Hey people whats up? Well I reread this story and the beginning of it SUCKED! I had so many grammar problems so I thought, hey why don't I fix it up a bit, make it better.
Well here we go!!
"Hey whats wrong Sakura-chan?" asked Naruto as she slurped down his tenth bowl of ramen he had today.
Over the years Naruto realized his crush on Sakura was nothing more than an extreme case of friend ship. Knowing his feelings would never be return as long as she loves Sasuke. So they grew closer as a brother and a sister.
"Yea ugly your normally never this quiet." Sai said, he is Sasuke replacement if you didnt know that you probably did though.
Sakura grew silent, as she played with her Ramen swirling it around in her bowl. "Sakura-chan?" Its around that time again. Around when Sasuke left her on that damn bench. Also when the three year period of Orochimarus body needs changing, sounds like he needs a diaper change werid. We better find that teme quiet before its too late.Naruto thought worried for his friend.
"Sorry guys but I have to go to my next shift Tsunade-shisho (sp?) has me on a tight shift lately I gotta go bye," with that she paid for her ramen and left.
"Sakura-chan..." "hmmm... Sakura-san is planning something, I can tell it in her eyes." he turned to face Naruto. "Naruto-kun you should keep an eye on her just in case."
"Yeah I can tell too." Naruto paided for his ramen and left following Sakura like the good ninja he is.
Hmmm Sakura-chan was lying, but what exactly is she up too. he thought.
Sakura POV
I knew Naruto is following me, but I couldn't let it bother me I had better things to worry about. God I couldn't get the last mission out of my head what am I going to do?!
Flashback
"Danmn that Orochimaru!! He'll get a new body soon we have to stop him!!" yelled Kisame.
"Hn he would pose a threat if he takes over my brothers body. He has definatly gotton stronger I will admit..." Itachi said in monotone.
"What do you suppose we do?"
"Our leader told us to go after Orochimaru and postpone trying to capture the Kyuubi "
"What will you do about your eye?s Right now Sasuke's are ten times stronger than yous."Kisame said in a cocky tone like always
"Hn...there is a Kunochi (sp?)in the hidden leaf village , she is Tsunade's apprentice, also she has surpassed her talents. Plus I also know that my little brother has taken a liking to her. And she is in the bushes over there." Itachi said as he glanced in her direction. The then heared a tiny gasp.
"Don't worry we wont hurt so come out." He said still in monotone.
Sakura comes out of the bushes kunai in hand. "Haruno Sakura, apprentice of the fifth Hokage would you like to join the Akatsuki?" He said with an emotionless face.
"Why the hell would i join you how would I benefit from it?" she said with a huge smirk on her face. Like she would ever join them ha!
Until she heard the word that would make her join. "Because we know th exact location of Orochimaru." Sakura backs up not beleiveing Itachi. Itachi does a smirk. "We'll give you one week to decide. Come to the village gates when night falls. It is your choice to tell anyone of or meeting here." he said a little cocky a little too cocky. With that Itachi and Kisame disappeared
End of flashback
Maybe I could just be a spy, but I don't want to go in there alone. Naruto! I'll talk it over with him. I stopped and turn around.
Normal POV
Cascade met emerald. "Naruto come to my apparartment, tell no one ok?" she ,ade a hand seal and disappeared leavinf a dumb founded Naruto. "Sakura-chan?" I guess Sai was right.With that Naruto then disappeared.
A few moments later there was a knock on Sakura's door. She walked over to it and opened it for Naruto. "alright Sakura-chan what the hell is going on?" He said as he walked in.
"Alright." she closed the door behind him, shutting it tightly, than everything else and walked over to the couch where Naruto is. "Ok, I met up with the Akatsuki on my last misson." she said asb she bracedherself for his outburst.
"WHAT ARE YOU ALRIGHT IF THEY HURT YOU THEY WILL NEVER BE MEN AGAIN!!!! "
"Yes Naruto I'm fine, they just wanted to talk."
"Did you tell anyone?" he asked calming down. "
"No i havent and I don't plan on it either."
"Sakura-chan!! We have to tell Tsunade-baa-chan."
"Naruto this amonst ourselfs you cant tell anyone including Hinata." she said in a firm voice.
"But-"
"I'll explain, you see they know where orochimaru is," Naruto stared at her blankly, then said:
"So what does this mean?" "
They want me to join them."
"No sakura-chan don't I cant bare to lose another close friend!! and I dont want to see you get hurt!"
"Dont woory Naruto I'm going in as a spy."
"Iam so not letting you go in there alone BELIEVE IT!" he yelled with worry in his voice.
"Thats what I was hoping for,"
"What?!" he siad dumbfoudly.
"I really didnt want to go in there alone Itachi scares the crap out of me."
"agreed." Naruto shivered.
"remains me of the Teme huh?"
"Yea..."
"Alright Sakura-chan when do we leave?"
"Tonight, Itachi said he'll meet us at the village gates."
"got it better go pack."
"yep and thanks Naruto it means a lot to know you'll be there with me."
"anytime Sakura-chan I/ll always be there to protect my sister." He said giving her a hug.
"come back here once its dark kay?"
"Yep got it."
"Oh and Naruto make sure you pack a lot of ramen."
"I was already thinking that you know what they say great minds think alike."
"Heehe see yah Naruto." They went their separate ways, Sakura walking towards her home to pack, Naruto to his.
Well that's the corrections to Chapter 1 of Betrayal led to love