Kiss in the Rain

Chapter 11

Kiss in the Rain

Disclaimer: I do not own any of these chacthers or setting. I only own the plot. I wish I own the story though.

The last chapter of the story finally. I am so happy I finished it. I am so happy about all of the wonderful review I have gotten. I just want to say thank you for all the support. Like to thank Ginger for being my beta for chapters 4-9.


They were fished, finally. Zoey and Nicole had went down stairs to get something to drink. They said they were thirsty. I didn't know laughing and hanging out with your friends was could make you thirsty. I don't think Zoey was really thirsty though I think she wanted to see Chase and Nicole didn't take a hint. Well, that is Nicole for you. I looked in the mirror again. I have to say I look cute. I twirled one of my curls. Wow I am different. Last month I would have never thought of wearing this or going out with a boy. This past few days that is what has been on my mind. While one boy mostly. Logan. How about that other boy what I am supposed to tell him? I looked at the clock. It was 6:03. I have a while. I took out a piece of paper and a pencil.

Dear 2Cute4U,

I just wanted to tell you think you. You made me feel as if someone really liked me and gave me the courage to talk to a certain boy I like. Logan. You might know him. I hope we may still be friends after this whole episode. You were kind and sweet to me. Most boys come out rude. Logan used to but well, he is different now. I wonder if it was just for show. I am sorry to tell you this and now when you just had the courage to come and tell me you like me face to face. I feel very bad about this and I hope you would understand. I am going to make my dreams come true and go after Logan. I really mean make my dreams come true. I know it is silly to dream about him sometimes you just cannot stop yourself. I hope he likes me too. I hope me and him soon become a couple. Once again, I am sorry for leading you on and then turning you down. I enjoyed knowing you for the past few days.

From Dana

The door opened and I stuff the letter inside my purse.

"Hey where is Zoey?" I asked Nicole as she closed the door.

"I don't know she like ran away from me," Nicole said and then drinking from her water bottle. She give me one.

"Thanks," I said before opening it. Maybe you you can get thirsty well having fun.

"I wonder where she went?" Nicole said while sitting down. I could only guess one place I thought smirking. "Well Dana you have to get going," Nicole said while pulling out a book. I think her dairy.

I looked t he clock it was 6:15. I have to go!

"Good Luck and don't forget the plan!" Nicole yelled.

"Bye!" I said and rushed out with my purse.

I dashed though the hallways. I saw Zoey coming from around the conner. I stop.

"Hey, you are going, already?" Zoey asked.

"Yeah, so how is Chase?" I asked while smirking.

"What are you talking about?" Zoey asked while turning red. Boy she so not good at lying.

"Right. Well, I got to go," I said.

"Okay. Bye," Zoey said as I was leaving.

I took a deep breath and wanted to read that letter again. After reading it a second time I realized I was telling him to much. I rather just tell him face to face without telling him I like Logan. I was so scared. I started to walk slower. Should I go see Logan after all of this? I stuffed the note in my purse. I thought of throwing it out but if someone came to read it it be all over school. I just burn when I get back to my room. I most likely could just cut it up in a million of little pieces I thought later.

I looked down to see what I was wearing. A yellow halter top dress. It was Zoey because I don't own yellow but it fit me perfectly. I might start buying clothes like this. It was a little above my knees. I had on small heels that were white with a yellow butterfly in the center of each of them. I had on a big beaded necklace that came to about my stomach. It looked cute. My hair was in twisties and it looked good since my hair was curly. I took a deep breath and walked outside. It looked like rain. I hope it doesn't come to soon. I sat down a waited. My heart was beating fast. I was so scared. I put my head down to take a deep breath and come down myself down. I felt a tap on my shoulder. I looked up it was Logan. I wonder what he is doing...what. Could it be. No he wouldn't. Wait. I put it together. It was Logan. Was he for real. Did he really like me? Or was all a joke like at lunch? It probably was and me being the fool believe it. I got up then slapped him. Real hard. I ran off before he could say anything. I heard him tell me to wait before I got inside. I took a last look back. He didn't run after me. He just sat down and put his head on the table.

When I got inside I stop running. I sat down on the floor in the the hallways and took a few breaths. I wasn't crying heavily. I was just tearing. I wonder if he likes me. Wait..that letter that I found. He was saying sorry and that he liked me. He knew I would be mad. He really wanted to ask me out. I went to reach for my purse to fix my make-up. I didn't want to show-up back up at the room after crying. I am just going to tell them I did speak to 2Cute4U. Then will tell them I was to scared to see Logan. I still like a little Logan even-though. I realized I can't stop myself from liking myself. There past days I tried to and it didn't work. I just came back to liking him again and again. We almost kiss too. I could say this week wasn't a complete waste. Wait where is my purse? Oh shit! I left it outside. I could get in an hour I thought. Then I heard it starting to rain. I ran to get it before it stared to pour. I hope Logan left already.

When I reached to table Logan was there. He reading the note I had written. I rush to him and pulled it out of his hands. I think he was about done too.

"What is your problem?" I asked not waiting for an answer. " Do respect people stuff. First my dairy and now you are going into my purse?" I went to slap him again but he caught my hand.

"I don't have a problem!"

"I could say different. Why did you lie to me and acted like somebody else. You had to wait till today to tell me it was you?" I asked yelling at him.

"I tried to tell you," he said in a normal voice.

"When?" I asked not believing.

"The day at the beach right before I read your dairy. On the computer when we planned that we were going to met but you signed-off. In class. In lunch twice today. When I showed up at our room. I just kept saying something or doing something stupid." He said while looking down at the ground.

"Why did you keep saying something stupid?"I asked calmly.

"Because when I am around you I get nervous. I forget my words. Then say something that is stupid," he said. When he finished we connected eyes.

I walked away feeling speechless.

"Dana wait!" Logan yelled at me. I turn around.

"Is that true?" he asked pointing to the note.

"What?" I asked making-believed I didn't know what he was talking about.

"Do you like me?" he asked.

I didn't speak. I didn't move.

"Just say it!" he yelled at me.

I didn't do nothing at all. I couldn't. I didn't understand why. My eyes begin no tear. My face was going hot. It was getting harder to take a breath.

"Just say it," Logan said while lowing his voice and walking toward me.

"How about you say it!" I yelled.

He grabbed me and pulled me closer. We were kissing in the rain. The rain made every thing perfect. My make-up is a mess and my hair a mess by now too. The water running down my face. I look horrible...and felt horrible for screaming at him too but once our lips met all of that is gone. For that split-second in time it seems like the earth has paused just for me and him. They way the water hit my face felt so good. The way it hit our bodies and made noises as it hit the ground. It sounded as mother earth was playing a song for us and only us. I pulled his face closer to mine, making sure our lips never loss contact. When we pull apart I heard everything, the rain falling, his breath is my face, the wind everything single detail. Then I was happy again and all my problems are gone. We just stood there looking at each other entwined in each other arms, while I was smiling at him.

"So I take that as you like me?" Logan asked.

"Yeah," I asked grinning.

"That is good. Well, I got to go. I call you later."

"Okay," I said while giving him and small peck on the lips. I walked back to my room happily.


While it is finished. I will be writing a 2nd part because people told me that they had wanted me to continuing with Logan and Dana's relationship. The story is going to be called: Are they ready For Love?

Summary: Can the girls get their boys? Or are the boys not ready for love? Will the girls get what they want or let them skip though their fingers?

What it is going to be about:

Chase and Zoey:

Their first date.

Zoey feels like Chase is just treating her only like a friend.

Dana and Logan :

Well Logan stop flirting with girls.

Are they going to go out. Or do they already do?

Is Logan ready to have a steady relationship?

Nicole and Glen:

Was Glen talking about Nicole or someone else?

Is Nicole going to go after Glen before other girl does?