Don't own Divergent

"Tobias come on! Tris yells, dragging my hand into the field. We have a rare moment where we aren't doing anything and we decided to go on a picnic.

Tris was more excited about it than me.

She drags me along and we find a nice spot to sit in. I take a peace of Dauntless cake and eat it, savouring the taste.

Then everything changes. The sky goes dark and someone steps out. I can't see his face but I can see what's in his hand.

A gun.

He pulls it out and aims for Tris, I jump in front of her but I'm too slow.

She falls to the ground.

I wake up breathing heavily. Tris didn't die last night I remind myself.

She died four years ago.

On another note, don't you think Tobina sounds like a pretentious rich kid that everyone hates.