Hey there my loyal readers, I've decided to come out and rehash my first story, Unleash the Kitsune. Seeing as how this was the first story that I wrote on , I feel a bit sentimental about the story's progression. However, the original story had me feeling a bit dissatisfied and not to mention the many negative reviews I had received on its latest chapter had put me down in the dumps for awhile. So much so that I had contemplated on scrapping the whole story all together.

But no need to despair, those thoughts are firmly away from my mind.

So, yeah. That's it really. A revamp of the original story with (what I hope) is better writing and a polished plot line.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own either anime franchises mentioned within the story. They are sole property of Kishimoto and Ishibumi.


Rias Gremory once again found herself gazing out the window of the club room. It was not uncommon to find her in that spot, simply staring at everything and nothing. She wasn't sure what it was exactly that was alluring about the spot that caused her to return day after day, but she found herself doing exactly that. It was where she could allow her thoughts to simply wander without aim, pondering on the thoughts that filled her head.

Maybe it was because of the view why she always returned here?

She would admit that Kuoh made for an impressive backdrop. The pristine buildings that gutted up to the skies were impressive on their own, not to mention the rolling green mountains that loomed on the horizons.

Or perhaps it had to do with the people?

Rias partook in what many would call 'people-watching'. Just watching her fellow classmates as they filtered off to their various abode filled the girl with a sense of... odd satisfaction.

Or maybe it was a combination of both?

But whatever the reason, she was glad for this spot. She had a lot on her mind lately. Most of which stemmed from her betrothed (and she used the word very lightly). She wasn't sure why it was that her parents were so adamant about her marrying the man-whore that called himself a Phenex, but she was determined to fight the arrangement tooth and nail, even if it took her last breath. It was one of the reasons she had decided to get her education in the human realm rather than in the Underworld like most of her peers. It brought her away from the man's sight and provided her the ideal hunting ground for potential peerage members.

It was a good idea in theory and had so far yielded some result.

In the span of a week, she had been able to recruit the wielder of the Red Dragon Emperor and the wielder of Twilight Healing into her little family. The potential that the two newly reincarnated devils possessed was astronomical and Rias was feeling a bit more optimistic about her chances against Riser in a fight should it come down to that.

But she wanted more to be certain.

The strength of her peerage was indeed growing, but not at the rate she wanted. While Issei possessed a Longinus, his strength was still sub-par. The boy had the tools to defeat gods but the overall strength befitting the lower echelons of a low-class devil. Not to mention that Asia's past as a former nun made the girl adverse to fighting, which on its own could stunt the peerage's progress.

In essence, Rias felt as though she had taken two steps forward, only to take one giant leap back.

It was why she was here right now, an attempt to soothe her growing headache and figure out what her next course of action would be. Her crimson hair, which marked her as a Gremory, was styled beautifully to fall down the length of her back, a prominent ahoge standing at attention. She possessed blue eyes with the faintest specks of green that floated within their depths. The female uniform of Kuoh Academy hugged her bountiful curves and mature frame.

As she watched the sun slowly lower behind the mountains of Kuoh, she spied the oddest of things. High above the clouds, what seemed to be a black hole sprang to life. Like ink on a sheet of blue paper, its black tendrils seeped further outwards. It grew in size until a golden comet was expelled. Like an apparition in the night, it vanished from existence.

Rias tried her hardest to track the golden projectile, but the most she could see was the gold streak it left behind. The extra-terrestrial object was far too fast, even for her heightened senses. It sped to the ground, cannoning through the clouds before crashing into the mountains.

BOOM!

Rias was swept off her feet as the collision sent a shock-wave that shook the entirety of Kuoh. It felt as though the world was shaken off its axis as the resultant force of the crash hit the town with the magnitude of an earthquake. Windows were shattered and the loud blaring of car horns told the heiress that there would be some pile-up on the streets. But those were all to be ignored at the moment as she scrambled to her feet. Before she was even composed, the doors to the club room burst open, revealing two of her servants.

Akeno, her queen, and Koneko, her rook, barged into the room. Their eyes met hers and Rias was flattered by the relief they exuded.

Akeno Himejima was one of the few girls in the Academy who could rival Rias when it came to beauty. The girl's body was just as mature as her master's, with her alluring looks that was the main point in most of the male - an a disturbing amount of female - students' fantasies. The girl had dark hair styled in a ponytail held together by an orange ribbon.

Koneko Toujou, while immensely popular like her fellow devils, was starkly different when it came to physical appearances. For one, she was about a head shorter. The girl's hair was as white as freshly fallen snow. A simple cat-like hair clip serve as her only accessory in her hair. She was two years younger than the other two females in the room, and wore the familiar uniform of Kuoh Academy.

"Buchou!"

"I'm okay," she assured as she dusted off her skirt.

Akeno was by her side in an instant. "Are you sure, buchou?"

Rias waved off the concerns with an airy huff. She was glad for their concern but it was clear to see she was unharmed. She instead looked back out the window, spying the dark smoke that marked the crash site.

Akeno followed her gaze with a squinted look. "Did you see what just happened bouchou?" the queen asked.

"Hai," she affirmed. "Whatever that was looked like a meteorite falling from a black hole." She explained to her friend. "I'm not sure exactly what it was but we have to investigate. Hurry!"

The trio of devils rushed outdoors and headed towards the front of the school. They didn't question why Rias hadn't immediately flown towards the crash site because they had the inkling of to what her plans were. Soon enough, as they emerged from the building, they spied two females waiting for them. The first was Sona Shitori, the student council president, and the other being Tsubaki Shinra.

Sona was a girl of lithe frame, a trait which had earned her a fair share of fans. Her violet eyes were as sharp as a razor as they peered out from beneath her glasses. She had dark hair styled in bangs that framed her cheeks perfectly before stopping just short of her chin. The girl exuded an air of cool elegance to many who had the pleasure of approaching her.

"Rias," Sona greeted as she drew near. The bespectacled girl was one of few words and was hard to get a read on sometimes. Standing behind her was her ever present queen Tsubaki.

"Sona," Rias replied.

Both girls were friends since their earliest recollections, unable to remember a time were either did not know the other. Their friendship was one built on mutual respect and admiration combined with their love for a good game of chess.

Sona was the one to speak first. "I have no doubt as to why you're here, Rias. I've already sent the others of my peerage ahead to set up a barrier around the area to avoid any humans from interfering," she commented, as she folded her arms beneath her chest. "I haven't seen what it was that caused the explosion-"

"A meteorite," Rias interrupted.

"Excuse me?" Sona asked, put off-guard by Rias' sudden exclamation.

"The thing that caused the explosion. It was a meteorite... or at least something that looked like a meteorite," Rias said. She tossed a pensive glance to the skies, as if expecting for some sort of sign to validate her answers.

"... are you sure?"

"Positive. I saw it myself. Whatever that was, it looked like a golden streak falling to the earth." Rias explained to the others. "I saw it crash into the mountains over there," she pointed in the general direction of the rising smoke.

Sona pursed her lips. As she came to a decision, a glint of light flashed off her glasses. "Regardless, we should go and investigate this over selves. If it's anything worth noting, we should send word to your brother."

Rias tossed a teasing smile in Rias' direction. "Only onii-sama? What about your sister? I'm sure Serafall would love to hear from her precious So-tan." Akeno giggled in her hand while Tsubaki did her best to stifle her laughs.

The president of the student council glared in response but it was negated by the pink flush on her cheeks, "... Shut up Rias,"

With a little magic and a short wait, the five girls were gone.


As he fell almost a thousand feet to the ground, Naruto had one thought on his mind,

'Kaguya is a sore loser!'

The wind whipped by in a frenzy as his golden form streaked towards the ground in a propelled arc. He would have stopped himself if he wanted but the memory of what had happened just a few moments before was still playing in his head.

Fingers crossed in a familiar hand sign, while a teen shrouded in golden chakra shouted a familiar yet new phrase.

"Sexy Reverse Harem no jutsu!"

In a puff of smoke, the blond boy disappeared and in his place were several men.

Several handsome men.

Several handsome naked men.

The reaction of each person involved in this monumental show-down was clearly noteworthy.

Sasuke Uchiha had a deadpan gaze as he observed the scene. 'Stupid... dope... wait a second... IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE ME?!

Sakura Haruno however had completely different thoughts. Caught in between being angry at a teammate for using such a ridiculous technique against a goddess, or praising him for his flawless execution. And if she didn't know any better, that one guy there looked a lot like Sasuke-kun.

Kakashi Hatake watched on with pride. The pride of a pervert that was. While he detested the technique because he could live without seeing a bunch of guys' junks, he applauded the perversion it took to develop such a technique. Noticing one of the males who looked eerily like his wayward student, Kakashi had never before wished he could unsee things like he would now.

'The most unpredictable ninja indeed. Who would've thought that such a perverted technique would ultimately save the world... Jiraiya-sensei... are you watching... you would've been so proud.'

However it was Kaguya Otsutsuki's whose reaction was the most interesting. The horny (saw what I did there) primordial goddess could not look away, a flush evident on her pale cheeks. Added to this fact was her wielding the Byakugan in both eyes and a Rinne-Sharingan on her forehead, this image would be fiercely seared in her mind forever.

Not able to recover fast enough from the deadly technique, she could not react to block Naruto's follow up.

"THIS IS THE HISTORY OF SHINOBI, BITCH!"

With his loud battle cry, Naruto's fist plowed into her cheek, sending her flying off towards Sasuke's direction. By the time she had righted herself, both reincarnations of her grandsons had already closed the distance between her and them and where swiftly approaching from both sides.

With no options other than to dodge, the woman flew upwards, not noticing that Sakura had anticipated this move. With a chakra-enhanced fist, the pink-haired kunoichi punched the woman back towards both Sasuke and Naruto, in the mean time, breaking both of the woman's horns.

Careening back towards the boys, she could not stop them as they both laid their hands on her. And she was helpless when she heard those dreaded words.

Six Paths: Chibaku Tensei

Kaguya watched in dismay as chunks of earth rose from the ground and converged on her. She had no control of her body anymore. She glared at the two boys with tears in her eyes.

In front of her, she saw Hagoromo and Hamura Otsutsuki, her sons. Their images faded to reveal Ashura and Indra Otsutsuki, her grandsons. Their images soon again faded to reveal the ones who defeated her.

Naruto Uzumaki and Sasuke Uchiha.

'Yet again... I, the origin of all chakra... am defeated by chakras that are created from but a part of me... why?! Hagoromo... Hamura... I hate you... You belong to me. No! No, I won't allow it to end like this!'

'You Ashura's reincarnation. I hate you the most. Your interference have cost me my cradle. You will pay!'

Before her Rinne-Sharingan could be fully sealed off, Kaguya used the most of her chakra reserves to create a intern dimensional portal behind Naruto and before he could react, a blast of chakra struck him in the chest, pushing him through.

The blond ninja gone forever.

He huffed in irritation. Sure she had lost the fight in the end, but that didn't mean she had to be such a sore loser about it.

Talk about immature!

So caught up in his thoughts, he failed to notice that he was approaching the ground at breakneck speed until it was too late.

BOOM!

The ground simply caved in under his weight. With his body's natural dexterity, the passive regenerative powers given to him as Kurama's jinchuriki plus added with the near invincibility he possessed in (what he dubbed mentally) Six Paths Sage Mode, a fall of that magnitude, while something he would look to avoid, wouldn't be much of a problem to him. Sure, it was still painful. But a little pain was better than death.

So with those factored in, it was no surprise that a few moments after his fall, he could be seen simply walking out of the crater formed without much damage. His lower back and legs were hurting like a bitch but something worth ignoring as he tried to get a read on wherever it was that Kaguya sent him. His first thought was that this place probably wasn't the Elemental Nations. He had witnessed first hand as Kaguya had shifted the battle field to a different dimension in a blink of an eye, so he wouldn't put it past her to send him to another dimension.

So far, this place looked normal. But that still didn't say much. The Forest of Death back in Konoha looked the part of a normal forest but he knew first hand that in its depths, wild and dangerous prowled in wait for prey. Not to mention the giant-ass man-eating caterpillars that roamed around in broad daylight. Since his experience during the Chunin Exams, Naruto refused to take these things at face value anymore.

With a simple thought, he fell into a meditative position. Feeling for his chakra, he was surprised to find himself at half capacity. After such a hard battle against Madara then Kaguya, he was surprised to find he was not running low on fumes. Not to mention that in relatively, his 50% in chakra capacity was about equivalent to 10 times the amount of an average shinobi.

In essence, he still had a shitload of chakra to spare for what he planned next.

Naruto was the picture of calm as he meditated. A single bird flew down and perched as the tensions from his shoulders relaxed. Then suddenly, the bird flew away in a panic and the calm was shattered.

A deep growl rose from the depths of his stomach as his chakra levels began to spike sporadically. It continued to do so for a few moments before Naruto clenched his jaw. The rising levels of chakra was suddenly suppressed and curbed, held back like a hungering beast on a chain. His eyes snapped open and with a yell, the chakra exploded up and outwards. If someone was near by and watching him, they would have been mesmerized (and more than likely, blinded) by the effects this had on the teen's body. While he had meditated, the glow of the golden shroud around his body had intensified. It warped and wrapped and cocooned itself around him, shifting from a translucent gold to a deep opaque shade. It stayed like this for a moment before exploding with the intensity of a super nova. The area was basked by an impossibly white light and the trees were blown asunder by its blast.

BOOM!

Naruto stretched as he stood back up.

"Whew! Well that should do it! No matter how far away I am, Sasuke should be able to pinpoint my chakra and come find me."


As the group of females were about the bypass the same barriers that they themselves had placed, they were once again treated to another shock from the same source. Koneko was the first to detect it. As the person of the group that was most attuned to the energy called chakra, she could feel the rise in power as it pulsed like a human heartbeat. She was rooted in place as it blew pass Ultimate-class level and entered Satan-class with no signs of stopping.

Rias - who noticed the girl pulling up short - stopped to question her before she felt it too. Like a tsunami, the unrelenting force of... whatever the hell that was, struck her head on. The girl was driven to her knees under the sheer weight of it and felt her breath coming up short. 'This power... what is it... I'm going to die here... I don't want to die... !"

Then it was gone...

"W-Wha... I don't... " her words came of as gibberish as she tried to climb back to her feet. Her legs felt like they were made of jelly. "Sona, are you-"

BOOM!

For the second time in a day, Rias was once again blown off her feet. But this time, she wasn't alone. The entirety of Sona's peerage who had been tasked with the barrier alongside the five girls who had just arrived were thrown off their feet. The blast was humongous and the bright shining light caused them to look away as it spread. They were fortunate enough that its range stopped before reaching them, but the awe and fear they felt quickly made their lips dry. The whole land was obliterated. Once a mountain, the landscape was turned into a plateau. Everything was simply... gone.

And in the center of it all, there appeared to be a golden dot. As her eyes focused, she could make out a vaguely humanoid figure.

Whoever that was, their power was overwhelming, all-compassing and... desirable.

It was just what she needed in her effort to defeat Riser.

Rias wasted no time as she sprang to her feet. With a mental command, her wings appeared and lifted off into the skies, her leathery appendages doing their work to draw her closer to the source of such a large-scale devastation. She ignored Sona's cry for her to stay back.

She wouldn't falter here.

Especially when she had her eyes on a new target to recruit.


IMPORTANT! DON'T SKIP!

So this is the first chapter of the my revamp of the story Unleash the Kitsune. It was my first story on this site and as well written as I thought it was, it had its fair share of problems. But I still love the story for many reasons:
1) It was my first story
2) It was my first (and only) story to pass 1K in both follows and favorites
3) I truly love the plot

So the reasons why I've decided to revamp it instead of scrapping it all together. The last chapter I had updated for it received a multitude of bad reviews and I still believe some were misplaced and outright rude. However, I will acknowledge that they was some things that I did that I shouldn't have and it will be rectified in this story.
1) They were scenes in the story that were exactly the same as canon with absolutely no deviation and weren't necessarily essential to my story. Those will be removed and replaced with better and different scenes.
2) Most were unimpressed by my fight scenes and I hope these will be better.
3) The way in which I'd describe the chakra of DxD, especially when I'd compared Matatabi's to Koneko got me a lot of grief from reviewers and PMs so yeah, that's gone.
4) The way in which Naruto decided to give up on the Elemental Nations was not well received, I've sought to correct that.
5) Shorter chapters is something you should expect. The average word count for the last story was about 4K-6K words. You'll come to see that this one will be somewhere between 3K-5K words. Around the same range but... you've been warned.

Essentially, the rewrite will have roughly the same plot along with better writing (I liked to think my writing as improved since then) and less of the stuff that wasn't well-received.

TO MAKE IT CLEAR, NARUTO WILL NOT BE MADE A DEVIL!

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