Regarding this story, it will be deleted. After some deliberate talk with my beta and pondering on it, yes, the flaws are many and I don't have a real goal or anything other than "have Naruto be Blake's dad" for the funsies.
Thus, I decided to cancel this story.
I know many of you will be mad, and I won't blame you if you put any intentionally hurtful words against me for this. Hell, at this point I'm sure I'll get that no matter what I do even if I bend over backwards to try to please everyone.
So, what will I do?
There was a MUCH earlier drawing for this idea which instead of having Naruto as Blake's dad had another character from a different franchise I know and love:
KIRYU KAZUMA
So, after pondering to myself how I could've done this, I am willing to give this a try rather than try to keep alive a story which has no substance.