MAXIMUM RIDE, FALLING FOR EDWARD?
Summary:
"Why are you so intent on making me fall in love with you? No one care or loves me with the exception on Ariel and my father. So why would you?" I screamed at him. "Because I love you, and I know we are meant to be together." He screamed back, then he kissed me.
CHAPTER 1. MAX P.O.V.
Hey, I'm Max. I'm 5ft-11". Medium brown hair with blond and dark red streaks in it and totally bad-ass. Let's get on with the story.
"Hey guys, what's wrong?" I asked. Let me explain. Everyone in the flock has been looking at me and Angel very sadly, and Angel's about to cry.
"Max, we want you and Angel to leave. Please." Fang asked in anguish.
I couldn't breathe. "Why, if I even have the right's to ask?"
"All you want to do is save the world Max, and we don't want to. Angel, we are tired of having our minds interrupted. So please leave." Fang answered.
I looked at Angel and she nodded. "Alright guys. We'll do this for you, because we love you. But because of what you're asking, we're going to ask you to move on and try to forget us."
They all gulped. "We'll try our best Max, for you and Angel." Nudge said sounding so broken. Everyone looked so torn. Angel and I gave everyone one last hug, and I gave Fang one last kiss. Then I whispered to him, "Please try and move on."
He looked at me with so much anguish and nodded. "As long as you try and move on too Max. For me." He sounds so heart-broken.
I gulped then nodded. I walked over to we're Angel was waiting. We looked back one last time then we left.
After a few minutes Jeb spoke up. Max. What do you want Jeb. Meet me at McDonalds. Yeah, sure, whatever. Then he left my head.
I stopped and looked at Angel. "We are going to meet Jeb and the closest McDonalds. Ok?"
"Ok Max." she said sadly.
"Hey, It'll be ok. We'll survive. At least we know they still love us." I said comfortingly.
She smiled. Then she said confidently, "Of course we will. Who would we be if we didn't."
I felt a surge of pride. "That's my girl." That made her giggle.
When we walked into McDonalds, we saw Jeb with a bunch of food, so we went over and sat down.
He smiled lovingly at Angel and me. "Hello girls. While you eat I'll talk. Ok with you?" He asked.
I nodded and Angel and I dug in.
"Ok girls, I have a proposition for you."
I motioned for him to go on.
"There's a little rainy town in Washington called Forks. We could live there together as a family. Just us three. You could go to school and learn a lot of things. What do you think?" he asked with excitement and hope.
I looked at Angel and she looked at me.
"Please Max. I want to learn and it would keep our minds off of the Flock. And maybe you would be able to move on like Fang asked you to. Please." She begged.
I thought about it. And since Angel hadn't pulled out the bambie eyes, I could actually think. Oh what the heck. Angle and I could actually have a shot at a normal life.
"YAY." She squealed.
At that Jeb grinned. "Know, what are you're names going to be. By the way, I'm you're father and my names Charlie Swan."
Angel and I looked at each other. "Choose each other's name's." we said together.
"Yours is Isabella Marie (Mah-re) Swan, is that ok Max?" Angel asked/said.
"Yep, and yours is Ariel. You can choose you middle name."
"I want my middle name to be Marie too. (remember, Mah-re) Ok Max?"
I smiled. "Ok sweaty."
We looked at Jeb and nodded, signaling we were ready to leave. When he nodded, we went to start our new lives.
~~~~~~~~~~~TIME SKIP~~~~~~~~~~~NAMED TRIBBLES~~~~~~~
Edward's P.O.V.
While I was thinking of a song of writing, Alice suddenly dropped her school books and froze because of her vision.
What I saw made me stop breathing. In Alice's vision was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She had brown hair with natural blond and dark red streaks and slightly wavy. Her eyes were a beautiful brown, but they looked sad. She was about 5ft-11". Her lips were full and pink, with naturally tanned skin. She looked about my age, 17 years old.
Next to her was a little girl. She had blond bouncy curls that went around her head like a halo. She bright blue eyes that looked sad as well. She looked to be at least 9 years old and was 4ft-3". Both of them looked really sad. (remember, he's a mind reader like Angel.)
There was 4 other people in the cave they were in.
(I would re-peat the vision, but ya'll already know what happened.) What they said made me broil with anger. When she kissed the emo-looking guy, I felt jealousy. When they asked one another to move on, I swore to myself that I would get to know the Max girl. Angel and Max looked back looking so sad and torn. Then they left by flying. Holy crap they have wings. After a few minutes, Max stopped then she told Angel they were going to McDonalds. When they entered there was an older looking guy there. When he said what he did, I was ecstatic with happiness and hope.
After Angel and Max talked and, Max said yes. I'm guessing from the girl grinning with happiness. Angel chose Isabella Marie Swan for Max, and Max chose Ariel for Angel. Then they left to come to oh so wonderful Forks. (not the sarcasm) But it actually would be wonderful since Max, um excuse me, Bella was coming to Forks.
Then Alice's vision ended.
When it ended, Alice and I blinked, we looked at each other and smiled.
"Alice, what did you see that's making both you and Edward grin? I felt Edward get jealous over something in your vision," Jasper asked. (Jasper feels emotions)
While Alice told everyone what she saw, I thought of 2 songs for the beautiful girl Max. (I think ya'll know one of the songs, but ya'll find out the other one later on in the story.) After I wrote them down, I played them out on the piano and they sounded perfect for her.
"Well, sound like Edward found himself a girl that he can actually be with. In fact, from all the jealousy and love I felt from him, I would say he's in love. But the question is, will she love you?" Jasper said/asked.
"Yes Jasper, I am in love with the oldest girl, Max. Yes, I can be with her because she won't be so fragile I won't have to worry about breaking her bones. If she doesn't love me, I'll do what I can to prove myself to her."
"I'll help Edward." Said Alice.
"So will I Edward." Rosalie said with a smile.
"You know I'm helping. There'll be fresh meat to pick on." Typical Emmett.
"I'll help." Jasper.
"As will I." Carlisle.
"I will too. It'll be good for you Edward." Esme.
"Thanks guys." I said and smiled. Know to come up with plans to prove myself to her.
Hey guys. So what do you think?
The next chapter will be coming up either this week or next week.
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