Chapter 1-(Rewrite.)

Hey everyone I've read some reviews and I've decided to do some changes to the story if you have any suggestions please let me known. And I'd like to thank Neostardustdragon101 for helping with this rewrite.

It was a warm night in the leaf village, the sun was just going down, it was starting to dim. A town lights were coming up and we still could see many people going around the village doing their business. Unlike many other villages, even though Konoha was the most powerful village in the elemental nations it didn't seem militaristic or cold. Many people if they saw Konoha would say that it wasn't a shinobi village, however the mountain that surrounded the north part of village was a dead giveaway. In it were carved the faces of the most powerful shinobi to ever live.

It was October 10th, the village was covered in decorations and celebrating the defeat to the Kyuubi that attacked 5 years ago. Everyone in the village was happy, it were times of peace. The wars were long forgotten, but not the hate and pain of many that were lost. Although everyone seemed happy one particular kid was very sad and lonely.

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Naruto Uzumaki laid in his apartment laying down his head in his bed looking over to his dresser was his Shinobi Headband. He had received it from his surrogate older brother Iruka for mastering the Shadow Clone Jutus and defeating the traitor Mizuki.

But even so it didn't help fill the loneliness he was feeling on this day. Every year on his birthday the villagers would take any chance to beat him like a wild animal and torment him. But lucky for him his status as a Shinobi scared most of them off, but that didn't stop them from vandalizing his apartment.

As Naruto laid in his bed he felt this dreadful burning sensation running through his body. He twisted an turned as sweat ran down his body.

'What's wrong with me? It feels like my body is burning up!' Naruto thought as he felt his eyelids begin to close.

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Naruto's eyes soon shout open to find himself in what it seemed to be a sewer. There were pipes in every wall and water nearly flooding the room. He wondered through the endless corridors wondering where he was when he heard a soft male voice calling him.

"Follow my voice" - the strange voice said. Naruto didn't know him but was drawn to this voice.

After walking for a couple of minutes Naruto found himself staring at a big iron doors with verticals bars. The middle of the door it was a small paper with the kanji for 'Seal'. He looked inside the cage but it seemed empty.

"I have been waiting a while to meet my jailer." Spoke a deep menacing voice.

"That voice...are..your the Nine-tailes!" Naruto exclaimed in disbelief.

"That's right, and i feel that the time has come for you and I to finally meet, step forward Naruto." Kyuubi said as he assured the boy closer.

Naruto was hesitant but slowly approached the seal.

"No need to fear me kit" The Kyuubi said watching the poor kid. He knew too well what the villagers did to him.

Naruto took a deep slow and walked up to the cage placed his hand onto the seal and suddenly a massive wave of crimson red chakra began to pour out consuming Naruto's body as the boy cried out.

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The blond Jinchuriki slowly rose up from his bed clenching his chest as he ripped his shirt open revealing the burning red seal on his chest as several marks began to cover his body as he fell to his knees breathing heavily as he felt this odd surge of power running through him.

"Calm yourself Naruto this is all natural just let the power flow through you." The Kyuubi said easing the boy as he working through the pain.

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It was a beautiful day in Konaha. The sun was shining brightly above,birds and bees flew about, and our even more beautiful Hyuga heiress was strolling down the streets. Hinata Hyuga was an extremely beautiful young woman. The young 14 year old had just graduated from the ShHinatabi Academy her silk midnight blue hair was tide into a ponytail, her lips shining with black lipstick, the Hyuga Heiress wore sleeveless fishnet mesh shirt that showed off her well developed breasts a pair of dark shorts that hugged her, firm round ass and showed off her long shapely legs and knee-length boot.

Despite coming from Knoha's most prestigious clan, Hinata was nothing like the Hyuga's many would compare her to a younger version of Anko the snake mistress, many people in Konoha had fallen Victims to Hinata's cruel torturous pranks. Many people had pondered on how the once shy and timid little girl had changed so much.

As Hinata walked towards the Academy she noticed someone close by at the nearby training field, she glared as she saw it was Naruto Uzumaki, Hinata hated the young blond more than anything, when she was younger she had a small crush on Naruto but that all changed after she had been disowned by her father and left to fend for herself. Everyday she would see Naruto bragging about his dream to become Hokage and how he was gonna to gain everyone's acknowledgement one day, it all ways reminded her of how she wanted her father to acknowledge her. To her Uzumaki was nothing but a constant reminder of the worthless failure she use to be.

She his behind a nearby tree and watched as Naruto drove punch after punch into a nearby tree. Sweat falling down his,body causing his muscles to glistened as the sun shined down on him Hinata couldn't deny that Naruto had a rather well developed body for a young man he had a rock hard six pack and abs, he usual spiked blond hair now hung down coated in sweat. Hinata watched as Naruto soon began going through several exercises such a push ups sit ups, he used as nearby tree from pull ups. Hinata felt a strange warmth as her hand reached down to her lower regions.

Naruto wiped off the sweat from his forhead and fixed his hair before putting on his hideous orange jumpsuit and walked towards the Academy.

"Hey Uzumaki!" Hinata shouted.

"Yes Hinata-chan?" Naruto said smiling at the Hyuga Heiresses.

"What are you doing, didn't you fail your final exam two weeks ago?" Hinata said with an arrogant smirk crossing her arms.

"Yeah, but I learned this really awesome Jutsu and Iruka-ni-san let me pass!" Naruto said with excitement.

"What Jutsu?" Hinata asked.

"The Kage Bushin." Naruto said proudly with his hands on his hips, his smile soon fell as her hears the sounds of Hinata's soft giggles which soon turned into full blown laughter.

"You've got to be joking a dope like you learned a Jutsu created by the Second Hokage there's no way. Even some of the most elite Jonin can pull that off so how could a dead last loser like you do it?" Hinata said

"I can so do it!" Naruto argued. "I've gotten a lot stronger

"You couldn't even beat that lazy bum!" She yelled pointing to Shikamaru.

"I'm going to kick Sasuke-teme's ass." Naruto shouted

"Oh really?" Hinata said with a raised eyebrow.

"I bet you I can!" He yelled in Hinatas face, having walked over to her sending the Hyuga girl an angry glare which she was more than happy to return.

The bell soon rang and Naruto and Hinata sat through classes until it was time for class sparing. Naruto and Sasuke stepped up to the center ring.

"Alright teme! To days the day I finally take you down!" Naruto said clenching his fist while Sasuke simply scoffed him off.

"Don't make me laugh dope." Sasuke replied, unconcerned about Naruto as a serious threat.

Angry at the other boy's lack of emotion Naruto ran forward quickly throwing a punch.

Sasuke seeing the punch coming merely twisted aside to let the punch pass before reaching out to grab the other boys arm throwing him away.

"Yeah! Go Sasuke-kun!" Sasuke's fan-club namely Sakura and Ino cheered and yelled as they're lover boy easily threw down the class clown.

Hinata leaned against the wall with confident smirk on her face knowing that soon enough Naruto would be her slave, and once she was done with him the poor boy would be her slave for life. And after him she would work her magic on that bastard Uchiha who had tried hitting on her numerous times in the past, Sasuke's very presence made her sick to her stomach always looking at her like she was a raw piece of meat he could play around with. But when she was done he'd be nothing but priceless loser she can toy around with and torture to her hearts content.

Crashing into the ground Naruto got up and charged again this time trying to kick Sasuke, only to have his leg caught again and be thrown into a tree. Naruto slowly got off the ground wiping away the blood that fell from his mouth and glared at Sasuke who had an arrogant smirk on his face.

'Alright Naruto, its time to show this teme what you've really got." Naruto said preforming a few hand signs before bringing them into a cross sign. "Kage Bushin no Jutsu" (Shadow Clone Technique) Naruto announced as several copies of him self appeared from a cloud of smoke shocking not only Sasuke but the rest of the class as well. "Alright guys, let's take teme down!" The clones nodded as the charged towards Sasuke who pulled out a few shuriken stars launching them towards his clones causing two of them explode into a cloud of smoke. Before Sasuke knew if Naruto appeared through the smoke sending a hard right hook across Sasuke's cheek sending him skidding across the ground floor knocking him into a tree. The entire class was in shock at what they had just seen the class's dead last had just beaten the rookie of the year.

Iruka smiled with pride at his little brother he knew Anko was gonna be happy to here he'd finally took down the Uchiha.

(Training Ground 12)

Naruto and Hinata had left the academy and arrived at the nearby Training Ground. This was Hinata's own personal training spot where she could train with no distractions and no annoying pest bugging her.

"I have to say Uzumaki, I'm actually impressed with your feet at school today." Hinata said smiling with her back to Naruto.

"Well thanks Hina.." Naruto was cut off by a hard glare from the Hyuga Princess.

"Which is why I'd like to make you a proposition." Hinata said with a smirk. Naruto felt a shiver up his spine not liking the the look Hinata's eyes.

"What kind of proposition?" Naruto asked with a raised eyebrow.

"How about you and I have a sparring match?" Hinata replied surprising Naruto.

"A sparring match?" Naruto said with a raised eyebrow.

"Yes, and how about we make this a little bit more interesting." Hinata said. "If you manage to defeat me...I'll be your slave for a week." Hinata said shocking Naruto that she would make such a wager.

"Um...and if I lose..." Naruto said taking a large gulped fearful of what plans his childhood bully had for him.

"Then you'll be my slave for a week, and you can bet it'll be enjoyable..." Hinata said in sultry grin licking her lips. "For me. So deal." Hinata asked holding out her hand, Naruto was hesitant at first but reached out and shook the girls hand.

"Deal." Naruto said.

"Good, meet me hear tomorrow, at 12:00 sharp." Hinata said walking away with a sway in her hips. Naruto's eyes couldn't help but be drawn the 15 year old girls butt being squeezed by her tight pants.

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Hinata walked into her personal apartment room, since she started the academy she had moved out of the academy, which was a relief to the clan who felt she would be a bad influence on her twin sister Hanabi, while Hinata had taken after her mother Hanabi was the female version of her father Haishi. There was a time when the two of them had gotten along like sisters but as time passed Hanabi was being seen as the next clan head do too her exceptional skill with the gentle fist. But Hinata had come and surprised them all with her own more vicious style.

Hinata stripped off her clothes and laid down on her bed, a dark grin on her face as she awaited tomorrow...the day she would crush Naruto Uzmaki and make him her slave. The thought of him serving her as he faithful servant sent a shiver down her back she imagined him kneeling at her feet licking her boots clean, whipping that annoying firey spirt out of him. When she was done Uzumaki would live only to please her as her personal toy licking her pussy and ass when ever she demanded it.

Little did she know he confidence would not last.

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(Training Groud Twelve.)

Naruto and Hinata stood in the center of the training field one teen awaiting the other to make their move.

"I really didn't want to fight." Naruto said before shifting his body backwards into a defensive stance. "At least I can test my skills."

A flurry of punches and kicks came sauntering at Naruto from the Hyuga Kunoichi as Naruto blocked and parried them all with little to no effort it seemed.

"You have to come harder than that if you want to hit me." said Naruto blocking Hinata's kick before pushing it away with force, sending the girl skidding back only to smirk. She ran forward at and slightly touched the blonds shoulder closing one tenketsu disabling his left arm.

"What did you do to me?" Naruto asked as he couldn't feel his left arm.

"I closed the main chakra point in your left shoulder disabling your arm. It's over you can't win" Hinata explained as Naruto's eyes widened. "And now your in my range of divination"

"Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms!" Hinata shouted driving a barrage of quick jabs sending Naruto crashing to the to the ground.

'Damn it...it feels like I can't move my entire body.' Naruto thought gritting his teeth from the pain while Hinata stood over him.

"Well it looks like i have won this one, it looks like your victory over the Uchiha scum was just luck."

Naruto glared at the girl as he struggled to get to his feet. 'What are you doing kit! Are you just gonna let this Hyuga tramp walk all over you!" The tailed beast within him shouted to Naruto.

The blond looked up at his long time bully and back to all the times she had picked on Naruto. And he knew it would only get worse once he was her slave, and he refused to allow that to happen. Naruto closed his eyes and took in a breath.

Hinata looked at her fallen opponent with confusion. 'What could he be up too, I've completely paralyzed his body and shut down his chakra points. He has no way of winning.' Hinata thought believing she had won.

'I...won't...i won't lose!' Naruto's eyes flashed bright red for a second as he felt the feral red chakra running through his body.

Hinata strutted towards Naruto standing over him with her hands on her hips. "Wel now slave, do gou give u..ack!" Hinata's taunts were cut off by fist slamming into her stomach causing her to stumble back coughing as she fell to her knees she looked up to see Naruto smirking above her.

"Well it looks like i won." Naruto said triumphantly while Hinata mustered one finale glare before she passed out.

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'I can't believe this, this idiot was suppose to fail and become my bitch! Not the other way around!' Hinata thought with anger.

Naruto on the other hand was still wondering what he was going to do with Hinata for the next week. The girl had taken joy in bullying him since he was 6 always picking on him calling him names, knocking his food to the ground and mocking his dreams. But despite that Naruto didn't feel any real anger towards her for what she had done and knew how bad a life she had, he mother had died giving birth to her sister, her cousin treated her like trash, and her father didn't even care if she lived or died and kicked her out when she was 5 to suffer at the hands of all the people who hated the Hyuga clan. This all ended up turning her into the cold person she was now.

"Hey baka! Are we going to get this over with, I wanna go home soon!" Hinata shouted to Naruto earning a glare from Naruto.

"Stop calling me baka!" Naruto yelled. "If you call me baka any more I'll… I'll-"

"You'll what? Huh? Spank me!" Hinata said sarcastically.

Not knowing what else to do he said "Yeah, I'll spank you five times every time you call me anything but Naruto-sama." Naruto said blushing and shocking Hinata speechless.

"You worthless scum! Do you actually think I'd allow you to lay your hands on me!" Hinata exclaimed in outrage glaring at Naruto.

"I'd watch your mouth if i were you Hyuga." Naruto replied in a serious tone. "Don't forget you lost to me fair and square, over the next week I am your master and you will show me respect or suffer the consequences." Naruto said his voice full of authority before smirking. "Don't forget you swore on your Nindo and as member of the Hyuga clan you must honour your agreement."

Hinata grit her teeth clenching her hand into a tight fist, he was right. "Fine..." Hinata sighed in defeat.

"Good girl." Naruto said as he sat on a log patting his lap. "Now come and receive your punishment."

"You've had this coming for a long time Hyuga!"

SLAP!

"Owwww!" Hinata howled, as Naruto's first chakra filled hand that slapped her butt was swift and stung like crazy. More stinging swats hit her upturned rear.

Slap! Slap! Slap! Slap!

"I don't where or when but I will make you pay for this humiliation. I swear I'll..." Hinata's threat was cut off as Naruto delivered another hard slap to her ass causing her to cry out

Slap! Slap! Slap! Slap!

"STOP IT! OUCH! OW!" Hinata screamed, "OW! OW! OW PLEEEEEEEEASE STOP THIS! OW! OW!" Hinata's prayers were answered when Naruto finally stop his assault on the bluenetta behind leaving glowing a bright painful red color.

Naruto looked down at Hinata who was breathing heavily trying to catch her breath. Hinata was filled with sadness, anger and humiliation at what the Kyuubi Boy had just done to her. Reluctant tears of shame welled up in her eyes, and rolled down her cheeks. Along the way, it messed up her mascara, leaving streaks of black flowing down the exposed skins around her eyes.

"So are you gonna be a good girl now?" Naruto asked Hinata could only nod desperately as Naruto helped her to her feet.

"Yes..." Hinata said through her teeth.

"Yes what?" Naruto said.

"Yes...Naruto-sama." Hinata said with her head down in defeat.

"That's better, now I'll be excepting you to be here tomorrow after your team meeting." Naruto said as Hinata held her head down with anger in her eyes.

"Yes...Naruto-sama." Hinata said as she made her way back home.

Meanwhile Naruto looked down at his hand as hint of red chakra began to leek out from his hand. 'This power...i've never felt this before.'

Meanwhile within Naruto's mindscape the Kyuubi was smiling as he watched his young Jinchuriki.

'And so it begins.'

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