I look forward to the next chapters.

So how much do you actually know about Nasuverse that isn't from the wiki? Most Saber class are strong not because they're good with a sword, but because they have very high magic resistance, they would beat the shit out of any normal Caster servant. Secondly, Artoria is FAR from average, she's one of the high tier servant in Fate. She got a precognition that allows her to dodge attacks before they're there, she has high luck which render Gae Bolg useless, Excalibur is one of the strongest NP there is and grows in strength the larger the threat is to Earth. She also has Avalon, an absolute defense that blocks out anything and everything.

Also, Benjamin is the biggest Gary Sue I've ever seen. No normal college student can ever hope to best a standard magus, much less someone like Shirou and Rin. No, Benjamin would not have a chance against Shirou, if they ever fought Shirou would win without even projecting due to the combat knowledge he got from Archer. You could've at least write him as a thug who has combat experience but nope, just a normal boy, like every other typical anime protagonist. He also befriends all of the servants FAR too easily. Enkidu I can get. Ozymandias? He would kill him if he even think about him telling him to do something. Do you have any idea how much Shirou has to do for Artoria to even like him?

I like this story's premise. Servants vs the US military? Epic. But your execution of the idea is horrible.

And whilst Assassin will lose in a straight fight against Saber (and every other class), they normally go for the masters rather than servants

Don't understand the hate for the saber class. In a normal grail war they are considered the best class not just because of their swordsmanship and NP but also because they usually have the highest magic resistance out of all the classes and their knightly attitude which will reduce the chance of them betraying their master. Magic resistance makes enemy master basically the same as normal humans and reduces difficulty against casters. Sabers also generally have good stats allowing them keep up with other knight other classes.

Even though there are Sabers that don't have beam NPs and are more subtle, the one's that do can use it to counter the NPs of the rider class, which are normally very strong to make up for the lower stats generally found in that class.

So Sabers are considered the best class because their skill sets, passive buffs, and Noble phantasm allow them to counter or compete with 5/7 of the normal classes available.

I didn't include beserker because most classes can defeat them so I won't single them out as being countered by savers

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anybody here eh i'm probably talking to myself but i'll say i really enjoying this story it was good start the middle was kind a of awkward but it end off in a good way but it leave me off with a few questions
1. why are they so surprised
i talk about how magi experiment on people the mafia is a thing human trafficking was always a problem and weird stuff corrupted politician is not even funny so understand there anger but i though was i little bit of a over reaction
2. mystery
revealing mystery to the world cause a lot more problems them just pissing off magi it messes up True Ancestors, Dead Apostles, Servants, Spiritual Bodies, as well as Phantasmal Species and probably pisses off both Ayala and Gaia so wouldn't they'll be targeted by all of those that's the reason i see the mage association as a necessary evil cause the world's fuck if they don't do their job which they do it just in most of our setting the association have little power to interfere or can't really do anything against it also the
association
i'll say this there not that incompetent cause they exist to research and to protect mystery that means one of there main goal is to let that not happen in fat/apoc the reason they didn't help because cause last time they went against a servant they sent 50 enforcers they all got killed and some of them got murder by jack so yeah they did try to help it was just pointless also it's not mages there also spell casters who use magecarft for practical use so they probably so what i'm saying is that your stereotyping them too much it's not just mages who going after its people use magecarft in general probably way more competent and all those rare people who have magecaft from the age gods become not so rare where there all gunning for you also i won't say shirou and the others are going be master tacticians but there not as incompetent so i'll say not Fianna but obliviously better than Benjamin one thing i say mage user are that they are a good deal paranoid for various so wouldn't they pause at someone using multiple servants and wouldn't jump gun hoe into a unknown situation (just look at the cyrpters) in opinion they would not component as the detectives of the story but won't look like they have their head up there ass 80% of the story

benjamin: i like him reminds of the fgo protag at the start of the journey but way more refined (cause of age) and detailed (cause he's not a self-insert)
fianna: way too preachy maybe becuaes unlike kiritsugu we actually knows what going in her head and she just doesn't shut up about mages being bad people maybe as person that makes sense but hearing her repeat it in story makes her come off as annoying as crap even if she has good points she just kept on beating us over the head with the vague ones which makes a lot of her more normal aspects jarring as hell or just makes her distrust of servant as less reasonable and more well, annoying i'm glad to see she got that curved in the later chapters
3. servants
OK, let me explain why caster are not seen as good class two words: magic resistance with a high enough one complete ignore everything the caster class can do outside of NPs and even with that, ex ones can levels they can and even if they don't outright negate it, it's still reduced so from the start they're at a disadvantage cause half of the servant have it it doesn't even help that the holy grail war last two weeks to a month which not enough time to actually plan big and even if they do servant with high magic resit can literally ignore it or "oh hey, look at that saber over there with a anti-fortress NP'' and for assassins it's more they don't have a lot of frame that crux them giving weak stats which a component enough magi can overcome because no magic resit and presence concealment has a crux that when you start preparing for the attack your presence is raveled which normal servant can sense and actively combat ready mages can dodge and why would they be on edge when they know assassin would be around gunning for them and the reason why the saber class is called the strongest is because they won the most holy grail wars in cannon.

Huhhh...But even after all that i still love this story it's unique and interesting and i enjoy the detectives point of view (even through i don't remember any of there names) and that really would love if you start writing again i can't get you but can at least update it to tell us what your're going do with story i would be fine with either just tell us something

i do not think alayawill of the mankindwill allow that kind of disturbance in her presence, author should not forgot about her, as she will literally sends her counter force (killer machine) who hurts mankind itself, letting the world knows about magecraft in that world is more than enough for it to see it as singularity (in fgo term: chaldea would also knows it, and summon there master to kill him or at least retrive the grail itself) and the mc should already become mincemeat because of it.
The mc was more wishy washy than i expected, author say his a 'common sense man's but a common sense man will report that kind of event, at least in mage association. author also include those in the government, but for me? its ridiculous those dead apostle was enough for it to destroy them forgot about hypnotism of mage association to control them, even common people knows it, the hypnotise government are more than enough to suppress them, until the commotion died down. if the government (miracle itseft) tried to resist, the counter force will come to at least supprem them (to make the people died minimun as possible) base on my deduction.

Continua porfavor que tu historia es muy buena, si pudiera te daría 100 likes por la calidad de tu historia.

While I did enjoy your story as of last year since the latest chapter but everyone thinks your dead and no longer updating your profile. It was a fun read of your story but cannot admit your in a longer writers block to the point that its a dead fic and I moved on with other fanfics such as RWBY crossovers or FGO Crossovers fanfics.

By the time you read this review I'm probably the last reader (assuming some add more after me). Where ever you are hope your alright.

It would be funny when Medusa(Rider)goes out “hunting” for Magi when she throws one of her Spear Chains at one of them and say “GET OVER HERE” like Scorpion does in the Mortal Kombat series.

It will be weird for Medusa seeing her younger self and her Monstrous self.

This is probably one of the top ten fics that I ever read. However, I do have some pretty important questions. Actually, I have a lot of questions. For one, if avenger is going summon alter or (and) avenger type summons. I just don't see why Benjamin, Flanna or Avenger or any of the servants would start a fight with each other. Especially when they realize or Avenger tells them what he did. Sure there would be tensions but I don't think Flanna and Ben would be trigger happy against a group of servants and everything would calm down. It definitely is an interesting plot point and drama for sure.

I also don't see how the Demon Boar that killed Fate Zero Lancer or Fafnir that Siegfried killed would a real threat to Ben or Flanna. Especially when Ozymandias, Enkidu, Achilles, and Lancer Artoria would probably easily solo them both by themselves. More easily if they are against a huge group of servants. However, if you use divine beasts that can give the servant an actual fight which I hope is not the case because I think that would ruin the story because of the massive destruction and problems which arise from the fight. Same as before an interesting plot point.

Also, does Ben or Flanna knows about the counterforce (Alaya and Gaia) or the United States Mage association and what do they think about it. If not how would they react?

How would the police react to 'servants' true power (this includes the types and other classes) when they can clearly do a lot more damage than just a few building of power but many having destructive capabilities to literal end the world or even planet bust. For example, Gilgamesh with Ea and pretty much-unlimited mana.

Would the police OC comes over to personally talk to the siblings and even the other servants? How would they react?

How would the Mage Association (both) and the church react if the siblings are not exactly summoning 'average' type servants (Enkidu and Achilles plus others)?

How would the public react to Flanna and Ben and the other servants when they are revealed?

For Shiro vs Ben, I just don't see why Ben would get into a situation to fight Shiro. Especially when there are servants specifically want to protect Ben from harm like Enkidu.

Is the command seals for Ben and Flanna regenerative like in Fate Grand Order. Will they ever use them.

An idea for your MC to earn money is to stop and steal from criminals and magus bases.

Will Grand Servants keep their Grand titles since it allows them to fight 1v1 the Beast class?

Will you summon the younger versions of each servant like Santa Lily and child Gil?

In your other story if you going to make one for Gate thus fought. How will they react to Ben and Flanna 'servants' (includes Types and Beast) especially when they find out that many of them can planet bust, world ender, more powerful than gods or a combination of gods?

This is much bigger than I thought. Sorry about that but I hope you can answer my questions in the story.

Hey I know this is random but, what do heroic spirits (all of them) think about guts from berserk, all that he has gone through his entire life.?

How about for that Fate x akame ga kill x over the servants train someone to be the new emperor to give the people someone better

Of all the other Servants you could summon which I don't mined. So what gave you the Idea to first summon Enkidu, Atalanta, Chiron, and Alice. Why them specifically.

Neat chapter and has Sakura even scene Star Wars whenever people in those movies say THAT LINE. Also have scene or heard Castlevania Lord of Shadows because the designs on the Bosees are cool. And the most coolest design of the Bosses is the Black Knight Golem and he does look like a good subordinate because either Medea, Advicebron, or Paracelsus could make him be as powerful like a Servant and stronger than a Berserker and he acts just like one. But he’s kinda big at least 14ft tall meaning he’s taller than Darius III, strong armor, has Magic powers both Dark and Fire, and has a really Great Sword that is also a Chain Whip. Also fun fact he’s a Frankenstein like Monster patch up from different body parts of killers and Fran(Berserker of Black) might get along him because he also seeks redemption. Finally THIS IS NOT AN OC IDEA I’m just wondering if one the Caster Servants can make him.