I just never understand why people pair anyone with Ophis. One, she spends all her time looking like a young girl, which is creepy. Two, she's got no emotions and no connection with emotions and thinks nothing of giving out power boosts to her khaos brigade, without any thought to what they'll DO with her power. She's pretty much the exact opposite of Naruto and NOT someone he'd EVER be attracted to. What a terrible pairing idea.

I rather love this story, the original had a good plot. I hope you pick it back up, though honestly I wish naruto had directly saved rias in the original but I'm a sucker for heros to have a bunch of unrequited crushes.

I thought Naruto was acting as a beacon for Sasuke? If thats truly the case then Hagaromo should be able to bring him back as well

a big tease you do this good job and make it sound like there is more but it's not i hope you do more with this story its good

Ohh Kami jajaja.

This is my first time for this story but I do have questions one regards the lifespan issue if you plan pairing Naruto with any of the girls of Dxd since he is Human.

Dxd is my favorite series that I have been following for a while even without Kurama he is force to be reckoned with, and this series provides the mos powerful weapons that any Shinobi could dream off,

And I lost all interest when you announced that pairing is Ophis. That's the same as to pair him with table or chair. Ophis is "it", not "she".

Great story please continue it soon.

getting very good please update ... but do you really have to show any more of what sasuke is going to do in the elemental nations.. it feels like it's not important to Naruto's story unless sasuke is going to try and find Naruto.

original was better sorry to said

meh now I remember why I ditched this story after I read your absolutely fucking RETARDED idea for a pairing. Fucking OPHIS really? God you're a god damn brain dead idiot. Yeah lets just pair Naruto with a fucking shape shifting GENDERLESS DRAGON. Fuck better yet lets pull all the biju chakra out of Naruto's seal an make them female to even though they're also GENDERLESS. Fuck don't give him a god damn pairing if you can't think of anything that isn't completely RETARDED

Are you going to update this story, its getting good.

I have mixed feelings-by default-about using the canon scenes. Though what can tip me for or against the use is how they're handled and the relevance of said scenes. I make it a habit to not rely on them and after I've played with a majority of content I throw in a canon scene to see what I can cook up again. Sometimes it works.

Glad to see Naruto won't be a devil :3

wow you're SERIOUSLY gonna pair him with Ophis? Well fuck you might as well just not pair him as Ophis is an emotionless machine that cares for nothing but the void

I guess depending on how you look at it the Jubi is a primordial god but then again it's not as the Shinju was the god but then again the Jubi was part of the Shinju or is the Shinju something like that