Alright time for the first chapter of Beyond the Veil, V2

Note! This story was inspired by When Two Realms Meet by Gavedin seeing as I'm doing the same thing with having Jiraiya in the story with Naruto.

But enough of that, on with the story. I do not own To Love-ru or Naruto. :…(

Beyond the Veil

Prologue

In a large and cave dark nine figures stood on the fingers of a large grotesque statue. Each person wore a black coat with red clouds on it.

"Jiraiya and the nine tails jinchuriki have gone to ground" Said a hunched over figure. This was Sasori a nuke-nin from the Hidden Sand Village.

"This sets our plans back quite a bit, Jiraiya and the nine tails will be impossible to find given Jiraiya's status as a spymaster." Said another with eyes that had three rings in them.

"Yes from what my contacts say they will be gone for roughly three years." Sated Sasori who then glanced at a figure with red eyes that stared back. "The exact same time for Orochimaru's Body possession jutsu is able to be used."

"Hehe," Laughed a shark like man named Kisame, "Would you look at that Itachi, looks like your brother in the mix once again"

Itachi simply stared at the shark-like man and said "He may be but I believe Jiraiya-sama would have taken Uzumaki regardless of my brother defecting to the snake."

"Not surprising that someone form the leaf screwing up our plans again, yeah." Said a blonde man with a pony tail as he glared daggers at Itachi.

"Enough Deidara you cast aside all your prior grudges the moment you join the Akatsuki." Said the ringed eye man sternly. "Do I make myself clear." He said narrowing his eyes daring the blonde to open his mouth in defiance.

"Yes, lord Pein" Deidara said bowing his head in submission.

"Good" said the now named Pein as he turned to address the rest of the group "Now, because of the nine tails going into hiding, we cannot go after the other jinchuriki until he returns else he will just remain hidden. We should use this time instead to gather intelligence and funds for our organization." He stated.

"Good" said impatient voice that belongs to a hooded figure with red and green eyes. "This gives me a chance for me to go back beyond the Veil and manage my project."

"What the fuck are you talking about Kakuzu?!" said a loud figure next to him. This was Hidan a nuke-nin from the Village Hidden in Boiling Water.

"Yes," said Pein "What are you talking about?"

"You didn't think all this time I just went around collecting bounties like I am now?" Kakuzu asked.

"Actually we did" stated the only female among the group.

"Really" He said "I'm over of hundred I get bored and curious." Kakuzu stated making everyone including Pein sweat drop.

"So, what have you been doing?" asked a half black and half white figure. This mysterious plant like being was name Zetus and his origins were completely unknown.

"When I went beyond the Veil I found another would where no one used ninjustu." Kakuzu said.

"No one?" asked Sasori. "How can that be? I remember when I was a child in the Sand Village we were taught that the people beyond the Veil were extremely dangerous. So dangerous in fact that all Five Kages agree never to take any battles beyond the Veil in fear of antagonizing them." He said as his mind was processing the information he was given.

"Yeah, in my research for the ultimate creation of my art I found recordings of explosions so beautiful that they leveled two whole cities!" Deidara said with a blissful expression on his face. "What you're saying makes no sense! How can something so amazing be made without ninjustu!" he yelled as he now had a creeping fear that he would never be able to make such art.

Kakuzu only chuckled as he saw the look in Deidara's eyes "Haha tell me Deidara have you ever wondered where things like TVs, radios and refrigerators came from?" he asked the blonde.

"Weren't they just invented by someone in one of minor nations?" asked Konan who was the only woman in the group.

"Invented? Ha No!" Kakuzu huffed. "They reverse engineered technology from the crashed boats and other transportation that have passed through the Veil" he stated.

"Wait, wait you're saying that those displays of beauty weren't made through a justu, but…." Deidara said as his mind started to put the puzzle together.

"Yes now you get it, the explosions in the recording you saw was made by the people beyond the Veil using only technology." Kakuzu said. "Those bombs are the reason all five Kages agreed never to interfere with the outside world as they all feared what would happen if the Elemental Nations were found by them."

"But if they don't use justu at all, then why did the Kages agree, even Konoha and Iwa never to interfere with the outside world?" Hidan asked since he was now curious. "I mean all they had to do was make sure no more bombs were drop, and the problem would be solved

"Because the rate at which the outside world advances is unbelievable frightening." Kakuzu said with a small shiver. "When we make armor strong as iron, theirs become as strong as steel! We make a kunai that flies faster when thrown, they already have a weapon that flies faster, farther and is ten times as accurate, and you'll never see the damn thing!" the immortal with five hearts said with a snarl as he remember the first he encountered guns. He lost three hearts that day. "But there is something that I found out during my time there that makes all their power pointless." He said smirking.

"And what would that be?" Asked Pein who had all his attention focus on Kakuzu.

Kakuzu smirking said. "That the most powerful people on the planet weren't the strongest, but instead the richest." This fact made everyone go wide eye. "Once I learned of this fact I had the idea for my project."

"My project started by taking numerous orphans and training them in our ways and building an army of sorts." This peaked Pain's interest but he let the man continue.

"Once I believed I had enough men I began a hostile takeover of the criminal underground of the country of Japan as it had the most similar culture to ours." He said. "Once I controlled the underbelly of Japan I used the money to make a corporate empire one that I might add is very successful." He chuckled. "Any major rivals would mysteriously have accidents or were bought out."

"And why are you back here?" Asked Kisame.

"While the Shinobi in my employ were able to use ninjustu the quality was greatly lacking, their hearts just weren't good enough to sustain me." The immortal said with a growl. "About every five years I would have to return here in order to Hunt for new hearts."

"And your army what is the level of their strength?" Asked Pein.

Kakuzu stared at Pein already knowing what he had planned, "Ranging from low chunin to low jonin."

"And their numbers?" Asked Konan.

Kakuzu smirked behind his mask "across the globe almost about Ten thousand."

"Then it is decided" Said Pein getting everyone's attention "Kakuzu your new mission is to prepare your army to invade in three years time." He said getting a nod. "By then the nine tails should resurface and we can begin the capturing of the jinchuriki once done will use your army to conquer the nations, and once we have control of the Bijuu we will start the conquest of the lands beyond the Veil." He said seriously.

"I understand Leader-sama" Kakuzu said smirking he planned on using his forces in this way from the beginning it was the reason he joined the Akatsuki. It presented an excellent opportunity. Even if the Akatsuki somehow failed he would just fade into the shadows and begin anew.

"But," Pein started making the immortal narrow his eyes. "I would like you to take Sasori, Itachi, Kisame Deidara and finally Hidan with you." He said. "While I have no doubt that you have taught your disciples well I think some new blood would be welcomed into the mix."

"Sasori!" Said Pein

"Yes Leader-sama" Sasori responded.

"You are to build an information network beyond the Veil as I believe it will be useful when we turn our attention to the rest of the world." He said getting a nod from Sasori.

"Deidara you will be teaching the army the art of explosion." Pain said.

Deidara grinned he was more than happy to spread his teachings. But he hope more than anything to recreate the works of art he saw as a child.

"Kisame you are to teach them the art of swordsmanship." He said getting a shark toothy grin as a reply.

"Itachi you're to teach them as many justu as you are able." Only getting a stare in return.

"Hidan I believe it is time Jashin-sama got some new followers" Pein said getting a joker like laugh for an answer.

"You all have your assignment," He got nods "Good now go and show the world the power of the Akatsuki."

Once everyone had left Pein and Konan turned to a figure hidden in the shadows. "An interesting development wouldn't you say Madara-sama" said Pain.

"Yes," said an orange masked figure "the nine tales going into hiding was a blessing in disguise, now we have time to train this new army." The figure leaned against a wall as Pein and Konan left to perform other duties. "You better use your time wisely Naruto Uzumaki otherwise all you would accomplish is making your enemy stronger." He said staring at the statue with a calculating eye. "She always said that we had to go see what it was like beyond the Veil." The man pulled off his mask revealing his scarred face "Once I complete the Moon Eye Plan you'll be able to see everything…..Rin."

Elsewhere…..

"Achoo" sneezed a blonde hair, blue eyed boy eating a cup of instant ramen.

"Hey Pervy Sage I'm too sick to go to school," He said fake sniffling.

"Shut up brat!" Yelled a white haired man. "You never been sick a day in your life so deal with it you're going to school."

"OH COME ON! I'm smart enough I don't need to go to school" Naruto said glaring at the toad sage.

"Oh yeah what's a parallelogram?" Jiraiya asked arching an eyebrow.

"A pair of what?!" Naruto said confused making the Toad Sannin sighed.

"You're going to school," said Jiraiya said throwing him a uniform.

"What kind of uniform is this there's no orange!" the blonde shouted putting it on.

Jiraiya frowned as he open the door "Boy I swear by the end of this trip I will break you of that damn color."

"No you won't orange is awesome!" Naruto shouted as he and the man walked down the street.

"Yeah if you're a retarded orangutan missing his balls." Jiraiya deadpanned causing all those nearby to sweat drop.

"Screw you, go peep on someone you old pervert!" the blonde snapped making all the women glare at the man.

"Why you ungrateful little brat." He said bopping the boy on the head.

"Ow you fucking jerk" Naruto said tackling the man to the ground.

The two rolled on the ground pulling at each other's faces and hair. Finally Jiraiya manage to toss the boy off of him, but ended up sending him flying at a black hair, brown eye girl sending them both to the ground.

Yui Kotegawa didn't know what happen. She was just walking to school just like every day when this man and boy just started arguing and wrestling on the ground like a bunch of grade school ers. She was about to continue on her way when all of the sudden the blonde boy was sent flying RIGHT AT HER! Once she regained her bearings she heard the white hair man giggling and saw him scribbling in a note book saying this is GOLD!

"Hey Naruto I didn't know you had it in you!" He shouted

Yui looked around wondering where the boy went, when she found herself sitting on something hard. She looked down and saw mop of blonde hair sticking out of her skirt.

"Owww." Said Naruto his voice making Yui moan from the sudden action. Jiraiya's pen started to go into over drive his hand becoming a blur.

Then Yui realized exactly she what she was sitting on and shot up screaming.

"I'M SORRY!" shouted Naruto his nose bleeding from what happened.

Yui started to tremble making him think she was going to cry.

"Hey are you ok?" he said reaching out to grab her shoulder. Unfortunately or fortunately if you were a pervert of a sage, Naruto tripped and his hand ended up grabbing the poor girl's breast.

"Y-y-y-you! Beast!" She yelled swinging her bag at his head sending him flying through a fence.

As the poor girl ran off Jiraiya was on the ground laughing his ever loving ass off.

"How does it feel now my little pervert Ha ha." He laughed.

"Shut up!" Yelled Naruto.

From that moment Naruto knew his life was never going to be the same ever again.

…

In an office a bald, portly man in a white suit was smoking a cigar looking over some reports when his secretary called him. "Mr. Toagama you have a visitor."

"Tell them I'm busy" He said resuming his work.

"Sir he's not going to wait." She said.

"Then call security idiot!" Toagama shouted.

Then all of a sudden the doors were blasted off their hinges sending crashing to the floor clouding the office entrance in drywall dust. "What is the meaning of this!?" the man shouted as he hid behind his desk. Toagama snapped his fingers making two men in black suits appear out of the shadows of the office. "Eliminate this nuisance!" he shouted.

"Hai Toagama-sama" the two men said rushing the cloud of dust only for a pair of hands attach to black tendrils shot out and grab them by the throats. With a simple flick of the wrist the hands snapped the ninjas' necks and dropped them to ground where they lay lifeless.

"Was that really necessary?" said a voice of man in his early twenties.

The hands retracted back into a cloud where a voice said in disgust "Those who are caught so easily deserve no second chances and are worthless!" the owner of the voice step out revealing Kakuzu who was now wearing a grey business suit and a medical mask to cover the stiches on his face.

"You do remember you're an S-class ninja right?" the owner of the other voice said as he stepped out revealing himself as a young red headed man wearing a black suit wearing a tie with a red scorpion on it.

"Bah, I was only using 25% of my speed Sasori, they should've been able to avoid it!" growled the masked man. "Obviously their skills have be dulled due to my absences" he stated. He glanced at Toagama who and managed to remove himself from his desk. "And others have gotten fat on the power given to them." He said with disgust as he remembered what the man in front of him used to look like and not this pig of a man in front of him.

"Kakuzu-sama" Toagama gulped "You're back."

"And you Toagama have gotten lazy" Kakuzu said as he walked past the former ninja (It be insulting to consider him one now) and sat in the chair behind the desk. He logged on to the computer and started to go through the financial reports faster than the computer could keep up. He face contorted in rage as he had seen that his expectation of his company were subpar with what they should have been.

Kakuzu snapped his fingers twice making a Ninja appear out of nowhere making Toagama sweat nervously as he never knew the man was there. The ninja was wearing some unique type of armor that was strong but light. His face was covered by a skull like mask and the eyes were glowing red making him look freighting. What was worse was that he knew exactly who he was and that's what scared him most of all.

This man was Kakuzu's Watchful Eye or Shushi no me (aka Master's Eyes) as he was known as since his real name was unknown. Shushi was thought to have died since he was last seen being given an important mission by their master. What it was, was only known to the two men that had reappeared after four years.

"You know what I want to see, show me." Kakuzu ordered Shushi.

Shushi without a second hesitation started to type away rapidly on the computer bringing up a file hidden behind numerous piles of code.

"Wait stop!" Toagama said in fear as he realized what was being brought up. He moved to try to stop Shushi only to find that he couldn't move. He looked at his limbs a saw that they were being held by chakra strings.

"Now what is on that computer that you wish for us not to see." Said Sasori as Shushi finished typing the last pass code.

Beep beep! "Now let's see what you been hiding Toagama" Kakuzu said as read over the information that Shushi had brought up. Once he saw he snarled and shouted "YOU WORTHLESS SLIME HOW DARE YOU STEAL FROM ME!" It turns out that Toagama had been siphoning off millions of dollars and putting it into a hidden bank account. For the last four years Toagama had been falsifying the financial reports resulting in the number Kakuzu had seen. Thankfully Kakuzu will be able to put the funds back in the company since he had full access thanks to Shushi.

"Toagama your services are no longer necessary." Kakuzu said sternly. "Sasori if you be so kind?"

"Fine as long as you show me these, robotics you said I just love to see." Sasori said rolling his eyes as the five hearted man had been explaining the projects his company had been working on.

"Fine you god damn automaton" Kakuzu said as he hit the intercom button "Miss Nami send an escort for my associate to the robotics lab and have them know that he is in charge of it from now on."

"Yes Lord Kakuzu" said the secretary.

"You're putting me in charge of it?" Sasori asked plainly.

"I'm just saving myself time, now get on with it!" the medical masked man said gruffly.

"Very well" said Sasori as he moved his fingers making Toagama walk back a few steps.

"W-what are you doing!?" the portly man asked in fear as he eyed the window.

"Oh not much just taking out the trash." Sasori said whipping his hand causing Toagama to sprint for the window.

"Wait! Wait! Wait! Wait! Aaahhhh!" Toagama screamed as he crashed into the window and fell 100 stories to his doom.

"Shushi!" Barked Kakuzu.

"Yes my Lord!" Shushi said kneeling before his master.

"Inform everyone I have returned and that it that we will soon begin Project Revelation." Kakuzu said.

"Hai lord Kakuzu!" The Ninja before cloaking becoming invisible to the naked eye.

"Oh my." Sasori said surprised when saw the ninja disappear.

"Hahahaha wait until you see your lab" Kakuzu said as he spun in the chair and faced the open window his eye casually looking at a news helicopter as it investigated the mess on the ground below.

Little did the people of Japan know that their world was just about to get more dangerous.

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And there we go the first chapter for Beyond the Veil V2.

Wow according to this rewrite chapter is about 1300 words longer that the first incarnation….. 0_0 holy shit. I fear what rest of the chapters are going to be like.

As you can see I fleshed out the first chapter by having Kakuzu explain the interaction between the elemental nations and the To love Ru world aka our world :P whatever. How I have all five Kages agreeing at the end of the First Shinobi World War never to be discovered by the rest of the world in fear of getting nuked. If I got my time line right then I have WW2 taking place as the same time as SWW1. I imagine a ninja seeing a nuke and quite possible shitting his pants after seeing Japan getting bombed by United States. And whoever Kage (Quite possibly the Frist Hokage given the Frist Kage meeting in the manga) got a hold of this information realized the importance of it. The realization of this fact could easily persuade the Five Kage to make this a universal law in order to prevent a TURE World War.

And as you can see I made another Oc who as you can probably tell is Kakuzu's Yes Man. He's your typical soulless drone that has no dreams for himself and only listens to Kakuzu. Later on hell become a nightmare for Naruto as Shushi is the exception to the low chakra rule for Tech/Veil Ninjas.

Shushi is smart NARA clan smart, brutally effective and worst of all patient. For FOUR years Shushi followed Toagama everywhere he went …..everywhere. His mission was to make sure Toagama didn't ruin the company while Kakuzu was harvesting hearts. That any corruption he did would be repairable. He memorized every code, every move, every little quirk the fat lard did. So that when Kakuzu returned there would be now loose ends.

Anyway that's all I have to say this chapter.

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