The Love I have

By:Thowell3

Disclamer: I own nothing. These character belong to the creator of Love Hina. I only came up with this new twist of the story enjoy it. it is a Fairly orginal story

This is only a sample if you want me to contiue R&R people Tell me what you think.

The Love I have

Prologue

9 years ago...

The Darkness was slowly pushed away by flames that came from the dojo where she lived. Her whole family killed by a rival Family. She had lost everything. Her Mother, Her Father, Her sister and all of her fellow class mates. She wanted revenge but she was but a Girl of 6 unable to hold her own angst her sister let alone a army. Her name was Motoko Aoyama and she had lost everything .

All she could do was watch as the flames grew higher around her home. Tears flowing from her eyes. But a snap of a Twig brought her out of it.

"Who goes there" She said trying to sound brave

"Easy their Young one." Said the figure " I am from the Urashima Clan"

Motoko felt a wave of relief she ran to the person and hugged them as tightly as she could.

"Their, Their child. I am here to help you." The Person said " My name is Hina. Please call me Granny though Almost every one dose."

"Mrs. Urashi... Granny Hina ... My family is..." She started before she broke down crying again.

"It's ok dear. I'll take you some where you can stay." Hina Started " You will be staying with my Son Keisuke his wife Emi , His son Keitaro and his adopted Daughter Kanako."

The young girl sniffled "For how long will I be staying with them?" She asked

"Till we can find a relative that can take you in and if we cannot then you will stay with the family."

Motoko looked up but at Hina still holding on to her will a fair bit of might

"But what if they do not like me?" she asked nervous about living with a new family.

"Don't worry child they will like you. You will be the second daughter they never had." Hina Replied " Now come child we have a long journey ahead of us"

With that Hina and Motoko walked away from her formal life and towards a new family.

7 years later:

13 year old Motoko was just getting home from school. She was extremely tired and was waiting to hear if Keitaro got into Tokyo University.

As she came in the door she was greeted by the woman that had taken her in all those years ago and had treated her like a daughter.

"Welcome home Motoko. How was school?" Emi asked

"Fine thank you. Any news yet about Keitaro getting in or not?" She asked as casual as she could

"Not yet but he should be home soon." She replied

A few second later Kanako came threw the door

"Hello Mother ... and Motoko" she said showing her hate for her would be foster sister

"Hello Daughter . How was school?" Her mother asked completely oblivious to the hate that Kanako had for Motoko.

"Good mother Any news about Keitaro yet?" Kanako asked

"Not yet but he will be back soon" Motoko answered

Kanako turned and glared at her with eyes that said 'Shut up I wasent asking you'

"Thank you for telling me Motoko please tell me when big brother Comes home will you?"

Kanako walked out of the room and up to her room

The hate that ran between Motoko and Kanako was all over Keitaro. Both loved him. They both wanted to never leave him and have many children with him but he was so stupid at times he never noticed.

After another 10 minutes of waiting Keitaro Burst threw the front door wooping and wooting

"I GOT IN. I GOT IN TO TOKYO U."

Keitaro's mother got up and gave him a big hug " I am So proud of you son" she said as she concluded the hug.

Motoko was about to give him a hug when Kanako pushed her out of the way and gave Keitaro a big Hug.

"Congratulations big brother" Kanako Murmured softly

"Thanks Kanako" Keitaro responded then Keitaro looked over at Motoko

"Come Motoko you can give me a hug to if you like" Keitaro said in a Teasing voice

Motoko came over smacked him on the head with 2 fingers calling him a "Baka" and Then gave him a large hug.

She was happy for Keitaro

Present Day

Motoko was Living at Hinata-sou . She had not seen Keitaro in a year. He had left to America to learn more. She had moved into the Dorm that Granny Hina had set up. And was still dreaming of Keitaro. Not knowing what the Near Future Had in store...

That is the prologue. If you think I should write more please tell me I want to know your imput R&R please.