An interesting take on SasuHina. I love this and I can’t get enough of it! I’m rather curious what’ll happen next tho. I think this is more suited to be a multi chapter fic rather than a one-shot but, hey, this works too.

Gg

This needs more reviews, more favorites, more everything. The simplicity in the writing and the attempt at an in-character movement towards relationship is fantastic. I really enjoyed the way that emotions were subtle but present. Thanks for sharing.

Great story.

Oh my God...
I feel sorry for Hanabi...
So sad :'(

i cried. this is so beautiful.

Your should turn this in to a multi chapter story cuz im sold... amazing honestly

And I'm renderred speechless! Lovely one shot :)

This is such a powerful story! WELL DONE! I could NOT stop reading :) Please make a sequel! I would love to see how Hinata and Sasuke's relationship evolved when (if!) she comes back :D Beautiful job!

I really enjoyed this. Though I can't picture Hinata leaving the village to pursue a goal of murder, the idea of her becoming an avenger after witnessing what happened to Sasuke is just... amazing. Great job! Although I apologize for reviewing this story so late in the game.

Ohmigosht that is so sad. :( Sequel?

-Twinklefeather

I completely adored this story although the end was a cliff hanger, love that you made us think!

Breathtaking.

this kinda made me cry. It's so cute. Kinda touching. I just hate it when it ended cause what happens next? you should write a sequel id u haven't already and post it.

loved it ! i somehow hope for a sequel!