Afternoon Sun

AN: Hey! This is my first fanfiction. I'm not asking anyone to be nice, but excuse mistakes, and critique weaknesses!! (AKA. No flames, unless absolutely necessary.)

1. Permission

Renesmee Cullen

"Yes!" I yelled at Jacob. "They really said YES?"

He laughed. "Yes, Nessie, they did. I'm starting tomorrow."

It was Sunday today, and the best day of my life. Jacob had already moved to New Hampshire with us, and now he was coming to the same school as us too! Edward, my father, has always been fairly protective of me, scowling when Jacob is around, trying to keep him as far away from me as he physically could, though it sometimes lead to a glare or two from Bella, my mother, who understands me completely. Apparently.

My name is Renesmee Carlie Cullen. Weirdest name in history, but that's Bella for you. I've recently developed the habit of calling my parents Bella and Edward, for school, and I practice as much as I can, in my head too. I'm seven years old, and I'm never going to turn eight. Frozen at seven. You would think it's not the greatest age to be frozen at, but my 24 chromosomes, as Carlisle has explained to me, made me grow faster than a normal child, making me physically mature. I'm in my late teens, the age not exact.

My big brother/friend/playmate/slave/lover's name is Jacob. He's a werewolf. Edward says they are technically shape-shifters, and corrects me whenever I say the word 'werewolf.' But who cares? They are humans that turn into wolves. Translation? Werewolves. Not shape-shifters. It's too big a word to use on a daily basis anyways, or should I say words? Jacob's all I could ever ask for in a guy, and though Da-Edward is perfect, sometimes perfection can get boring. Jacob's funny, sweet, sensitive, cute-no, adorable and he's even hot!

What else could a girl ever want?

He's been with me my entire life, because he imprinted on me. Translation? He loves me more than the entire world, and he calls me his steel cable, the only thing holding him in this world. See? Told you he was sweet! In a cheesy kind of way...

And now he's coming to my school! I can finally show all those cheap excuses for guys what a real one is. And they will be surprised. Yes...I can just imagine the looks on their faces now when they see my six-foot-seven-inches tall, (and incredibly muscular) love. I don't like the word boyfriend, it seems to casual for the intense amount of love between me and Jacob.

He's going to fit right in with the Cullens. The oh-so-mysterious Cullens, though Jacob's anything but mysterious.

He's just convinced Bella and Edward to allow him to come to school. I think he's either tempted Jasper to keep Edward calm, or he's used the emotional blackmail on Bella, telling her how hard it is for him to spend the eight hours of school without me. I definitely can't wait for Monday.

"This is so great!" I yelled again, straight at his face, causing him to jump. "I love you!"

He laughed again. "I love you too, Nessie, more than anything I've ever loved, even your mother."

I grimaced. I hated it when he told me all over again how he loved Bella, just to annoy me. And then I had to imagine all that pain he went through when Bella chose Edward over him, and that made me sad. I found tears rolling down my cheeks.

"Aww, Nessie!" said Jacob. "I didn't mean to make you cry. I'm sorry," he said sweetly, as he wiped a tear away. I looked up at him, and he flashed an innocent look on his face. I couldn't help but smile, and then I whacked his arm, causing a sting in it. He burst out laughing. "I love you so much," he whispered after he calmed down. "My steel cable."

I laughed. "Holding me on this planet," I said, imitating him with a deep voice. He laughed. I continued, holding up my palm to face the front. "I shall always be by your side."

"Not bad, not bad," he commented. "Though you might want some practice, if you want to get as good as me." I laughed, and hit him again. He grinned widely. "I know," he said. "I'm just soirresistibly funny."

"In your dreams," I said. "Now you try to imitate me."

He nodded, and raised his eyebrows, widening his eyes to make him look happier. "OH EM GEE!" he said in a high, teenage cheerleader voice. "I like, went to the mall with the tiny pixie yesterday, and I like, found this like, awesome pair of shoes!"

I laughed uncontrollably hard, and he smiled, turning his face back to normal. He said he loved making me laugh. "Like, no way!" I said in the same voice as he did, and he chuckled lightly. I looked back at the ocean. We were sitting on the beach. The sunset was so romantic. The way the sun turned the colour of a fresh peach, and the sky changed to match, mixed with orange, yellow and pink. I sighed. "It's Monday tomorrow," I reminded Jacob. "School."

"Yeah," he said. "Do you want me to pick you up?"

"No," I said. "I'll meet you there."

He nodded, and I stood up. "Time for me to go," I told him. "See you."

He smiled and waved at me. I did the same, and then moved towards my orange Lamborghini, squishing myself into the soft black seats, starting the engine, and reversing onto the small, dirt road of La Push. Tomorrow was going to be a big day.

Soooo. How did you like it??

What should I improve? I need a LOT of girl names, for the next few chapters. Boy's names too.

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