A/N: Well, it has been a long time hasn't it, people, almost 8 months now. I am back to give you another updated chapter (10,370) and sorry that it took a very long time more than usual.

A lot of things have happened over the last 8 months. I want to apologize for several things but at this point not going to make lame excuses:

1: My issues after taking a break from writing down my story for a while. Was that I had been playing other games (Girl's Frontline, Honkai Impact 3, Fire Emblem Heroe and Guns Girl in the past months that cause me to have inspired ideas for those type of stories sometimes a crossover which would look great on paper but would not make any sense and need lot of time to understand the lore for each one which are way more clusterfuck that I initially thought. Good thing I kind realized write ideas was going to hard then it looks but it doesn't stop me from brainstorm it that can shift into the gigantic ideas too much time and effort for me to handle it.

2: I am sorry to say that Fate series has been stale for a while which is slowly losing my interest. As the Fate series become a bit stale and a bit of franchise fatigue that causes me to not have as much time to craft a chapter, not only that, there are not much translate Fate stories that stand out like we're used to, unfortunately. I can not seem to get any ideas from my head during my writing of chapter 31 as it was supposed to be more scene but after stares at the blank screen with few little bits of words down, I decided to be done with what I am doing and think later at a difficult time.

So there were 130 (I count with a calculator) reviews, that were either questions, suggestions, or some pieces of information of lores that I did not know before. Then there are some really terrible, badly-implemented, and spam ones from review names, but I'm going to answer those ideas whatever they are good or not. I will not try to answer the reviews that proposal some ridiculous one as it's no real surprise that some of the designs were unconventional to say.

I am going say this once again, here is the list of OC servants that are interesting figures that would be appearing in my story and for story ideas and relationships which I have made most of the servant's profile sheet to make sound interested enough and loads of character development paragraphs with a fascinating background so that you want to know them. There are some servants who have unfinished sheet but I am working on it:

Simo Hayha (Archer/Assassin), Aleister Crowley, (Caster), Eve/Hawwah (Assassin), Moses(Caster), Bellerophon(Rider), Skuld the Scandinavian Elvish Princess (Caster), Helen of Troy (Caster/Assassin), Pandora (Caster), and Nefertari (Caster), Justeaze Lizrich von Einzbern, the Holy Maiden of Winter as Ruler class, George Washington(Archer/Rider), Pocahontas (Lancer), Clytemnestra (Avenger), and Enheduanna the Lady of the Heaven (Caster)

TheHatter1 chapter 30. Apr 4: I accept your apology and glad that you love my story. Your hypothetical magus theory is quite interesting and I am sure that your idea would be in one of my scenes. I love to write and loves coming up with various identities on how Mage's Association and other people interpretations of sibling's actions with a thought process for why someone would think that which misfires to the point of over-analyzes their most innocent and spontaneous words and actions of genius and foresight.

Nero Claudius chapter 30. Apr 4: In this chapter, the sibling has a little bit role as in the last chapter 30, I wrote on how other react to the aftermath and how the sibling was blissfully unaware on how presence and influence are causing a lot of stir. I have planned for the sibling get more role for the next chapter and interact with each other which I know that this chapter 31 is little underwhelming but I have posted this now or get writer block for while.

Albertrojas chapter 30. Apr 4: Yeah, it gets bad to worse. Could you be my Beta Reader as I just want someone who helps me with the typos and grammar? For the usage of Nasuverse rules, the reason why I post an Author note is that I don't want to have a statement from a review that the Nasuverse mechanics is wrong or doesn't work like that in my story that can result in a huge page of pointing out, to begin with. I don't want to go there, so that is all I can say and let move on.

Aurain Orimura chapter 30. Apr 5: Oh all right then I understand what you said and I would move on the pace which I make sure that it has a profound impact on the plot or tell what other characters is doing.

Furukawa023 chapter 30. Apr 5: Unfortunately, that is too much for me to handle on Dead Apostle Ancestor involve in my story and to be fair most of them had yet to appear directly in any works and only mentioned in the world-building manual. If Ortenrosse plans to take the Holy Grail then Lorelei would drop everything and go after him as she possesses an unusually deep hatred for him rather not let him have a hand on the Grail to activate Aylesbury Valesti ritual.

ArcherShirou chapter 30. Apr 5: The certain American organization only has some Magi as members who are manipulated and working with the U.S. Government in the background so the President is not unaware that a part of the U.S. government performed with magecraft, also he just got the report right away when there is another sheer amount of information that needs his attention like troop movement, supply conditions, risks of riots, terrorist attacks, shootings, and wars that was being pushed to him. There is a misconception that American presidents have a lot of power, they really don't as president need the approval of Congress to get things down. Also, not every president is expecting to have classified documents, secret government projects or information through their officer, this is even worse for Vice Presidents who are considered an unimportant office for most of its existence and really don't do anything (no real power) which people just kind forgot them, it seems also a way to get a troublesome member out of the way for at least four years.

Tokiomi Tohsaka summons Servant Gilgamesh in hope that the King of Heroe can guaranteed victory with such a force that can sweep aside all the other servants without any effort due to being one of the oldest and strongest of the Heroic Spirits. Judge by the way in Fate Zero light novel volume 1, Tokiomi Tohsaka quotes this dialogue "I found what I was expecting. The Servant I will summon would certainly be advantageous against all of the enemies. If it is a Heroic Spirit, then it will have no chance of victory against this guy." Tokiomi, being secretly happy in this manner; his face was brimming with the unrivaled confidence he was born with. And this one when he summons Gilgamesh with full confidence right. "…We've won, Kirei. Our battle is won…" The problem is Tohsaka is overconfident to assume victory before the war has even begun, actually, no plan survives first contact with the enemy main body and war is much too complicated as there are hundreds of unknown factors involved that influence the outcome of each battle. Over the course of the Fate Zero plot, it becomes obvious that he's not good at coming up with new strategies when his plan doesn't go his way, in fact, Tohsaka spends most of the time doing nothing but just let Kirei doing most of the work.

Rin Tohsaka was supposed to summon a Saber-class Servant without a catalyst in hope that performing the summoning at 2 am when her mana's at its peak but all the clocks in her house were an hour fast at 1 am, a scheme of her late father Tokiomi who seeming to say "If she can't even notice a slip-up as trivial and close to home as this, it's too soon for her to fight in the Holy Grail War." Plus Rin's Pendant acts like a catalyst for EMIYA so there goes her hope of getting a strong Saber class servant. She doesn't seem to have much of a plan in the Holy Grail war despite being properly prepared for it, only participating in the war out of her own competitive desire to become the winner. For someone who basically a prodigy and observant, she is remarkably poor at noticing all of the things that have changed that often cause her to disregards minor but important details like not notice Sakura's hair color is purple and her obvious strange behavioral due Holy Grail war.

Leol64678 chapter 30. Apr 5: That is an understatement to say at least as it was 8 months and overdue which I was struggling to move on with the chapter. For your question on how would people and especially religions find out that there are demigods and there were gods in the past react is that the events would live up with fanfare surrounding it, the questions and doubts concerning the existence of Gods and mythological creatures existing during the ancient times are squashed so furiously that none have no reason to deny it, the religions of every major faith are shaken to their core. This also can open a new can of worms and cause a lot of people to be greatly unsettled by the events combined with superstitions like thinking the world is about to end which every generation almost want to be the last generation, a group of cult follows most of the servants as hero- worshipper doing stupid things in the name of emulating their heroes, getting an historical archaeologists desperate to learn everything for every servants, media outlets, talent agencies, magazines, leaders of the main religions all requesting a meeting with them.

Cygfried chapter 30. Apr 5: Thank for the encouraging and here the chapter you had been waiting for. Fate series is really unique for include on lesser-known historical figures that no one barely knows so it is good that the series makes you want to read their history. I can hope to overcome the writer block that messes with my head for months.

Piddle chapter 30. Apr 5: Just Archer Gilgamesh as I believe that it would make sense for the setting.

Guest Q chapter 30. Apr 5: The sibling would have no reason to trust any Fate stay night characters especially when they lead by Lord El-Melloi II who is part of the twelve Lords of the Clock Tower the fact that most Fate characters follow on their order to their organizations/magus's families/leader and not only that, some of the servants were former partners of the fate characters which cause more distrust from the sibling which they are not going to take the Fate characters words at face value. The sibling also does not trust Bazett Fraga McRemitz and Caren Hortensia who was under orders from Mage Association/Holy Church to retrieve the Holy Grail make the siblings believe that their organizations would do anything to have the Holy Grail and their death. It was either unconditional surrender or armistice for both side as there is no middle ground and no reason to give the other side any leeway. Ultimately both sides need to build a degree of trust before any serious negotiations what to do with the Holy Grail.

LeozinPS chapter 30. Apr 5: No, Atalanta would not be romantically interested in Benjamin, you can now stop asking for it. Their reaction to the two version of Elizabeth is who the hell are they and what with the equally revealing clothing.

MaxHD2490 chapter 30. Apr 5: That first Lostbelt chapter was a punch to the face scene. Anastasia's sad past is little understatement once you read the whole background of the Red October which almost related to The French Revolution that is on steroid which by the way her death and her royal family cause the most of the world and Entente to see Bolsheviks as a legitimate threat. It would be a karma for the magus being attack by Avenger Servant.

Yech, a Magus base in a shipyard is pretty stupid but you should know that this is one of the group who think that was a good idea, most of the mages who had infiltrated the USA are way over their heads which cause them to underestimate the war, think an overly romanticized view of Holy Grail war that is an exciting and legendary battles, not know the grave consequences of the war, believe that it would the same like last Holy Grail War, are over ambition to achieve their goal that they are willing to get what they want which are happy enough to toss away anything resembling a conscience in pursuit of it, or getting more and more reckless as believing that the Holy Church who can manipulate information and the Magic Association can handle the media to cover the whole disaster up which are so blissfully ignorant of rising of the internet and social media technologies that made it much harder to keep the Holy Grail under wraps.

Billy Reb chapter 30. Apr 6: Yeah one thing that I like writing is how that the Mage Association and part of the Holy Church utter disbelief that there is no way to cover the incidents up, their efforts on the reliance of gas leak/explosion accident reports became impossible to sustain as the war turned against them and no way stop it from getting lot worse down the line. The Mage Association and Holy Church have seriously underestimating on how dangering can the Holy Grail War getting and are pretty incompetent in enforcing any safety measures when the event gets way too hot to handle it, a supervisor is not going to stop a servant on equal foot and their limited authority was to arrange any Master who manages to defeat rogue servant with a reward of additional command spells which depend if other want work together or not. To add insult to injury, most of the organizations see the Holy Grail competition as a backwater project and minor importance that isn't talked about among most of the magi.

What would happen if Barthomeloi Lorelei found out about Ben & Flanna, well like other she would see the sibling as a threat to the security of magecraft and their way of life, from what I can tell about her personality and her society/bloodline that takes class matters to the point of eugenics she also probably see them as a failure of tired to act like a Magus which cause her to underestimate the sibling for being a leader of servants and capability, in a hilarious hypothetical scene Barthomeloi Lorelei and the Mage Association would discuss what to do about with the sibling and honestly believe there is a chance they can do to fight back or challenge the sibling not realizing that there are other servants that need to deal with, hopelessly deluded about the actual strategic situation.

How would the whole word react when both the Association and the Church have been basically screwing over everyone for the past 2,000 years, not really well, a huge riots with a lot of backlash at both organizations that deeply embarrassing them which some of the members refused to apologize saying it was for their own good, getting involved in the magic world will likely get a lot of people killed. There would an increase in security and military upgrades, maybe a proxy war since the Cold War days. With every one and nations are begin to spy on each other much more then before.

JumpingToaster chapter 26. Apr 8: You don't need to read the author's comments/notes but if you want to ask a question, make sure to read other reviews who mostly like to ask the same question.

SynPyre chapter 25. Apr 9: I am glad you enjoy my story so far and I hope that my story is little different compared to other. Billy the Kid would appear at later chapter.

JumpingToaster chapter 30. Apr 9: Yeah, the magical/supernatural population (Mostly Magus) is so twisted, a shadow of formal self and some time out of touch which I wonder how the world did not get destroy by those magic projects they left behind. My story starts rather roughly at that time because I did not expect that people enjoy this Holy Grail war version on modern setting with events that are not about saving the world plot like other. I give Benjamin more screen time and give him the backbone to push the story.

Ramax Viscurio chapter 30. Apr 9: I know that you won't like Flanna's attitude and her military style, it is hard for me to write a soldier character without knowing any military customs, rules, and traditions. In fact, I have spent some time goes at 'Quora questions' to give my character to answer some military training lesson from that question-and-answer website without sound like an idiot, I did some research and look at some video how it works unlike some people who think they understand something about combat better than the actual Army which goes the exact opposite what they understand.

My OC Flanna is not a battle-scarred veteran or a green recruit, she is more like in the middle of average field experience, in the military, it is of utmost importance that every soldier in a unit is able to work perfectly together with the rest of it, a battle-scarred veteran would have some discipline problem as elite soldiers don't like to take orders from the regular guys and tend to be very careful, also most of the skills he has learned there are only of use in such an elite unit, so there isn't really much to gain from having such a guy in your unit if his attitude would only slow down. I am not trying to be a smart ass, just stating some stuff I need to said.

JumpingToaster chapter 11. Apr 9: I going to fix that issue later because I was trying to make that chapter little funny at the end back then and nothing it look out of place once I went back to read all my chapter again. It is my shameful tastes of doing that.

Lu Bane Na chapter 28. Apr 9: For pairings, I am not good with the romantic relationship so I pick Servant that fall in love way too easily with Benjamin. Write down a romantic pair is hard then it looks specialty when reviews throwing out extremely and borderline impossible servants pair/crossover ideas that sound good on paper. Yes, there would be Avengers (all of them) and Beast classes (Almost of them, when they are revealed at a later time). Arcuied actually appears in Fate/Extra as "fan service" which is an impossibility for her to be a servant but once again screw the rule. Yeah, summoning Type Mercury as a servant can really funny as hell, on Lorelei and Zelretch's reaction I did a small reaction with almost everyone on Chapter 29 at the end.

About me downgrading Aoko a bit, what Aoko has shown so far was only the tip of the iceberg and there was the Q&A material book/booklet that statement most of the 27 Ancestors, Kishima Kouma, Aozaki Aoko can fight against Servant with an extremely average Noble Phantasm one on one and there is another that said both Aoko Aozaki and Touko Aozaki in an all-out battle of magecraft no modern magi should be able to match a serious Caster (Medea). It on the TypeMoon Wikia on the Aoko Aozaki and Caster (Medea) page down in the References section. I would apologize to you if I struck a nerve to you.

Redyun chapter 30. Apr 10: For your main question, Flanna's main appearance is Kiryuu Iyori from Izayoi no Hanayome and when disguised, she looks like Vorona from Durarara using colored eye contracts lenses, skin lotion, and dyes her hair blonde with a simple white menacing mask with crescent eye slits with black curvy lines as eyelashes. For Benjamin's main appearance is Kenshi Masaki from Tenchi Muyo! War on Geminar and when disguised, he wears an uncanny, full-face mask set with a bloodstone and reddish robe. There was a narrow crack running along eye level, but that did not even reveal the color of the eyes underneath it.

Well, my chapter is spamming the review section by dumb questions or suggestions that I pick this or that, I begin to just skip some those questions from the same person because it just makes getting annoying already. A forum is kindly useless as I don't think anyone goes to the forum unless it is seriously brainstorming or discussing things.

Lu Bane Na chapter 30. Apr 10: It is a shout-out and that is it, there would no crossover with The House of the Dead because I have too many scenes to track with.

Merlin Pranks101 chapter 25. Apr 11: Well, we had to wait for Moses to appear in Fate Grand order as the material book mention him and Nefertari so that means they would appear as a servant.

MaxHD2490 chapter 30. Apr 12: They would surprise his appearance (height and weight included) that his body still needs to follow cube–square law which is the odd thing as other servants can ignore the physical laws of the world. Since Ivan is so huge and heavy that despite being made of ice, didn't explode from his own weight, he is going to be impractical to be used in combat when riding on his Gigantic mammoth in a very mobile combined arms war. Ivan could maybe use to hold a choke point but that only defend an entrance underground.

The Rupture chapter 25. Apr 21: Ok, I would change that as there is not much of a material book to finding or much of a fanmade story of the Notes series.

Galer chapter 30. Apr 27: Presidents of the U.S. tend to age rapidly in the office with the task of trying to run the country so it is a lot of work especially in that dark time of the year. So how Flanna and Benjamin are going to take the information that Gaia, Counterforce and Alaya entities exist in Earth, well at this point they are not going to care one bit, after see so many wacky situations and horrify stuff.

UNSC indomitable chapter 30. May 6: I thought that was good ideas at that time when writing the president scene and I know that it was a bit out of place which shall have put at the end of the chapter. I did put more time with Ben and Flanna and the Servants in this chapter and would put more screentime in the next chapter. Well my creative mind is not really intact after play different game and apps games which the Fate Grand Order had been getting dull at a late stage which became so tedious, I'm no longer enjoying doing the tasks because most of the times I feel like the rewards are not worthy and they started to feel more like a homework. To add insult to injury, I had not got any 5 stars Servants due to those events that I had been saving up and felt cheated that most of the saint quartz are getting really hard to get.

Martin Mahendra 2301 chapter 28. May 23: Thank for saying that but not right now.

Douchebag69 chapter 20. Jun 15: There is zero chance for that Luvia X Ben romance to happen because they had nothing to relate with each other and that comes out nowhere.

Martin Mahendra 2301 chapter 30. May 26: Shocking that his servant Artoria (Saber) is here and wonder why she is on Benjamin's side follow his order without much fuzz, think that Benjamin is able to manipulate her to stay on his side or had some kindly of mind control on Artoria that makes much more trusting of Benjamin.

MaxHD2490 chapter 30. Jun 11: Well, Okita Souji (Alter) is going appear since she is an Alter and Counter Guardian, Flanna is still wondering why Holy Grail summon weird classes.

Americaiuno chapter 30. Aug 19: Thank you for saying that and yes I would bring some avenger class servants which Angra Mainyu would appear the next summoning as he rarely appears that often.

Ashura333 chapter 1. Oct 10: Since I had to use google translate to understand what you are said in the review, yes it would be fun to see Arthur Pendragon interact with Lancelot and Alter. While EMIYA would not like the feeling of fighting Rin Tohsaka and Shirou Emiya, he makes sure not kill them in combat and adopting a live and let live attitude if they see each other somewhere else.

Lady-saintiasailor chapter 30. Nov 8: Glad to see you love history and yes, Avenger class would appear too. I am trying to get Benjamin to interact with his servants. I am trying to think on other servants doing other stuff and enjoy their new life.

Martin. Mahendra2301 chapter 27. Nov 1: Yes, I am going to edit the clothing of the servants to be more appropriate which is going to be hard for them to walk in that clothing.

LukeSky001 chapter 19. May 24: There are many different versions of Knight of Round Table stories so I can not tell which parts did Kintoko Nasu add or remove. In the Arthurian myths, most of the Knight of the Round Tables had a lot of problems with each other, tended to be self-righteous or have lofty ideals that are just too perfect which alienated some people. Yes, Flanna is always going to be suspicious of every hero summoned because of many good reasons. The rest of your information is good to know.

Martin. Mahendra2301 chapter26. Nov 1: Yes, I am going to give some the servents character development, like clearing the issue between Arturia/Mordred, Achilles/Penthesilea, and other servants issue that I can not remember all of it because it is ridiculous that in Fate Grand Order that grief did not lead to conflict or never talk about those issues.

LukeSky001 chapter 25. Jul 4: Thank you for giving some information on what can Shirou learn for other basics and I remember that Shirou can smell magic in air or danger but I am not sure that this was true or not in Fate series.

For Zach Pottinger, I would like to ask you not to spam the review section with requests and favors that overfill the pages which make me want to delete most of it. I get that most of your reviews are information that I don't know yet or some ideas that could maybe work but limit your self with just four or five reviews as I don't want to keep see 3 pages of the same username. I would answer some question/ideas of your but not all of it. I am not going to agree with most of your requests which are over the top and sometimes ridiculous sometimes you keep repeating words under three reviews

Zach Pottinger chapter 1. Aug 12 and Aug 5: There would no crossover Dark souls servants or any other crossover world servants which I would say this again, this is a Fate stays night fanfiction story, not crossover story.

Zach Pottinger chapter 28. Oct 2: No, just no as back then someone in the reviews section asks Erwin Rommel as a Rider class with almost same N. Phantasms. I am done talking about OC servants.

Zach Pottinger chapter 1. Oct 4: When I said 'fan service', I keep see Jack and Scathatch added into other fanfiction stories just to please the readers or being asked for them to be into the story first. I don't want to summon them just because someone asks for it, they would come later.

Zach Pottinger chapter 1. Sep 2: Your ideas of Fafnir and the Servants fighting, the Police characters, and Wavers group and Bazett is not bad and can work which I may have to change some of it.

Zach Pottinger chapter 1. Sep 9: Yeah I summon mostly likely all of Ultimate Ones because why not and the only way to get the sibling to be take much more seriously, to remind the squabbling servants who are in charge of them all. It also shows other characters who are dealing with as the sibling are not your typical foes.

No flame or spam the comments.

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The late-night was a cold atmosphere from the late afternoon that boiled the scorched earth as Paracelsus's Proto Homunculus smashed rocks and pulled trees out of the way in the backyard of Benjamin.

"A little to the right," Benjamin ordered Lu Bu, who moved the boulder slightly to the right. "Ok, put it down right there." Lu Bu put the boulder in the firing range and adjusted the other boulders in far back of ranges. "Well, our first beta gun range doesn't really look like much but it will do for now."

"Thanks, Lu Bu," Benjamin expressed gratitude to the God of War who simply glowered at him. "Don't look at me with that face, I am just doing what I've been told to do by my sister."

"So how is that project of yours proceeding?" Flanna asked Paracelsus while she checked the guns lying on the table. "These Elemental Masses that have the power of being effective familiars in battles against Servants."

"Well, it is considerable labor for me to find the materials to use but some of it is adequate enough," Paracelsus informed Flanna calmly. "So, at this moment, I don't foresee any difficulties in producing them."

"Good, with that we will hold a slight advantage with any Servants that would cause problems," Flanna said to Paracelsus. "I want to first have those Elemental Masses in the Holy Grail area in case there is going to be a fight down. Because the next thing I want to have in my home is an infight with each other or out of control servants down there." She knew that 'no hero has a spotless record' and there would always be a servant who absolutely couldn't be controlled or a servant who couldn't be trusted.

"With the Holy Grail under our home, make sure there are large, sprawling underground bunkers around it," Flanna stated him. "I want to secure that it would be a deathtrap for any enemies who would attempt to dig under the ground if charge into our home is not worth the cost." Every place must be defending in every corner, knows that she may have only two or one month's preparation before everyone in the world would soon found out where the Holy Grail is. "We don't want to be caught off guard if our future plans go flying out the window, after all, nothing is eternal, and sooner or later, this so-called peace will shatter as nothing would be same once we are in the spotlight."

"With the Shipyard incident, I hope that any Magi can stay away from our state for now," Flanna relished, recalling how most of her servants' battle against the enemy magi is so one-sided that she hoped that those events would frighten other magi away from her territory. "Let hope that the number of the deaths can keep the Clock Tower and Holy Church from ever tried to extend their control there in America." She can expect to create a defensive system that would make the cost of victory too great and force an armistice on them while still had some bargaining power, instead of an unconditional surrender.

"By the way, I heard from you that those Philosopher's stones can enhance magecraft in combat. Can a normal person like myself used magical artifacts that do not require activation with the magus's magical energy?" She asked Paracelsus about this topic for good reason. No matter how many servants or command seals she has at home, it is still not enough to guarantee both of them to be as safe for the sibling are still a normal human being with neither the magical ability nor the desire to participate in this so-called Holy Grail War and not being as a proper Master. It would take just one Thaumaturgy spell on them and it would be over because there is no defending from any of that.

"Hmm, I have happened to produce a Mystic Code that fits the bill, Master," Paracelsus answered her politely. "Like the jewels that I gave you for self-defense, I can make the jewel into a battle staff for you to shoot at your enemy."

"Of course that would work for me," Flanna smiled at Caster's request. "Make it so." She imagined the staff like those fantasy books that she read and use it to shoot a fireball. "Never would I guess to actually to see a magic staff straight out of a fantasy book in my lifetime." With the rise of the internet and social media, it would be a matter of time that she positively identified so with that she would have to look the part of a sorcerous overlord as convincing the Clocktower and Holy Church that they are dealing a (nonexistent) powerful magical wizard who declare his grand (and totally non-existent) plans for world's domination.

She turned to Chiron, who stared at some old medieval weapons on another table. "Chiron, what do you think about those weapons?" With Benjamin's training beginning straight away, Flanna searched in Grandpa's room to see what training weapons could be used for her brother.

"The weapons suffer from fragility but when they are enhanced with reinforcements then they would be fine for now," Chiron answered her as he inspected the longsword, dagger, and spear. "Still, there is not much stuff for training Benjamin with."

"Hmm, Paracelsus, can you create a Mystic Code of medieval weapons?" Flanna asked Caster as she showed him the medieval weapon. "No magic in each one, just normal ones."

Paracelsus pulled the dagger and inspected it. "As I said, weapons like that don't need much difficulty in making them. It would only take a few minutes to get all the weapons available."

"All right, I will see those weapons in an hour or two," Flanna turned to her brother. "Benjamin, can you come here for a sec?"

As Benjamin walked to his sister, he noticed the guns on the table. "Is this the part where you're going to teach me?"

"Since the firing range is done, I'm going to teach you to how to handle it and reload the gun," Flanna answered as she picked up a semi-automatic pistol M1911 and gave it to him. "So I went to the gun store to buy this gun for you to practice with it. Now, how does it feel to you?"

Benjamin slowly examined the pistol and noticed how heavy it felt to him. "Well, the pistol is almost a pound heavier than what I expected."

"It is going to be like that for every gun you are going to pick up. Benjamin, here's the magazine," Flanna handed over the ammunition storage to him as she reloaded and pulled back the slide. "Here's the gun noise-canceling headphones and eye protection goggles, just to be on the safe side. Remember to take off the safety, check the fire mode and shoot. And always make sure to keep your finger off the trigger until you know what you want to shoot."

With that, Benjamin put the headphones and goggles on his ears and eyes and did as he was told: flick down the safety catch, acquire his target through his iron sights, and pull the trigger for the first time.

PA-OOOOOOOOOOOON! The bullet hit the boulder as Benjamin yelped out of reflex of the recoil kicking against his hand that caught him by surprise.

"Oh, I forgot to mention that. Don't hold the pistol lightly or it is going to fly out of your hand," Flanna mentioned. "Keep practicing for a while until you get used to the recoil."

"Holy shit, the recoil of this pistol, I am still not going to get used it," Benjamin said as he fired the rest of the magazine perfectly without much trouble besides flinching from the recoil.

"Nice," Flanna remarked, noting the tight circle of bullet holes in the boulder. "Your aim skill is ok for now."

"And lastly," Flanna continued, taking the semi-automatic pistol M1911 from Benjamin's hand, "You'll need to know how to reload a pistol better. A lot of these aspects are different from gun to gun, but for the pistol, watch me reload properly."

She pressed the magazine release and ripped it out of the empty magazine and put it into the bag, grabbing fresh magazine inserts and putting it in again until the mag was partially inserted, using the palm of her hand to firmly set it in place and pulling back the slide. "Once you get the hang of it, you can reload the pistol in different and efficient ways, but it'll be up to you to find them."

"Sister, can I ask you something?" Benjamin asked her.

"Go ahead," Flanna answered.

"Do you think all this training can actually prepare me for combat?" Benjamin asked as he stared at the pistol she was holding. "I am actually afraid of failing in my training as I don't think enter into a war zone can give me the determination."

"That is something I can not say yes or no statement to that question, Benjamin. There is no training or selection procedure which can adequately foresee how someone will react when first in the combat zone," Flanna explained to him. "Back in my military base, I always kept getting surprised to see soldiers who went through the best military training and aced it, and then, later on, turned out to be total failures in combat. Sometimes, there are a number of points where the new recruits forget basic things as a result of their panic in a situation." "Back in the military, they are counting on young people to fill in the vacancies they have, boot camps are made to be passed even it doesn't mean that they'll make it easy, it just means that if you do everything they tell you, you'll make it through it. Boot Camp doesn't have grades or scores, you either pass it or fail it, so it doesn't matter if you're last in your class or close to the top, passing makes you a soldier."

"So, Benjamin, even with the best training classes and skills for you, it wouldn't completely prepare you in the real battlefield. There will always be the big question," Flanna said to him as she stared him in a serious look. "How will you react on the battlefield? Will you make it out alive and act on your battle instinct or will you be a coward sit completely frozen in a trench?"

"I am not sure how I would do it," Benjamin answered her. "But I will try my best to pass through the training even if I hate it."

"Good, you got the spirit to push one," Flanna smiled as she patted his shoulder. "Keep practicing on the pistol, for now, I want to you to actually learn how to use it a little better rather than let me show you the ropes initially." "No amount of practice can beat seeing the real thing with your own eyes while I go off check the other servants to see how they are doing." "There is a common misconception about the military that I think I need to address to you is that no sailor, soldier, marine, or airman once they come out of their AIT or whatever their branch calls it is a fully functioning service member." "Every good serviceman got to their unit and had a more senior soldier take them under their wing and teach them and train them and this cycle does not end as the service member progresses up the ranks there is always someone there to help guide them, this is something that takes real life, real-world experience and is not something that is trainable."

With Benjamin practicing his aim a little bit more, Flanna went to check the training room where she ordered Achilles, Beowulf, and Sakata Kintoki to remake the sparring arena with a big fence around it, where it can give the other servants a huge room to spar with each other.

"I've been waiting for you Achilles! Let's have a battle with me!" Beowulf shouted as he raised his fists.

"Hey, Have that golden armor on when you fight me!" Sakata Kintoki called out too as he pulled his golden ax.

"I am sure popular around here and there sure are some energetic ones around," Achilles said as he stabbed his spear on the ground. "So who is going first?"

"Heh, finally someone who speaks my languages," Beowulf said as he curled his hands into fists, and slowly began walking towards Rider.

"What is going on here?" Flanna asked Atalanta who was holding Alice.

"Beowulf plus Sakata wants to test himself against Achilles," Atalanta answered her. "They were done create the sparring arena so they decided to celebrate by beating each other up with Ruler watching closely in case the fight got messy."

"Go, Sakata!" Alice cheer for Golden Boy. "You can do it!"

Flanna saw Jeanne d'Arc hold her holy battle flag at her side and signal during the fight. "Oh, Master, it's going to be disorderly out there so be careful in getting in the way of their fight."

"I don't mind this fight as long as you keep it from getting out of control by the way," Flanna replied as she took her notebook to check on Jeanne d' Arc's state. "I am going to watch this battle for a few minutes."

When Flanna end meets Joan of Arc for the first time, she found the Catholic Saint easily one of the kindest individuals she had ever met and her very nature was supposed to be perfect and absolutely beautiful in every sense of the world that rivaled only by the first Samaritan. She found herself reflecting Ruler an unfamiliar person in an odd feeling and she wondered if it was the disappointment within her heart that feeling like Joan of Arc was a different version of that person than the actual woman. "No matter how time I told to myself, retellings of her story tend to leave out less than savory decisions that Joan made." She was anything but pure and forgiving and was notably very belligerent and vindictive towards the English, was also incredibly articulate and unpredictable. Verbally utterly fearless, no matter who she was speaking to. Joan has been attributed to feminist or populist views, it was not a feminist gesture, in fact, Joan was very harsh on women who wanted to fight in the army, telling them to go back to the kitchen and children but a social one she used to show to other soldiers she was one of them, that she shared their culture and customs, even the most insignificant one. It was one of her solutions for social integration. Because to command male soldiers, she had to be accepted into the brotherhood and she succeeded at it, she's something more, so her symbols to be socially accepted will change a bit as well. She's far from the first woman to fight alongside the men or the only woman to serve in the French army, there were many widows joined up after their husbands were killed as she was by far the youngest to do all those things.

"Sure, Master but I don't think you can actually see the whole fight when it gets heat up," Jeanne said as she set her flag up. "Especially them."

"Come to think of it, why does Joan have blond hair?" "I saw a lot of pictures and she was painted brunette, brown or even with red hair, but only in the movies and TV series she was blonde," Flanna consideration as she studies Ruler's appearance especially finely textured blonde hair and amethyst-colored eyes that look completely pure while displayed solid thighs, slim waist, and large bosom department. Not only were her muscles well-defined, but they also emphasized the feminine proportions better than any of gender could ever show- let alone hope to replicate.

From what Flanna found in the source of the book of Pierre Champion; Joan had "dark hair" and "steely eyes" according to witnesses in the retrial of 1456. So probably blue/grey. Her face was both "characterful and gentle". She was quite tall for the time (around 5 feet 7 inches). She was robust and quite broad-shouldered but also with a well-proportioned body like a fitness girl. Last detail and almost every captain alive in 1456 mentioned it: she had beautiful, firm and relatively big tits. Joan was not afraid to change clothes in front of her followers so that's why they knew. Of course, they all said they did not feel any desire... So Joan was perhaps not a goddess of beauty, her body was clearly described as hardened, but she has also quite feminine, not a total tomboy as most movies and TV series think.

Now Flanna considers her options on Jeanne d'Arc as she realized awfully reminded her not considers Ruler far nobler than she truly is. "There is a lot of stuff about her is wrong or misleading, some were originally based on fact, but all became twisted and embellished as they were told and retold like a game of telephone be it for patriotic, religious, or political reasons, or simply for the sake of their own self-aggrandizement as a master of all truth," Flanna said in her mind. "Then again I am not sure that I will ever be able to untangle the myth from reality that she is some kind of Gallic superhero or a deluded peasant with a fantastic (by accident) sense of timing, who was used by others?" Flanna reflection as she watches Jeanne ready to single the flag.


Ruler: Jeanne d'Arc, the Saint of Orleans

Attributes and Stats

Strength: B

Endurance: B

Agility: A

Mana: A

Luck: C

N. Phantasm: A

Class Skills

True Name Discernment Rank B: a Servant's true name and entire status information including parameters, skills, and Noble Phantasms will be automatically revealed to the Ruler in a direct encounter. In regards to Servants with concealment abilities, a Luck Check is required to bypass those abilities. It is a pretty op ability since it forcefully reveals both the enemy servant's true name and parameters also strengths and weaknesses to Ruler's eyes.

God's Resolution Rank A: Special skill for the Ruler class and is the privilege for presiding over the Holy Grail War with the right to use two Command Spells against Servants but cannot purpose to another Master. This is non-transferable unless Ruler establishes a request for a subjugation of a hostile Heroic Spirit and staff approves it. For some reason, it can restore her own Command Seals one at a time for 24 hours to regenerate each one.

Magic Resistance Rank EX: Her Magic Resistance is at an abnormally high level due to her unwavering piety. Simply put, it didn't receive spells and negate it, but averts them to prevent them from touching her in the first place. It is possible to resist command seals completely. She can allegedly avoid being wounded even by magecraft from the Age of Gods. However, this resistance only turns spells away from her, thus only Jeanne will be saved against a wide-range magic attack. Because of this skill's unprecedented rank, it could prevent curses or the like from touching her in the first place, even if their sources are Noble Phantasms. It cannot, however, handle Sacraments of the Church.

Personal skills

Revelation Rank A: It accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal. For example, choosing the most suitable path while traveling. If knowledge or visions are granted to her for plot or combat purposes, it must be given to her by a staff member. If its secondary function is to be used otherwise, it will merely be for unimportant social threads. It has the bonus effect of allowing Jeanne to tell if she is being lied to, but not what an individual is lying about.

Charisma Rank C: Self-explaining, Jeanne's figure participating in the assaults hoisting a flag raised the morale of the soldiers to the limit and united the troops. Thanks to her charisma, it is possible to make others believe in the contents of the "revelations" without basis. In battle, it gives all those following or working alongside Jeanne resistance to negative mental interference. It reduces mental interference effects by the rank of this skill. Allies will receive a boost in fighting capability if they fight alongside Jeanne. These boots do not affect Jeanne, only others.

Saint Rank B: Being acknowledged as a saint, a 1 Rank-Up to Charisma skill, raising the effectiveness of sacraments, instinctive HP recovery, and manufacture of a holy shroud is possible.

Noble Phantasms

Luminosité Eternelle: God is Here With Me, Rank A: The battle standard of Jeanne, the holy battle flag that she kept by her side all her life. It is durable enough to easily destroy weaker entities, block strikes from enemy Servants, and pierce through obstacles with its tip. It has inspired and uplifted her soldiers who have believed a saint walked amongst them, said to have continually protected her as she ran ahead in battle as the vanguard. By planting it into the ground, tightly grasping it, and activating it as a Noble Phantasm, it converts her Magic Resistance into protection against all harm, both physical and spiritual. It brings about a light that completely isolates anyone within it for one post. It is only strong enough to shield those immediately in Jeanne's vicinity and sufficient only to defend against up to a single special attack from an enemy servant, like an Anti-Fortress blast. The damage they would take is transferred to the flag, which burns away as damage is accumulated - meaning there is a set amount of damage it can absorb before it becomes useless. The flag can regenerate, but the time it takes to do so depends on the amount of damage it took on. One's own judgment, or that of a moderator in missions, can be used to determine how long it takes for it to recover.

If being used as a battle standard, it provides her and her allies the skill 'Bravery' that resists mental interference at the Rank of the Phantasm. It also gives them an effect similar to Battle Continuation, allowing them to rise quickly if they are forced to the ground. It does not, however, help if there is a physical issue preventing them from rising, such as a fatal wound or damage to the leg. The flag can be used by other Heroic Spirits, but only if they had witnessed Jeanne's legend in their life. Which narrows it down to only Gilles who can activate the power by the way a normal person can carry the flag without any side effects to it.

Type: Anti-Team, Anti-Army, Barrier

Range and Number of Targets: 1 to 10 and?

La Pucelle: The Crimson Saint, Rank C to Ex: It is a crystallized Conceptual Weapon that acts as an offensive interpretation of her burning at the stake, a subtype of Reality Marble that has the imagined landscape crystallized as a holy sword. It is a powerful attack that uses the flames of her execution. But after its use, Jeanne dies even if she beats an opponent with it and it cannot be used merely to defeat a strong enemy, but in order to save something. The flipside, however, is that it annihilates anything in existence, hence its EX-rank. Of course, she can change the damage rank so that she can survive this suicide attack.

Type: Suicide

Range and Number of Targets: Not sure of the range but it would probably inflict more harm on its users than its target as it is really easy to doge

Personality: Jeanne is a normal, kind person who behaves as one young woman might. She's not wise, nor learned in the ways of the world. She has no deep wisdom, nor does she demonstrate intelligence beyond her years. However in the field of battle - and rarely outside of it, if fighting for a cause that promotes her faith or country, she can be very stubborn and frighteningly fearless. She can get irrationally upset if others do not see things her way at times, but having experienced it before, she believes she can make people see reason if she's given a chance. She has a deep love of prayer and believes that God has never truly forsaken anyone, even her. Being that she never obtained a general education as was a poor fame girl, she has a dislike of general studies, though she displays an aptitude for military tactics in life, she was only able to do so through the whispers of the counterforce. She is also firm and unrelenting when need when it comes to tasks she sees as her duty, as is with her being a Ruler and during her life on the battlefield. She also had a stubborn drive to see her mission done, during her lifetime, even after she had taken an injury, as soon as she was well, she would step back on to the battlefield to do the task appointed to her. Her high dedication to her faith means she is very unforgiving of things that go against it, and will not hesitate to speak out or act against behaviors she sees should be corrected and spoken out against.

STRENGTHS: Her Ruler class is a combination of Lancer and Saber, Swift and relentless, it was a mark of her leading style and when fighting directly in battle. She relied heavily upon her speed, seeking to push her opponent(s) against the wall to the point of capitulation or granting her the opening for the coup de grace. On the more practical level, it enabled to see what deeds she believed needed to be done were done and thorough. Her Noble Phantasm flag makes her a best defensive class and possible can simply outlast her enemy as she wears down their down. Her Ruler skill can support and help that allows her to scan around her position from a wide range within 10 kilometers radius which can allow her to search for servants' positions, which can even overcome Assassin's Presence Concealment ability and have a Spirit Board that functions to locate Servants or see their states. Well known for siegecraft. She would capture 5 cities after protracted sieges and 30 additional cities surrendered without any military engagement back in her lifetime. Stymied with a good morale boost. In her lifetime, Joan waded into battle with a huge white banner with Jesus, Mary and 2 angels on it. The French believed God was with them, which undoubtedly helped morale.

WEAKNESSES: Her Noble Phantasms are less impressed with one of them being a suicide attack that takes her life with it unless she survives the attack and besides it would take too long to activate the ability. Despite being under the special class Ruler, she can look really intimidating at first glance, but she is incredibly easy to manage once you can actually know her abilities well enough which that is a good idea on paper but is poorly executed here on the well-equip Ruler class skills and command spells can give her a slight advantage, but that's it until she gets overwhelmed as her class is not designed to be one man army type. Since she neither had an offensive Noble Phantasm which could use a sure-kill attack on a high-level servant who is nearly invincible in a drawn-out battle, don't suspect her to win without backup support since she actually never kills a single enemy soldier, nor did she so much as swing her sword at any foe so she lacks both experience and legend that she could never surpass. Well, she is skilled with artillery (also a huge negative.) The hundred years war occurred in a strange transition from knights to firearms and which Joan fully embraced the developing tech. Historians typically agree her 4 losses came due to lack of artillery to support her.

Levels of Reliability Rating: Jeanne will devote her earnest efforts without ever abandoning him. She would obey him without any issue and can offer some pieces of advice. This makes her a good secretary and second in command if there is something that she needs.

An Issue with Order?: So long as Benjamin is a rightful Master and doesn't do anything that causes a threat to the world and its people then she would serve him as long he never loses sight of his goal.

Contrary to popular belief and some fictional stories: The idea that Joan was some kind of military genius on pair of Julius Caesar or Napoleon is a pure fiction invented long after her death for nationalistic propaganda purposes. She actually an aggressive military commander who always opted for offense instead of defense, a skilled horseman and average swordsman, but tactically, she knew how to direct armies and place gunpowder artillery. She was successful when she had the troops and the cannons to either match or overpower her opponents, but when she fought in overwhelming circumstances, she could not pull off a brilliant victory out of no way. Joan's aggressive approach to war and her skill with artillery made her a formidable opponent, they were also her greatest weakness and led to her eventual capture.

Still, Joan of Arc's military success was not to just a divine intervention, but her ability to intimidate with her mystique, overwhelming victories, and rumor of massacres resulted in dozens of cities surrendering without a fight. Which English expected the French forces to continue with their regular pattern, an unprecedented full frontal assault by Joan of Arc completely caught them off guard. Later in the campaign, English force had adopted, and she suffered as many major defeats as victories. Yet, with all her martial ability, she had her weaknesses. She was too dependent on artillery and she never fought defensively, and as a result, she lost four battles, the fourth of which was her last.


"Perhaps heroes need not question their actions and every hero had something to hide but a stain of black doesn't mean all the white is gone and a stain of white doesn't mean all the black is gone,"Flanna knows that she tends to see the best in the worst people and the worst in the best people, but can also be very insightful when she isn't blinded by personal sentiment. "There is no pure hero, everyone has a dark side no matter how charming they are," "For now I would believe this so-called Saint of France as my allies but if she decided to choose to abide by the rules of her summons and act as a neutral overseer of the Grail war then I start doing thing behind her back."

The Saint of Orleans rose her flag, signaling Achilles, Beowulf, and Sakata Kintoki to begin fighting now.

One the three Servants charged at each other with Sakata right behind Beowulf.

Achilles' left hand and Beowulf's right passed by each other and the two servants struck each other in the face. The force behind their blows sent both of them flying backward with Sakata moving right in the forwarding of Achilles.

"GOOOOOOOOOLLLDEEEENN!" Sakata let out his own unique war cry and smashed his large golden ax with fifteen attachments on the back of it on Achilles' armor, which the Greek warrior's gift of immortality made the attack reduce to 75% of the ax's total damage.

Achilles returned with a punch to the cheek on Sakata as the Golden Boy was sent flying back to Beowulf's side.

"Interesting," Achilles noted, as he reached for his cheek. "I felt a little pain right there."

"Oh, you seem surprised that I can bypass your defensive ability," Beowulf noted. "As I said, that is another gift that I have received from the Holy Grail by beating Grendel to death "

"A defense-piercing attack with your bare fists, oh that is perfect!" Achilles laughed, charging toward them. "Show me what you got!"

"Haaa, I will show what I can do by talking with our fists!" Beowulf yelled back and threw his fist into Achilles's face, forcing him back a step.

"Hehe.. haha!" Sakata giggled joyfully to himself before hefting his ax and he charged at Achilles, swinging at his face as the moonlight reflected off the edge of the ax that came around.

At the same moment, Achilles swung his hero-killing spear forward.

The air shook as the weapons clashed with two servants put inside a deadlock until Beowulf arrived with his dual swords to break up the stalemate.

After seeing the fight starts more different to watch, tracking the battle between Achilles, Beowulf, and Sakata Kintoki have been impossible to follow what is going on as the three servants moved at immense speeds as they clashed, and the ground under them suffered for it.

"You know what, this fight is starting to getting out of control, please go tell them to restrain their thirty of battle and get them clean those mess up after that," Flanna give the order to Atalanta as the small dits and pebbles shower around the training room. "I don't mind if one of the servants actually got killed in spar match," Flanna said in the sarcasm voice as she left. "Because we have more."

Atalanta sighed as she watches the Achilles, Beowulf, and Sakata Kintoki wrestle into the ground while looking up to the sky and show an air of 'Why was she had to be with the three battle maniacs feeding off each other?' being expressed in that one gesture.

"I want to join in!" Alice shouted as she tries to climb over the fence which Atalanta quickly make sure that she doesn't enter into the fight. "It looks so fun!"

Jeanne d'Arc takes an odd look at Atalanta who tilts her head imperceptibly to the side. "Is there a reason I have been your sole focus of attention, Ruler?"

"Oh, do you still remember everything that happens in the Holy Grail War that gave a foul taste in your mouth?" Jeanne d'Arc asks her, had expected anger and threat of violence from when she exorcizes Jack and puts her to rest that cause Atalanta goes mad to hunt her down. What Saint of Orleans hadn't expected was for Atalanta to give her a dull look before going back what she was doing.

"Only half of my memories return to me, I am not the only to remembers half of it as Achilles, and Chiron with their memories half intact as well," Atalanta answer back with a questioning look. "Why do you ask?"

"No, nothing it was a just worthless question." Jeanne d'Arc responses with a small smile. "Please forgive me for asking something so pointless to you."

In the different area of the backyard, a group of Homunculus builds the structure with walls and roof made mainly of transparent materials of glass, cut down trees that were in the way, using the lumber either to augment the existing fence with more fortifications or to build warmers shelters for those who understandably love to sleep outside.

"Brynhild, can you bring the pot toward me?" Enkidu asks the shieldmaiden Valkyries who bring the pot of soil to me. "Good, let me put some flower seed into it."

"Master, you are here, is there something you need?" Brynhild said with a quiet voice.

"Just here to check on the condition of the Greenhouse," Flanna response to her. "I feel that this project is going to be useful for other Casters who need to grow raw ingredients and grow food in winter sometimes poisonous plants in a garden which would benefit use greater in the long run." "So how the greenhouse proceed?"

"With the Homunculus almost done build the roof of the greenhouse, we always start plant seeds in the soil," Enkidu answer her. "So far it has been a good progress."

"Good, with a number of crop plant in the soil, we can make our base highly self-sufficient and get everything we need of the land," Flanna said as she checks to see the soil was water. "I think about sending some of the servants to tend the crop, give them something to do"

"Master, is there a reason for them to tend the garden?" Brynhild asked her.

"Since the Holy Grail summon more servants, I feel like that almost everyone needs to do some meek pastime and a way of dealing with post-traumatic stress," Flanna response to Valkyries who flinch at her last words.

"Like the garden here is a good example of returning from the recent unpleasantness of life or disillusioned with your past life." Flanna stares at Brynhild with a careful look before give her a head pat.

"Yes... I know well of your story, it was one of those mythology books that I was immersed with your legend," she said calmly before looking up at Bryn again, hoping to make eye contact. "And maybe I'll manage to get you to smile before then... right?" Flanna knew of Brynhildr's tale from a myriad of different tellings of different books she'd read. She still felt that this poor woman deserved affection, even if she couldn't provide the kind of love Brynhildr needed the only thing so far that Flanna didn't like was the low self-esteem.

"Thank you, Master, for come up with that thought," Brynhild said with a soft, loveable voice mix with a bit of shy personality.

"You are welcome, I suspect that there are some of the servants who would enjoy plant in the greenhouse," Flanna said as she blows up some bit of dirt off to the ground. "Keep plant more flowers and seeds in those pots, if you need more containers, it right in the garage."


In the Police base of the interrogation room

"Spill it!" There were a drug and gun deals going on there" Detective Augustus shouted as he smashed the table. "Not only that there was a human experiment found out to be animals and human parts mix into Chimera!" His eyes narrowing in irritation. "Now tell us any details you may have. "Who were you working with!?"

Detective Valerio leans on the wall started scanning the police interrogation room. He watches the man who goes by the name Vincent being interrogated, dressed in a plain commonplace suit that didn't draw attention and an ordinary-looking person with no, particularly distinguishing features except for a superior look on his face.

Besides this person was one of those importantly looked suspects which in hope of make this guy spill any information that he has. Unluckily he was unwilling to be cooperative and the only fact that they got from his so-called claims to be a former Western intelligence hitman who ran morally questionable ops on behalf of the United Kingdom despite nothing matching to their data files.

"What are you looking so smug about?" Detective Augustus growled out, wanted to do nothing more than to strike the man in the face. "We know what we saw there in the container and on the table."

"We have friends," Vincent looked up towards Augustus. "Powerful friends."

A hand cupped Vincent's head and turned him around to Valerio who stares right into his eyes.

"Oh, I'm sure you do," Valerio stated, allowing his eyes to burn through the man. "However, unless so-called your 'friends' happen to be the president or the American officials then you have no 'friends' worthy of note." "Now tell me are your group responsible for recent incidents?"

"Our group is something that you don't want to know about, we aren't what you think," Vincent said with a slasher smile. "We aren't responsible for those events, we mostly keep it from the general public."

"What to point of killing? "Did your group kill people to keep whatever this is from being revealed?" Valerio told with steel voice in his voice. "What do you mean, exactly?"

"We do and would keep the secrets just like we did for two thousand years." Vincent shakes his head. "Trust me, your badge and a gun won't hold them for a moment." "All of you already know too much so you are not secure no longer."

"Either way, we are safe here, and I have several connections within multiple law enforcement agencies as well as Interpol and other world organizations." Valerio rises his eyebrows, he wasn't typing of person to be easily scared.

"Bullshit. This guy's fucking with us." Detective Augustus yells in anger. "It's no use! We waste our time talking to this guy." "He does not give any useful information that we need to know what is going there."

The interrogation door open to reveal Orlando Reeve and his secretary Vera Levitt. "Detective Augustus, maybe I should handle this interrogation?" He asks the Detectives. "I can make him talk about what knowledge he knows for you."

"Do what you can. I'll be outside, take a smoke." Detective Augustus said to him. "Make this guy talk, I don't care what method you use."

"Are you sure about this Orlando?" Detective Valerio replied with concern. "This guy had talked in riddles about some hidden organization and how they going to silence us all."

Orlando grabs a chair in the room and repositions it, then sits down facing Vincent. Vera Levitt stands behind him. "Trust me I can make him talk, just leave us for a while." Which the Detectives close the door and left the room.

"Ah, the "good cop, bad cop" routine?" Vincent stated with a smug smile as he does a sarcastic clap.

"Not exactly." The police chief of Snowfield replies him unhumorous. "In fact, it takes a gut to travel in this nation without any concern of raids from those servants who guard the area." "I am sure that I can thank them for leaving you in our care so we sure can't have magi wandering around the city who didn't manifest any Command Spells."

That when the room turns cold as Vincent face slowly turn into a wide-eyed shock and horror as those cold words chilled him to the bone. The mage opened his mouth to ask who he was but found out that he was unable to speak. "Unfortunately, we don't want you to cast your magecraft here in this room to signal your men who are in their cells ready to unleash their thaumaturgy, I got my force near to their cell doors." "They won't be escaping anytime soon."

"It'd be a real pain if you went around causing trouble on top of the Holy Grail War. The Association and the Church are trouble enough." Orlando Reeve slowly waved his right hand which the mage felt a shock. "Now let see what knowledge you have in your mind and don't want to leave single stuff behind."


"Jesus." Chief Orlando Reeve muttered to himself as he was sitting at his desk, staring at the horrid photos and files that Sergeant Jeffery Smith had placed inside a black binder. His heft was leafing through the pages while using a pen to sound out the words. "Are you sure that the pieces of information you got are true?"

Jeffery Smith was standing over him, a grim look on his face as he grabs his cigarette. "Trust me, I am sure that all of the pieces of evidence that we gather were true from my group." "We want the evidence that was shown to you without looking like we are insane." He wasn't sure Chief Orlando Reeve was the sort who'd believe the evidence, in fact, he has a hard time agreeing to himself for giving the proof in front of him.

"I simply find it hard to believe from what you have found but now I think about it, I am forced to agree with you on this files." Orlando Reeve said evenly. "In fact, I don't know what would the public responds to it if I read this to the press room as I am not sure what to say to them without fright them?"

"Does it really matter in the end?" Jeffery Smith asks him. "I know that people out there want to understand what is going on and who are those servants but we could at least speak who they really are, that we can get them to calm down a little bit that they are not looking for a fight."

Orlando Reeve wasn't sure other superiors react to this report as it possibly had to keep quiet if the news ever leaked out to the general public. Commonly people don't really pay any attention to the tabloids, radio show host and conspiracy theorist when they raved fake stories/claims about those servants are space aliens reach to super soldiers or even gods.

But if Orlando shows this report to his superior who had to announce that who those servants really are, well he wasn't sure how it would go over, but he knew he didn't want to find out. Because most of the cities nearby were in an uproar right now from the shipyard incident with people begin to become unsettled as it led to some accidents that slowly becoming common with people blindly tried escaping the madness of lotting and violence took place.

Every one of the police bases was stretched thin and being a madhouse as it is with every officer, detective and desk jockeys all worked themselves to the bone to keep the peace. With so many officers pulling double shifts, tempers were beginning to wear thin. If that was bad enough, reports of corpses began to land on his desk that casing was tasking process which takes several hours to even weeks depending on the condition of the corpse, most of them were not pretty to said.

"Sir, I do know how much of this reports can cause you headaches but do you think that people will take kindly to the fact that group of dead heroes from the past wields power that could decimate entire nation armies in a single stroke?" Jeffery Smith asked calmly. "But this is just the beginning for today and next time we wouldn't be so lucky."

"I do agree with what you are said but in the aftermath of this incident, the people of the whole world would be forced to ask themselves a difficult question," Orlando said. "Are we safe from them or what do they want?"

"I am not sure how to answer that question but I assume that the group is not looking for a fight," Jeffery answer. "One of my ideas was hoping to request for a meeting with them if giving the chance sir."

"It's no real surprise that your idea is unconventional," The Chief said with rising eyebrow. "I would think about that idea of your but not right way, we still have other stuff to work on."

"Sir," A young officer shouted toward the Chief and Sergeant, interrupting their conversation as he closes the office door. "Bad news."

"Don't tell me," The Chief said with a worry in his face.

"I'm afraid so," He said handing several disturbance reports from the shipyard to his superior. "At this rate, "We're going to run out of body bags to put them in."

Jeffery Smith grimaced, internally agreeing. "We will be going through paperwork for years because of those servants."

"I going to agree with you, this is the first time we get a serious problem after the 9/11 attacks," Orlando Reeve said as he drinks his coffee. "I need to you to go find more evidence about them and then write the report down, send it to me and we can at least show this data to the higher rank." "And at least figure out what to do with them."

"Got it, sir." Jeffery Smith responds, with that he walks out of the office and notice Detective Augustus and Valerio take a smoke.

"The Chief believe us except we are going to need more evidence and a videotape to show and learn the extent of servants powers, warn other nations of the potential threat of them." Jeffery statement them with concern expression, not help that some of the servants that he saw look mentally unbalanced or frightening within their presence. "In hope that we can contact them."

"Oh shit, that is an understatement to said that," Augustus said as he blows the smoke out his mouth. "Start figuring out a way to counter their abilities if they have weaknesses and at the same time that we don't get killed." "I feel like we are going to be in a suicide mission from what our boss orders us to do."

"A tall order indeed." Valerio pulls out his cigarette into the ashtray. "There is a remote-controlled video drone somewhere in the headquarter, we can use survey around the states for a bit."

"If we could found them that is," Jeffery Smith cautioned. "We can found where they are, at a later time." "So how your interrogation progress going with the suspect?"

"Bad," Augustus answer him. "What I got is his smug face and his damn attitude." "God, it makes me want to punch him in the face."

"We decide let Orlando Reeve and his secretary Vera Levitt handle him," Valerio statement him. "I could hope that Orlando can get information from him."

"Do you think we can trust him and his secretary?" Jeffery ask. "About what we found and tell what our plan is?"

"Hmmm, well he is not bad partner which I can give him that, he doesn't complain or act like a smart ass to me," Augustus states his option. "Seem to me, an ok guy."

"A very serious and solemn man with an unknown background, not really much to trust him but I hope we get to know each other little bit," Valerio answer tiredly as he takes a sit on a couch. "I am so tired and going to take a nap." "Wake me up you need me for something."

"What do you think of him, Jeffery?" Augustus asks the Sergeant. "He is a stern and uptight person, don't get me wrong, but something's definitely odd with him. "Do you think Orlando is an agent of the FBI or CIA investigation unit?"

"Don't think so he doesn't look like the type," Jeffery Smith answer him. "But I tell that Orlando is a hard ass, man. "Looks like the part too, in the fancy suit." "We would tell him and his secretary about what we found." "In the meantime, we should go, take a nap, today was a stressful day and I want a clear head tomorrow."

"Yeah, got it," Augustus noted as he put his cigarette in the ashtray. "In the meantime, we should go take a rest at home before Chief order us to some work for us." "I don't want to stick around here."


Back at the Fuyuki City, Japan

At the Homurahara Academy's Archery Dojo, Sakura Matou was helping Taiga Fujimura cleaning the dojo after today's training session. After the Holy Grail war, Sakura's life turned for the better. She became social, a bit assertive and started having friends which cause her to grew popular due to her nice and caring personality plus her good looks give other male students flustered by her presence. She became captain of the archery club. So far, she's doing a great job. Her popularity soared, especially among boys, too bad that Sakura has her eyes on someone we know.

They finished cleaning the dojo. Suddenly, Shinji Matou charges the door open and come inside in a hurry. "Quick! You need to hide me!"

Sakura and Taiga looked at him with confusion on their faces.

"Why Shinji?" Sakura asked her step-brother curiously.

"I don't have time to explain to you! Please! Hide me! They're gonna get me!" Shinji begged them. "At any time now!"

Taiga sighed in resignation. "In the closet." She pointed at it. "Don't make any sound."

Shinji scurried into the closet and closed the door. As Sakura and Taiga processed what just happened, a group of delinquents entered the dojo. They all looked threatening and carried weapons. Sakura hid behind Taiga as she brandished her shinai in case of a fight.

One delinquent stepped forward. From the looks of it, he's the leader of the delinquents.

"Excuse me. Sorry to disturb you, but we're looking Shinji Matou. Have you seen him?" He asked in a surprisingly polite tone.

"No. I have not seen him." Taiga lied while making a quick gaze of the closet.

"Are you sure? I could've sworn I saw him pass this way." The leader said with a suspicious look.

"I'm sure," Taiga said clearly as she stares at delinquent leader right in the eyes

"E-Excuse me. Why are you after him?" Sakura asked curiously, wonder what causes her brother gain trouble for the local delinquents go after him.

The leader's face turned into anger after the mention of him. "That asshole tried to have his way with my little sister. I literally caught him with his pants down."

Taiga gasped out at that last words. Sakura, however, was not that surprised by this. She knew he would do something like this.

"So if you ever see him. Please tell him that if we see him again and also anywhere near to my sister, we're gonna break every single bone on his body." The Delinquent leader said to them. "And break his nut!"

"Alright. I understand your anger. I will deal with him. So please, can you leave the dojo." Taiga said as she points to the door.

"Very well. Let's go men." The delinquents left the dojo.

After that is done, Taiga went to the closet and opened it. In there, lies the scared Shinji try his best not make a sound.

"Are they gone? Oh good." Shinji stepped out of the closet, relieved that he didn't get beat up. "I thought I was a goner," Shinji said as he slowly tries to leave in the backdoor

Before Shinji could get away, he was cut off by a swift slash from Taiga, narrowly missing him. He shrieked and fell to the floor.

"What was that for!?" Shinji exclaimed out.

"Can you explain to me why those guys want to hurt you?" Taiga asked him, just to make sure to listen to both sides of the incident.

"W-W-Well I was enjoying my date. When suddenly, I was being attacked by these brutes for no apparent reason. I tried my best to protect us, but they too many of them. I lured them away from her. That's about it." Shinji replied with a smug smile on his face, obviously lied to Taiga on his side of the picture.

Taiga could easily tell he's lying. She sighed. "Look, I don't have time for this. Because of you, that gang tracked dirt into the dojo that we just cleaned. So you're gonna help me clean this. I had a long day." Taiga point to the closet that stuff with mops and clothes where Shinji hid in.

"Eh! Why do I have to-" Shinji was interrupted by Taiga, pointing him with her shinai at his face.

"No excuses. Or maybe I should tell the principal about your behavior." Taiga said lightly hinted that maybe it was time to start having a serious talk about his actions.

"...Fine." Shinji grumbled as he took the mop and a cloth from the closet and started cleaning dirt on the dojo floor.

After the fifth Holy Grail war, Shinji didn't change as much like Sakura. He mellowed from the suffering he went but was still yet a troublesome person and has let go of the desire for the Holy Grail as his wish was to acquire the ability to utilize magecraft. He has amassed a small fortune by selling his grandfather's magical items at Mage's Association. He kept some of his magical items for nefarious purposes in the future, if he ever needs it. He is known in the school as a scumbag. Girls only date him for his money not like he would notice that fact.

"You know Shinji, it wouldn't hurt to change your attitude. That way people would like you." Sakura said to her brother. After the fifth Holy Grail war, Shinji starts getting along with Sakura once again like back when they were young and has finally realized that being a Magus is not worth dying for it with the great burden of obsession with sorcery lifted off his back. "It would not hurt to try it."

"Like me? Please. People already like me. I'm rich and handsome. What's not to love? They're just jealous." Shinji explained a smug smile. "Besides why do they care about like me."

Sakura sighed. She was hoping that Shinji would grow up and act responsible like an adult he was but it seems like he is still abrasive, though to a lesser degree and often sulks about everything.

A few minutes of cleaning, Shinji took a break and sat down on the floor. He pulls out his laptop from his backpack and began surfing the internet.

"Shinji, you're supposed to be cleaning," Sakura said with narrow eyes. "Not check your laptop."

"In a minute. Just checking a few things that I miss." Shinji reassures her. Then, he spotted something that caught his eye on the internet. A new article from America about a battle at a shipyard. He began reading it and was stunned by it. He knew the situation in America, but to think the Sixth Holy Grail war escalated this much attention and destruction. It's crazy, but, since he is not involved, he doesn't really care after all those hell he went through from the last one, it was not worth it for his life.

"Shinji. I told you to keep clean." Sakura peered over his shoulder, reading the article. Her eyes widened, the situation over there has worsened then before.

The shot showed an American flag, forlornly waving in the breeze while smoke came billowing in the background with the flashing headlines below flashed: AMERICA UNDER ATTACK?

Like Shinji, she also knew the war in America. She's constantly worried about Shirou and Rin's safety.

''What are you guys doing?" Taiga asked as she notices that they stop cleaning the floor and walk toward them.

"For those of you tuning in just now, what you are seeing is a camera-footage of the battle in a shipyard. Police have cordoned off the area, but leaking videos spread out online showing three side battle."

"Sensei, check this out." He showed her the article. Taiga read the article and she was shocked. To think that something like this could really happen. There was a video of the battle, he clicked on that. It showed warriors fighting against the police force. It was hell on earth with building blow into piece and corpse lay everywhere.

"So far, no official word yet from the White House on what is motive for that super soldier."

"From you are about to see may shock you. Viewer discretion is advised."

They watch as a SWAT officer returned fire at a magus and other scenes show magus chops into the police officer's left collarbone with a machete-style knife who then drops to his knees as the magus then forcefully removes the weapon from the officer's neck.

A Chimera roars out and changes into the police cars until a Chinese general yells a batter cry and swings his two-handed halberd at a group of Chimera which sends them flying into the air.

An armored Greek warrior impales a magus while carrying a girl on his back.

Two servants take pot-shot at magus and criminal in their knee or neck while giving cover firing to their allies.

A camera' crew on the building caught a clear bird's eye view of the carnage unfolding just a few blocks away from a warehouse and a sinking ship was on fire.

In the air, several police helicopters were buzzing the around the scene, though they could see a helicopter bearing USMC insignia on it, joining them.

A police officer shoves capture magus with their mouth tie up into SWAT van while another one trains his gun on them.

A pair of NY officers were standing just out the borderline of the shipyard, furiously shouting and waving at those drivers still in their cars, trying to clear the way of SWAT truck and several police cars driving bravely into the war zone to try and restore order down there.

"This just in: President Bush expected to address the nation."

Sakura hoped that things don't get worse. "Shirou, Rin... please be safe. I have a bad feeling about this." She thought.


Well, it's been too long, hasn't it?

I am sorry for 8 months has passed. I was trying to be done writing without prolonging the scenes. With all honesty, the reason why I haven't been uploading was my slow lack of inspiration. It was like a writer's block but at the same, it wasn't. I can still write on, it's that I can't think any ideas to move the plot on. Honestly, I keep think that's something wrong with my story well, I'm sure as hell my grammar is subpar and my motivation to write on just almost disappeared. Ideas come into my head and stopped writing it down on a piece of paper which I couldn't imagine anything with the direction.

I still have ideas but on paper, it looks worse

Guest chapter 12. Apr: P.S. To the previous chapter. Goddamn autocorrect: I use Grammarly Check app to help autocorrect some words.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 10 In the Shirou vs Benjamin how about Ben wins and when Shirou expects him to kill him instead Benjamin talks to him and his points of view: No, Benjamin doesn't stop to talk his foes and would spend his time to focus on surviving the battle.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 10 How about when Saber and Archer see Rin and Shirou instead of them joining their old masters they instead have them join their new ones by seeing their new masters mission: Like that would be simple and Flann would treat them with barely-concealed contempt and suspicion when Saber and Archer bring them into her house.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 13 I agree with Lu Bane Na that not every female servant that falls for or teases the Chaldea master should be in the pairing with Benjamin. Some servants like Kiara and Medb are simply lustful by nature and others like Euryale and Stheno just like to tease and really should not be in the pairings. Here is a list of female servants who in my opinion are plausible to be romance partners. Kiyohime, Tamamo-no-mae, Altera, Nero, Okita, Tamamo Cat, Serenity, Musashi, Circe, Jeanne, Jeanne Alter(maybe?) Semiramis(maybe?) Elizabeth Bathory(maybe?) Shuten(maybe?) Raikou(big maybe?) There you go keep in mind the ones with maybe are more ambiguous. The Female servants who are not listed are a just platonic relationship: Thank for list them with good reason of not pairing with Benjamin which it gets really annoying with reviews to keep send request pairing.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 14 I forgot to add Ereshkigal to the list. Sorry if you think I'm trying to give you romance ideas I'm just trying to give you a roster of female servants who I think are romanceable and not just some random pairing idea. Now that Galahad's true form has been revealed will he appear in Mash form or not I'm fine with either but I prefer Mash form. I know this is a random idea but do you think maybe have BB have a ship tease with Benjamin and treat him as her senpai but at the same time likes to mess with him like a troll, it would be a nice contrast to Shirou's relationship with Sakura: That would be ok and not ridiculous one, I agree with that random idea of your with Benjamin and BB but let hope she doesn't enjoy screwing with Flanna.

I prefer Galahad's true form because I like the style. Still, Galahad is acting odd compared to his reputation and I feel like he considers to be the noblest knight, but what he did in his first appearance is just a guy who runs from a problem that he may have caused, it might indirectly, but still he's almost completely absent because he's decided to do the bare minimum to help Chaldea, not even passing along his name or how to use his abilities to Mash. God, it like I am listening to an evangelical Christian prick with super-knight power from sound of it.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 20 When Gilgamesh appears, have him see Rin and Shirou then mock them by being alive again and they get surprised before the fight with Benjamin and Shirou: While that idea of your had some promise and it could work.

Guest chapter 13. Apr 22 Oh man, I got a super idea how will Benjamin save money from being eaten by Servants. You know that there are many food challenges in America? Well, why don't you make servants vs food fights? Sure, it will raise a lot of attention, but as long as they don't take challenges in Jersey, well why not?: That could work I guess and I need start to think about how it would work.

Guest chapter 1. Apr 22 I like the idea of Shirou seeing Benjamin as a counterpart to himself and encouraging Shirou to follow his dream but to do it smartly and not just run around like a headless chicken. He should also tell Shirou he shouldn't do everything alone. I can imagine hearing this, Emiya will begin to get jealous and contemplate that if he hadn't done everything alone maybe things would have been different for him. On that note, how will Shirou react when he sees Benjamin's relationship with Ereshkigal and BB and how it contrasts from his relationship with Rin and Sakura. They both are in love with Benjamin but Ereshkigal, while also a tsundere is nicer than Rin and BB is a troll that enjoys bullying Benjamin while Sakura is not: A words of support came from Shirou "I understand your pain" is all he can say to Benjamin. I think that good reason why EMIYA fails on his goal is that with a poor social skill and poor communication skills with an issue of tended to be pushy and stubborn when it came to what he believed in, which alienated some allies.

Guest chapter 1. Apr 22 What character do you consider being a true hero?: No one as there is no character that I consider being a true hero.

Guest chapter 30. May 1 How about Ben and Flanna make an announcement to the world like he how Cell did in DBZ to talk about the cell games where they tell the world the secret of the magus and the holy grail so they can't exterminate an entire population of people and the government would have known and fight back against the Magus and executioners: That would be a really bad idea to do that and make no reason to do a drama announce for the world.

Guest chapter 30. May 22 If you do the fire emblem awakening x over will also do one with fire emblem fate x Fate Stay Night since that game has a story between to nations at war so the servants could help there: I would think about it as the idea still good on paper.

Guest chapter 30. May 25 How about this idea for the fire emblem awakening x fate the children from the future get extra skills from the servants that are their parents like for Severa gets Arondight and Gerome rune magic based on caster Cu Chulainn and which of the servants would you pair up with the fire emblem characters: That sound plausible enough and can work on paper for now.

Guest chapter 30. Jun 25 In the code grass idea where will the servants participate in the battle with Clovis or Cordelia, also have Emiya say to Suzaku and Lelouch that you are a child that wants the perfect dream but its time to wake up now to the real world and have Gilgamesh show the world his power as the true king and the emperor and his plan is nothing more than a joke: I agree on you with Emiya chewed Suzaku and Lelouch out for their hypocrisy and self-righteous preaching as Archer see them as a pathetic whiner. Gilgamesh will spit on Emperor Charles zi Britannia's plan or his real plan regardless, he's likely to slaughter on Emperor out of hand, because kill God which will cause instrumentality and 'create a world without lies would be so pathetic by Gilgamesh's standards and not even be funny as a joke.

Guest chapter 30. Jul 28 Can you add either in the sequel or in a new fate story Ageha from Butterfly affection you can make her be an experiment from a magus: I think about it and I am not sure that I had to go through another video to watch it.

Guest chapter 30. Aug 3 A Yugioh x over with fate could work since the show does have supernatural elements like ancient Egypt and the supreme kings also for decks for the servants how about Arthur and her knights get noble knights, Alexander the great gladiator beast or ancient gears, Medusa reptilian/venom, samurai servants six samurai, Brunnhilde Nordic, nursery rhyme toons or golden castle or Stomberg, Jeanne eatos deck, Vlad iii vampire, emiyw destiny heroes, emiya alter-evil heroes and for other decks ninja, volcanic, amazoness, cyber dragons, zodiacs, morphtronic, red eyes, roids and fire fist: Well, the crossover sound nice idea but on paper because I don't know much about Yugioh card or its game rule despite watch the tv show when I was little child.

Guest chapter 1. Aug 2 Hey question, I know this is unrelated but what do you servants reaction would be to Dante from devil may cry and the abyss watchers from dark souls 3?: They see those games fun and unique.

Guest chapter 30. Sep 6 How about In Highschool of the dead idea oc master help the servants with people be like the leader and the guy to keep order in the group: Idea sound nice but it would be a short story if I write it down.

Guest chapter 30. Sep 6 In the akame ga kill x over Will the servants go to aria house to save sayo like give her an antidote to the poison and heal her wounds she would join their group instead of night raid since they saved her plus have moment where night raid to recruit the servant they turned them down also since servants are way stronger than them they wouldn't be dragged to the base also how about Arash or robin hood save sayo and he falls in love with one of them: That is nice ideas but don't go over the top on romance stuff.

Guest chapter 28. Oct 2 Since you are finally putting OC Servants in this story you should put George S. Patton as a Rider class because he can drive a tank and a generals Jeep as his riding mounts and N. Phantasms and he is a good leader back in WW2 and literally brought fear to the Nazis and the man loves war. Also if you can't find what stats you want to give him you should go to Deviantart and find a guy name UnlimitedBlankWorks and look for yourself: I do not take any OC servant that you are offered in this reviews section because there would be no more OC servants that reviews are offered to me as I don't like it when people don't understand that NO means NO. Someone in past asks me the same thing with Erwin Rommel but I said no to him. Do you not understand what I was said about OC servants

Guest chapter 1. Oct 7 I get the feeling if I ask you to summon an OC Servant you will get mad and I don't want you to get mad: Just don't say it.

Guest chapter 29. Oct 7 Never thought that you put an elf princess OC in this story because there has never been an Elf Servant before in any other fanfics like ever: Well, imagine Skuld Scandinavian' face to be Asuna Yuuki's original avatar to be Fairy Queen, Titania from Sword Art Online. In fact, there I want to try this out of making an OC servant that can fit into my story without making them steal the spotlight and see if the reviews like them. In fact, this is my first time making OC servants and would try to make their personality have more soul into them.

Guest chapter 30. Oct 6 Have Gilgamesh be resurrected before the battle with Shirou and Rin since he would want to have his revenge in at least humiliating them and reaction could be like z fighters reacting to Frieza in the resurrection of F movie: I watch the movie and it was not really much of shock reaction to me but still it is close enough.

Guest chapter 30. Oct 6 I have to agree on Flanna about a punishment of death for those Magi FUCKERS and the SHIT they have done over the years and Shirou and Rin would let this happen. Also, something tells me Benjamin and Flanna might tell one of their Assassin Servants to kill Loreli and the Association will fall permanently. And how tall is Lu Bu actually is he about Hercules height: Flanna doesn't want any magus society to act like they can do anything and get away with it as she knows that most of them still hold an outdated belief that their magecraft remain superior before the modern technology and that their magecraft can explain everything (It don't). She wants to show the Clock Tower and the Holy Church's society that their time is over and their mad projects are done for.

Because that there are some who commit many horrendous crimes to understand the secrets of magecraft and to reach the Root. Flanna would chew Shirou, Luviagelita, and Rin out for being a dog of the Clock Tower and openly mock them for being some kindly hero when in reality, they are more like secret state agent who cover the incident up and take Holy Grail while expecting rest of the world would return back to normal. The sibling cannot understand Shirou, Rin, and Luviagelita because their magu's standards compared to regular mortal standards. Yes, they might do it as Benjamin and Flanna would also show extremely low opinion on Barthomeloi Lorelei, see her more than an annoyance and extremely arrogant to believe that as long as she has a strong base, she needs no special abilities which are not a good thing in a war which doesn't end in a matter of days or weeks.

Hercules's height is 253 cm equals 8.3 feet while Lu Bu's heights are 225 cm equals 7.38 feet. So Lu Bu is little short then Hercules that if you take my word for it.

Guest chapter 30. Oct 6 If the Grail is going to summon Gilles De Rais I hope you summon him as a Saber class because he was mega disturbing when he is a Caster class and killing innocent children. And if he is summoned as a Caster Atalanta will not hesitate to kill him because he is a child molester and she REALLY hates those. But Joan will probably stop her from killing him and turn Gilles into a Saber class and it would be fun seeing a more sane Gilles instead of an insane child Murderer one: I was in the middle of how to do with that issue and this could work just for now.

Guest chapter 30. Nov 20 So Benjamin is gonna becomes a more competent leader: Yes as he doesn't know how to properly direct them or doesn't know what to do with servants as he been treating them more like a house guest than a warrior in a mystical time then barely given them an order.

Guest chapter 29. Oct 19 It will be a suicide attack for the Einzberns because none of them will win against a Servant because they haven't met the new Servants, the Red and Black faction Servants and something tells be Jub will probably be killed by Hercules when he gets to New Jersey and that would be satisfying for me and Hercules because no one likes him: At this stage do the Einzberns group even care at this point as they try to make homunculi strong enough to threaten Magic Association enforcers in one-on-one combat and hope to par with Servants. They lost their patient to try to claim the Holy Grail either legal or illegal way that they stop play and decide do this themselves.

Guest chapter 30. Oct 7 I hope you don't put Columbus in this story because that idiot thought he was in India and he might try to bring slavery back and NO ONE LIKES SLAVERY, not at all and if he is summoned I hope let Benjamin and Flanna tell the Servants to either kill him or lock him up tight so he doesn't escape: This is one thing that I don't like how they portrayed Christopher Columbus in Fate Grand Order slightly more negative than ever before. Columbus is not an incompetent moron or a genocidal maniac, he is a complicated figure, there are many people who more or less refuse to see the shade of grey and make biased history version of Columbus, try to make him more of a monster then he was really. We all know that most people live in the moral gray area but some people don't want to be true, we love to categorize heroes and villains into the black and white box as examples because we want the world to be nice and simple, good and evil.

I want you to go watch "In Defense of Columbus: An Exaggerated Evil" by Knowing Better in YouTube which the video takes extremely neutral perspective trying to deconstruct centuries of documentation after the fact, and points to how he wasn't great but also wasn't the worst. Well, it is long 28 min but I want to make a point when historian people try to categorize good and evil moral so much that it is a fictionalized version of him than real him. He speaks medieval Spanish which his quotes have been twisted and amplified during translation where pop-cultures tries to over-simplification obviously cut quotes that are also neither the beginning nor end of the sentence because there is clearly more to it. People seem to like to exaggerate and even go so far as to fabricate evidence or cut quotes from his journal in order to discredit, downplay and demonize him.

To answer your question, I would summon him but in a realistic way where he is not designed for a person to be hateful and despise. I know this is considered mainstream in recent years, but I think it is ridiculous plus with that With us or against us mentality. This idea that whenever something evil happens someone particular can be blamed and punished for it whatever in life or in politics is just hopeless.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 5 To tell you the truth I'm a tad disappointed this chapter was shorter than usual but it was still good. I think I can speak for everyone that we're all aware you have real-life problems and writer's block happens to everyone but doesn't give up. No matter what anyone says this story is great. You said you had problems imagining where the plot is gonna go, well I think might be able to help you a bit. this review is gonna be pretty long...so bear with me. One more thing before that. I know that trying to make your story realistic but there is such a thing as too realistic ya'know: Thank forgive me some good ideas that would help with my writer's block.

Guest chapter 30. Apr 5 It's me again. I wanted to ask some questions but my last review was too about that.

1) When the war is over with and the servants settle into their new lives will their personalities become more mellow and act like the servants in Fate/Hollow Ataraxia, Carnival Phantasm or Fragments of Chaldea?: Yeah their personalities would because more relaxed

2)Will Sylvie have a role in this story or is she just there?: A small role in my story as I still have some plan for her.

3)If Medusa is part of Shirou's harem will she go with him and to be with Sakura again?: Yes, she would go with Shirou's harem.

4) I don't grasp Benjamin's appearance very much for Flanna I imagine her to look like Scathach with maroon hair, different hair, style and tan skin possibly due to being in the sun a lot in the army or it's her natural skin color. What color is his hair brown or black and is his tan complexion due to sunbathing or is it natural?: Flanna's main appearance is Kiryuu Iyori from Izayoi no Hanayome and when disguised, she looks like Vorona from Durarara using colored eye contracts lenses, skin lotion, and dyes her hair blonde with a simple white menacing mask with crescent eye slits with black curvy lines as eyelashes. For Benjamin's main appearance is Kenshi Masaki from Tenchi Muyo! War on Geminar and when disguised, he wears an uncanny, full-face mask set with a bloodstone and reddish robe. There was a narrow crack running along eye level, but that did not even reveal the color of the eyes underneath it.

5) For Circe/Caster of Okeanos to be a wife for BenjamiMy room My room dialogue reveals she resents Odysseus for rejecting and leaving her, the same with Glaucus and turned his beloved Scylla into a monster shows she's kinda yandere and would hate the idea of Benjamin rejecting her. It would also be funny if they got married and Medea who sees Benjamin as a little brother becomes her uncle: I am laughing at that idea of your and wonder it could work

6) Have Helena Blavatsky and Da Vinci be Ben and Flanna's teachers in magecraft. Even though the siblings are not magi they can still learn and understand magic in order to better deal with it. Maybe one day they can learn more about magic than any modern magus ever could: Yeah, that can work too as the sibling can not really do much against mind control and felt really powerless to fight normal magecraft spell so they need to study every one of them.