino - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,639 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 47 - Follows: 5 - Published: 4/20/2006 - Complete
Era by uncreative pseudonym reviews
Years after Naruto, something begins to threaten all of the shinobi world. It arises from the world, and it will take the world to stop it. Now if only Sakura and Ino would stop being distracted by Sasuke, and Hinata wasn't trapped in the whole mess...
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 25 - Words: 100,666 - Reviews: 256 - Favs: 224 - Follows: 65 - Updated: 2/21/2006 - Published: 1/3/2005 - Complete
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Yours for the Taking reviews
[AU] Hinata is a painter who lives with her cousin, Neji. Sasuke has more than enough money to last him three lifetimes. They acknowledge their attraction to each other. Yet what's stopping Hinata? SasuHina. NejiTen side story.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 5 - Words: 24,446 - Reviews: 177 - Favs: 121 - Follows: 165 - Updated: 5/18/2007 - Published: 3/6/2007 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Second Best reviews
Chapter IV: Awakening. Finally, Naruto has awakened. But he wasn't the only one that was brought into an awakening. Feelings, good or bad, unwanted or not, surface with uncontrolled vehemence. And it doesn't necessarily have to be connected to Naruto.
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 15,325 - Reviews: 33 - Favs: 16 - Follows: 28 - Updated: 3/31/2007 - Published: 2/4/2007 - Sasuke U., Hinata H.
The Ninja Game reviews
[AU] The cast of Naruto are in senior high school and have suddenly taken an interest in an online game, Ninja. Strong bonds are broken in favor of new ones... for the better, perhaps?
Naruto - Rated: T - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 17,744 - Reviews: 143 - Favs: 73 - Follows: 89 - Updated: 2/23/2007 - Published: 10/23/2006 - Hinata H., Sasuke U.
Reliance reviews
This is what bonds them. This is what breaks them. A Neji x Tenten drabble.
Naruto - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 396 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 5 - Updated: 1/13/2007 - Published: 1/10/2007 - Neji H., Tenten - Complete
Deteriora Sequor reviews
What if the dark side is your only choice? A story about friendship, love, betrayal, and righteousness. [discontinued]
Ragnarok Online - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 7,612 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 8/2/2004 - Published: 6/30/2004 - Complete
The Roundabout Way reviews
A thief changes his path by attempting to become a knight. An elderly knight, with a dark past, helps him. [on hold]
Ragnarok Online - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,670 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 5/29/2004 - Published: 4/26/2004
Jealousy reviews
Leticia Chilcott is useless but has everything. Invidia Shadowmoon is known to be the best in Geffen Academy but no one acknowledges her. Invidia is jealous of Leticia's easy life... and she'll do anything to get what she wants.
Ragnarok Online - Rated: T - English - Angst/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 926 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/5/2004 - Complete
A Poring's Tale reviews
A short story of a poring's journey of the hardknocked life. 'The Pink Blob' is a small poring that grew in South Prontera. Read as the pink poring experiences friendship, love, and finally... death.
Ragnarok Online - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,047 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 3 - Published: 4/16/2004 - Complete