AN: This is my very first work, please review in order to let me know that you either enjoyed my work, or disliked my work, and for what reason. I do not wish for someone to review "OMG this story sucks go kys dumbass". Even a simple "The story wasn't bad" would mean a lot to me. I'll try to update consistently, if I have the inspiration. I'm open to having someone help edit my story, if someone is available and willing to help. All who wish to take on this role only need to either leave a review about being an editor or send an email to my account.
Thank you.
"This" = Talking
"Is" = Thinking/Emphasizing Words
"His" = Attacks/Moves
"Story" = Scene Shift
This is the story of a young man, a young man named Jacob. But, before we get to his story, we must first gain an understanding of the land above which he lives... a land called Celestia. Celestia is a land of floating landmasses, hidden high above the clouds, a land only the divine can access.
For hundreds of years, four women fought against each other on this landmass. These four women are what common folk such as you and I would refer to as goddesses, leaders of their own nations that they had long since abandoned to do battle above the clouds. The four women were known as Green Heart, White Heart, Black Heart, and Purple Heart. The goddesses fought for supremacy, wishing to be the one true goddess to rule everything, from the fish in the sea to the people on the land.
We cut to their latest battle, the battle that broke the camel's back, in a figurative way. The four goddesses panted as they split apart, the fight for today more aggressive then the day before, an ever-spiraling conflict. Suddenly, an unknown voice spoke up, holding the goddesses back from engaging in another clash. "Hmm. If you all wish for change, then someone must take the initiative. May I suggest teaming up to get rid of one among you"
The goddesses, already growing tired of the many years of fighting, voiced their agreement, all except for one, Purple Heart. The voice did not reveal itself to Purple Heart, thus leaving all the other goddesses collude amongst themselves. Suddenly, as if a spark had suddenly lit a flame, the 3 colluding goddesses charged at Purple Heart, shouting insults and cries of anger, as if to release the stress of fighting for hundreds of years. Purple Heart was shocked at the turn of events, the fair free for all fighting suddenly turned against her at a moment's notice, leaving her to fight an unwinnable battle, however strong she was.
After Purple Heart lost her weapon, Black Heart moved in for the finisher, and without a weapon to defend herself, Purple Heart was left to block the attack with her arms, leaving her to get flung off the landmass towards the land below, the land known as GameIndustry, the land which the four goddesses originally ruled over. Purple Heart, while falling had the white light encapsulate her and reduce her to a form that she had not used in a long time. Her human form.
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"Jeez why is it so dark here?" The human form of Purple Heart asked to herself, not able to see anywhere at all due to the darkness. "Why am I glowing like florescent paint? Oh! I know, it must be my awesomeness radiating off of me, lighting my way!" The purple haired goddess commented, putting on a brave face despite her worry at the situation. "So, uh, do I need to wait for an event or more text boxes to show up or something? Because I'm not seeing what I'm supposed to be doing yet"
"I'm getting to that, gosh, don't interrupt my story" The author scolded "And stop breaking the fourth wall!"
"No way Jose, I'm the protagonist of this story, and my defining quirk is breaking the fourth wall!" Little did Neptune know, however, that she was not the main character of this story, a teenager named Jacob was. "Wait whad'ya mean I'm not the protagonist! This must be one of those angsty Fanfictions with angsty OC's getting a harem for no reason at all"
Suddenly, a voice made itself known, a soft, gentle sounding voice. "Hello, sorry for the delay. Have you been here long"
"Not very long, just been arguing with the author dude, what's up?"
"I do not know who you mean by this "Author" character, I can assure you you've been alone in this space," the voice replied. "My name is Histoire, you have recently fell from Celestia and request a favor from you"
"I fell?! Oh no, I'm totally dead, aren't I? I forgot to finish my backlog of games and save my game. And fell? Do you mean I'm going to hell? Please no Histy, please don't make me go to hell!"
"You are not dead Neptune, merely unconscious. I need to you to lend me your powers. Please stop Arfo... and put... end to the... Console War" Histoire's voice faded out, leaving Neptune alone, once again in the dark space of her mind.
Neptune suddenly woke up, and immediately had to close her eyes from the brightness. After slowly adjusting herself to the light, Neptune opened her eyes and looked around, not recognizing her surroundings, the room very pink, so likely a girl's room. Neptune heard a loud voice from her left, and looked to see a very... peach woman. Her hair was the color of peaches, and her clothes as well. The only accessories she wore that weren't pink were her choker with a pink heart, and her belt with, again, pink hearts.
Although, in the corner of the room was a handsome male with short, brown hair, a soft face, and hazel eyes. He wore robes not unlike a mage would in an RPG, and carried what appeared to be a staff that. Again, a mage would wield in an RPG, with a crystal ball and all on top. The woman introduced herself as Compa, and the male introduced himself as Jacob. Jacob began to talk, a soft voice to complement his soft appearance. "Me and Compa, we found you stuck in the ground like Excalibur, like in the stories of old. Compa pulled you out and brought you here, and we worked together to bandage your wounds, although Compa bandaged your, you know" Jacob blushed, his mind coming back to the brief moment he saw the young lady's woman hood, before looking away and being pushed out the room by Compa
"Yep, you fell like a shooting star and I went to investigate with Jakey, and we found you stuck in the ground like Soul ***e. So, what's your name mysterious person?" Compa said, explaining the parts that Jacob left out
"I am Neptune! Protagonist of all protagonists! Nice to meetcha!"
Jacob replied "And you as well Neptune."
"Nice to meetcha Nepu... Netan... Nepo... ?" Compa stammered out, seemingly unable to say Neptune's name
"NepNep, Neppers, Neptuna, it doesn't matter, call me what you want"
"NepNep it is! Nice to meet you NepNep!" Compa replied back, happy to have a nickname for the new girl "So, NepNep? What do you remember before being stuck in the ground?"
"Weirdly enough, I don't remember anything. Wow, that's super-duper plot convenient"
"It seems to be a case of amnesia. Sadly though, I don't know any cure for it, so we'll just take care of you until the time your memories come back"
Suddenly, a growl erupted from Neptunes stomach, causing her to blush. "So, uh, could I have some food? I'm super hungry"
Compa replied, face full with smiles "Sure NepNep! Do you want a pudding?"
"What's a pudding?"
Suddenly, the door reopens, and Jacob walks back in, a pudding and spoon in hand. Neptune sits shell-shocked, having not even noticed the teenager walk out to grab the pudding. "Here you go, Neptune, this is pudding"
"Woah, that was super cool! Are you like, a ninja mage or something? That's super broken!"
"No, no, nothing as cool as that. You just didn't notice me walk out because you were so engrossed in your chat with Compa".
Neptune took the pudding and spoon from Jacob, before poking it with her spoon. Neptune recoiled when it jiggled, obviously not have seen pudding before. Neptune took a scoop of the pudding and ate it, before her eyes turned into stars and droll starting to leak out of her mouth. Neptune devoured the rest of the pudding, not even leaving time for anyone to stop her. "Woah, whoever made this must be a pudding master"
"Actually, I made it myself" Jacob said, gaining Neptunes interest. Suddenly, without warning Neptune jumped out of bed towards Jacob, knocking him over and sitting on his stomach, her hands to the sides of his head. Neptune was awash by how innocent he looked, her eyes changing from stars to hearts, wanting to kiss him just because of how cute his face was. The fact that he was panting, face red and all didn't help matters. "I'll like, totally marry you if you make me that pudding forever"
"Well uh, Jakey can't make pudding with you on top of him" Compa interjected. Neptune, as if suddenly reminded that there was another person in the room, flies back to the bed at Mach-speeds, hiding under the covers in embarrassment of what she just said and what she was secretly thinking. Both Compa and Jacob both laughed, though Jacob was still out of breath from the purple missile.
Jacob, after catching his breath brought up a topic of discussion. "Neptune, if you'd like we could take you back to where you landed, maybe you could remember something by going there?"
"Hey buster, I feel like that's something I should've said! But yeah, you're probably right."
And so, my very first chapter closes out on Compa, Neptune and my OC Jacob going to the crash site. As I little forewarning, this story is going to be my attempt on a harem fanfiction, and the woman in this story are going to be much more aggressive, and by that I mean more molesty, stuff like that. I won't be writing Lemons, because I literally don't have the ability to do that, but if someone would be willing to write a lemon for me, let me know either in the reviews or directly by PM.
ChaosJeff, Signing off!