Reviews for Beyond the Veil V2
Guest chapter 15 . 3/31
Good story, too bad it seems discontinued. However, I should point out the robots invading Suna was pretty far fetched. Not just the idea, but robots are far from invincible, no matter how technologically advanced they are, and in reality, Suna would be their worst nightmare, especially Gaara.

The reason is simple, anything, no matter how technologically advanced it is, requires the same thing to move...

Joints.

And joints, no matter how many precautions you take with them, are susceptible to anything that gets inside them, especially sand. Gaara wouldn't even have to use a Sand Burial, just a Sand Tidal Wave would put the largest robot out of commission. Also, robots are susceptible to shock-waves, you know, from explosions, if a shock wave can level a building of concrete and steel, it can turn a robot into scrap metal, no matter how advanced it is, and the Akatsuki would be limited to earth based or maybe some black-market alien based technology, they're not going to have technology as advanced as Lala's. I mean I can understand Deidara catching Gaara, but robots? In a desert? That's like Sasuke trying to cast a Katon jutsu under water!
Guest chapter 16 . 3/30
Good story but there are some major flaws. Hate to break it to fantasy fiction and sci-fi fans, but mystic powers and robotics don't necessarily outclass a human army. First of all there's no Ninjutsu or power in the Naruto world that could stop a barrage of gunfire. The best option would be Pein's Shinra Tensei, but keep in mind, he can only use that technique every five seconds, there's a delay, during which, his body would be ripped to shreds by bullets and that's not counting high-caliber bullets, especially anti-material rounds. An anti-material round can rip through the armored hull of a tank or a jet fighter, do you have any idea how much power that is? One of those bullets would go straight through Susano'o and right through Sasuke's tiny head, making him explode like watermelon under a sledgehammer. Then there's explosives, not only are there nuclear weapons, but anti-personnel bombs, the most powerful of which can literally level ten miles with nothing but sheer destructive force, imagine the previously mentioned Shinra Tensei taken to a whole new level, one that would reduce Konoha and probably the forests surrounding it to a flattened parking lot.

Then there's manpower, the top five most powerful military forces in the world each have millions of active, ready for combat soldiers, millions per nation, the entire Allied Shinobi Forces was less than one hundred thousand, so the ninja forces are outnumbered already. These soldiers are also trained far more rigorously, the ninja in Naruto's world rely on their chakra, human soldiers in the real world undergo intense training that would leave most professional athletes groaning in pain, and elite soldiers undergo training that will literally make you puke just thinking about it, I know, I worked for a former Navy SEAL one time, the guy was barely five foot seven and less than one hundred and fifty pounds, but could literally beat a seven foot tall two-hundred something pound walking mountain of muscle like the man owed him money, I know, I saw it happen, and then I learned the kind of training they went through. There is a reason these elite units are selective, because their training alone, could literally kill even the most devout fitness junkie. Then there are their tactics, unlike in a movie, they don't rush in headstrong guns blazing, they use strategy and formations, they're not going to leave an opening for someone like Minato Namikaze to use his Hiraishin no Jutsu, they'll focus on one of his kunai, ignoring any kills he makes, and then when he appears, they'd just light him up, that's how modern soldiers roll, they're focused, efficient, and relentless. Going with tactics there is one commonly used 'shock and awe', which most civilians don't truly understand, it is a three part strategy. Part 1, they send out multiple squadrons, sometimes six to ten, each squadron has four to six fighter jets, and they literally carpet bomb everything in their path with sidewinders and hellfire missiles, either of which can annihilate an entire city block with just one missile, and each jet can carry six to eight of them, so multiply six to eight by four to six then by six to ten, and then that's how many city blocks can be wiped out with just one air-strike. Part two, after the airstrike they send in anti-personnel equipment, that's tanks and gun-mounted vehicles, and their job is to take down anything fighting or even standing in their way. Finally part 3, that's when boots hit the ground and literally 'mop up' whatever is left, this means taking prisoners and killing whomever fights back, literally they operate like 'sweepers' and make sure the enemy isn't able to fight back, putting it simply, shock and awe is named because it is literally a crush the enemy without mercy strategy.

You unleash something like that, it doesn't matter if you're a master class mage, a kage level ninja, a derranged rabbit goddess, or an army of Terminators, you're literally history. Oh and in regards to Terminator movies, those are complete garbage, it doesn't matter if your opponent is a walking bullet-proof machine, even a machine has weaknesses to gunfire, they're called joints, and a bomb is going to destroy them. The most destructive part of explosives isn't the 'fire' the Terminators walk through, it's the shockwave which can literally level a building, much less toss a robot around like a mosquito in a hurricane. So yeah, people need to quit thinking modern day armies are weak just because Hollywood portrays them as some helpless group that falls prey to zombies and alien invasions, in reality, even if those things were possible, they wouldn't turn out like the movies because modern day armies are far more efficient and well-equipped than most people think.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30
Hate to break it to Naruto and Akatsuki fans... but their asses would get owned in our world. Even Kaguya would be modern weaponry's pet bitch if she ever tried her shit. Seriously dude, a bullet from a freaking Glock travels like a quarter of a mile in one second, it travels over three miles in one minute, do the math and a bullet is faster than a car, and damn sure faster than any human can hope to see, even a Sharingan wielding ninja using Hiraishin no jutsu. In addition, bullets and bombs are physical constructs which would make most defensive ninjutsu completely powerless against them, probably the ONLY beings in Naruto that could survive an assault from a modern army, would be the Biju themselves, not their jinchuriki and this includes Kaguya with the Jubi's power, one nuclear payload and the bitch would be history.

There's also the size difference, even though in Naruto's world they are referred to as 'countries' and 'nations', they are really probably only about the size of a modern US state, and 'major villages' like Konoha, are probably no bigger than ONE of New York's boroughs. Again, one nuclear weapon could wipe out a modern day metropolis, so one would pretty much annihilate half of Hi no Kuni. This of course ISN'T counting nuclear fall-out which again, probably only the Biju can withstand, especially if someone like Naruto, whom was CONCEIVED in a womb saturated with Biju chakra, is still susceptible to it's corrosive properties.

Last and most importantly, numbers. Kakuzu has a gang of punk-ass ninja wannabe thugs numbering 10,000? The United States has over one MILLION active soldiers, that's ONE country, add that in with weaponry and things like fighter jets, tanks, and warships, I'll give you a hint of what would happen if the Akatsuki despite their power, tried to invade the modern world... Gate: Thus, the JSDF Fought There!

That's how badly the Akatsuki even if they had the entire Elemental Nations on their side, Zetsu army, reincarnated ninja army, and Kaguya, that's how badly the outside world would steamroll their asses, it'd be like the opening scene of Gate or the scene where the attack choppers defended Italica, everyone on the ninja side would get fucked up.

You're also overestimating power, Pein's most powerful attacks have a time limit and a window, a constant bombardment of bullets would annihilate his ass in a heartbeat, the concussive force from most modern day missiles, would blast even a Susano'o Kyubi through a damn mountain. Look at Bunker Buster missiles, Daisy Cutters, these weapons are made to use sheer concussive force to flatten an area, it's not fire or nuclear energy, it's sheer concussive force, in other words, those missiles alone are like a super-powered Shinra Tensei coming from a meth-headed sugar-high Rinnegan user.

I don't mind the idea of the Akatsuki traveling through the veil, but please don't think they're going to be whipping everyone's ass just because they use chakra, and don't think Kakuzu's little fan-boy club is going to mean jack, NEVER compare some punk-ass thug to a trained soldier, I can tell you from an non-biased experience, there is a BIG difference. I'm actually trained in martial arts and unashamed to say I got my ass whooped in a friendly spar with a US Marine using just his military taught hand-to-hand skills, I have nothing but respect for soldiers, they are trained to be elites, and lets say the one-sided fight scene at the beginning of 'Con-Air' is not exaggerated when it comes to a civilian, even a trained one, against a soldier.
Dante chapter 16 . 8/15/2018
So can I assume the this story is abandoned?
god of all chapter 16 . 7/25/2018
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
pensuka chapter 16 . 3/19/2018
Sai just dug his grave
Appreciateyou chapter 6 . 12/10/2017
Thanks for the note at the beginning about the rape comments in the story, I wasn’t bothered by it, but you were being considerate, thanks :P
Seriously chapter 16 . 9/28/2017
In canon Kakashi didn't give a crap about Naruto whatsoever. And manipulated Naruto into chasing Sasuke using that "those who abandon their friends are trash", when Kakashi himself is a hypocrite and abandoned Naruto throughout the series. Two major examples , chunin exams - Kakashi pushed Naruto to another jonin to train Naruto(obviously one that disliked him), rasengan training(Yamato helped before Kakashi left the rest to him instead of staying and helping like an actual sensei should).

Why exactly is Naruto getting hit so much? He might as well stay in Konoha and get abused with the way your story has him getting beat by people. I mean I can understand Yui to keep him in line but a lot of the other crap is not necessary, and Sakura should be kept away from Naruto due to her abuse towards him through out their genin days.(and yes she would hit him for the smallest things and used him for a punching bag).

One last thing you should make a Original Arc(where one of Naruto and Lala's children accidentally sends herself back in time with one of her inventions) Red hair and heterochromia iridium(two different eye colors).

Pm Tenma Sosei as that is my actual account
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
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Guest chapter 16 . 5/31/2017
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Guest chapter 16 . 5/19/2017
Maybe this will get you re-motivated for this story: King Gid vs. Madara Uchiha, HOW MUCH EPICNESS CAN YOU DERIVE FROM THAT!?
Leo-Arctic chapter 16 . 4/12/2017
Oh god this story is gold please bring it back and update this
Guest chapter 16 . 4/8/2017
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GXY-2013 chapter 16 . 3/8/2017
Would you please continue this? This looks like the best Naruto x To Love-Ru story so far.

I'd love to see Naruto's new friends and lovers find out about the Sexy Jutsu, when Naruto unintentionally use it, imagine how would Yui will punish him.

I am hoping that Pain will either not "put to sleep" or die like in the manga/anime, and Naruto make friend with him, and giving Pain a new purpose in life.

If the Fourth Shinobi World War would happen in this story, then the rest Japan of Japan may as well get involve with it in a war in the Veil.

Anyway, please continue this.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/6/2017
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