Interesting

I liked him!as soon as he said he wasnt going to tell i was thinking he wasnt so bad and at the end he is real name reviled had me in stiches

This was funny Morgana reminded me of my three younger sisters one of them ironicly name is Morgana.

very cute story. one thing though. merlin is actually taller. by an inch.

Great fic, I look forward to reading more :)

Nice story. You have potential. (Sorry for the Dragon-y portentousness) :)

thanks for a great read :)

OMG, you have to finish the story! Please?
I don't normally like Merthur Fanfic, most of them seem a little ludicrous, but I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter of your story. You simply must finish it, I have to know the ending! I always say that the mark of a good book/story is when you cannot stop reading it, and thats how this one has been for me.
Some compliments for you:
You have really reflected Merlin and Arthur's personalities as they were on the tv show.
You writing style is fluid, and the scenes flow from one to another easily.
Your descriptive style is spot on, enough to paint a picture, but not OTT.

Keep writing, you have an amazing talent, I look forward to the end of this story and reading more of your work
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Thank you for the dedication (I was signed in as a guest :S) it was so very sweet.
A lovely ending to a wonderful story, I am so glad you finished it :D
As I said before, you have a wonderful talent, and I am really looking forward to your next story.
Fantastic work, be proud! xxxxx

This is great :)

i'm enjoying i love long chapters and regular updaters

Awwww. God Arthur and merlin are so dumb!

Your story line is good. However, it is hard to read as you have not left spaces between the dialogue. The reader has to backtrack to understand who is speaking. I think you will get more readers if you open up some of your paragraphs and make it more inviting.

So funny Arthur and merlin in the market, just an old couple who doesn't know that he acts like an old couple.

I don't like this prince and I don't understand why he is so interested by the relation between Arthur and merlin. I hope that his intentions like Morgana's are good.
Merlin aand Arthur are always blind when it comes to their feelings for each other.