Hello, Everyone. T.J. here, and sorry if I'm disappointing you, but this is just an A/N.
First things first, I am going to rewrite Traitor. Maybe I've matured (in taste, at least) since high school, which is when I started this, but I have come to loath my work with a passion. Writing this story is no longer something fun to do on the weekends, and it's all do to my own incompetence and lack of coherence. I had no plot really planned in the beginning, and I have a number of threads that have bound me into places I do not want to go.
So, I'm adhering to that great internet policy: Kill it with Fire.
I'm currently rewriting Chapter one, which will be a mix of Chapters one and two. Fortunately, I finally have a Beta, DunmerFromAldRuhn. He's already started calling my out on my laziness. It's great (and motivating. I'd probably be sleeping now if he hadn't encouraged me to get writing.)
So, please bear with me. I really do appreciate the responses I've gotten for my writing, and I am going to make Traitor far better. I actually have a plot planned out, for one thing.
Thank you for all the reviews so far, and I hope you all find Traitor.2 more enjoyable, because I certainly will.
If there is any lingering concerns, opinions, or insights about any plot issues or flaws you have perceived, then there is no time better than right now to voice them. I am overhauling everything, after all.
See you soon,
-T.J.