Yeah fuck no to the clones.

Clones are not him.

Um okay? That's an abrupt skip.

enjoyed reading but it feels like there are time gaps between chapters

not very connected with chapter 1

nice work.

This is just fantastic to read in bed and please keep it coming. Also is Breaking Catwoman gonna get update or is it done?

Would love to see a version where Hinata's plan works

Wonderful job

So wait. Hinata has a dick?I mean you called it her manhood after all.

Damn bro, you are master at writing trash and copying others. You are slower than a snail.

That was quite a good chapter, and I look forward to what happens in the next one. Glad that you're back, and hope that your well

Her age is stated to be different at least twice.

She's disowned, but still a member of the Hyuga? Bull crud. Either she's a member of the family, or she's not. Being disowned is literally being removed from the family. Can't have it both ways when both things are mutually exclusive.

It's all fine and dandy to write something, but if it's blatantly contradicting itself in the first chapter? That needs to be fixed. Whether it's smut or not.

Interesting. Like the lemons. Like how tenten was portrayed. Looking forward to reading more

The beginning of this chapter was almost word-for-word taken from “Chained to the Whirlpool”