I love your story's but you have to fix candy's speach epedemec it is frusterating to read

CREVAN'S NICKNAME NEEDS TO BE RAVEN!

"DAD! YOU SAID YOU WOULDN'T SHOOT HIM!"

I'm laughing way to hard

I feel like the only reason Reaver would accept the role of a father would be because it was one adventure he'd never taken. He's a man who's bored with the world that he has been in FOR SO GOD DAMN LONG!

Your the bloody daughter of Reaver, OF COURSE YOUR LIFE IS ABOUT TO GET EXCITING!

You didn't tell me. Gasp. I can feel the betrayal seeping into my heart... No? Well I thought it was funny.

Good work. Your heroine is nice and spunky I love her and your depiction of Reaver is superb. Brava.

"One scratch Andrew, i mean it one single scratch on my baby and you'll be sorry you where ever born."

Awesome- there are no other words.

This is brilliant keep up the excellent work my friend ;P

VERY INTERESTING BOOK ISN'T IT REAVER?!
more children for Reaver
Lel
Update soon and not never!

HEHEHEHEHEHEHE Reaver... HAS A DAUGHTER O.O I'm sure he has had a few children though, as long as he's been alive at least one other girl has gotten pregnant right? Update soon and not never!