I like it...Renesmee didn't seem to think how much it would hurt Jacob to see her kiss another guy so Jacob and Vanessa kissing is karmic.

Needs a sequel

i liked it

I reeeeaaaaaallllyyyy lovvvee your story! :)))

yay go llama song. have yo heard the obama version of it?

Very sweet ending, I like the symbolism of the title, though I think perhaps it was a little too plain as per say and that perhaps you could have complicated it somewhat, put in some extra meaning that Nessie wasn't quite ready to tell perhaps...? Just my suggestions, to add a little fog to the /actua/ meaning. I prefer doing that with all my meanings and symbolisms.

Otherwise, a good ending to a fantastic story. I enjoyed it despite my hatred for Twilight.

Holy Shit i totally thought that alexander was gay! the girl thing was much more shocking. brava

Haha! I like seeing jealous Nessie. It's very funny. And new.

I never thought I would say this but I want to kill Jacob. I know this is your doing. Nessie is his IMPRINT! So I know that wouldn't happen. But still. Don't ever do it again or I will find you, and destroy your comp. Actually I wouldn't because I love this story. Sigh

I really like this story! Great job :)

good

i've never cried so much in my life... (

is she another one lyk vanessa? but i think alex shud hav been a boy only and this tym instead of jake being targeted, nessie shud be targeted u know?

oh...my..godd...alexx...is...a...girl! sheesh! u r my fav. author!

i apologize by timbo, ' its 2 late to apologize, its too late... aw poor jake :(