Authoress' note: Okay... so I've been doing some serious thinking about this story. This is a lot harder to write than my other fanfics, and I think I know why.

It's not organized.

I feel like this story is being dragged out. First I completely start over, then I add more characters, then we are over 10 chapters in and Grace doesn't even know Bendy exists.

This is a mess.

So here's what I'm gonna do.

I am going to either start the story over again (though unlikely) or make some heavy modifications. I'm already plotting out each individual chapter so that the story will be more smooth, and we can get to the important scenes quicker. There are a lot of important scenes I'm not even close too right now. But I wanna hear from you people. Are there any events you want to see happen? Any advice on dialogue or character encounters? Do you want this a super long story or fairly moderate? How do you want Grace and Bendy to meet? Any current scenes you want me to keep and any you want taken out (the hiking scene stays, btw)

So, tell me your thoughts and I'll put them into consideration

In the meantime, brush your teeth, hug your Oswald Plushie, and always beware the ink demon.