| Reviews for A Forged Wedding |
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Ace chapter 24 . 3/8 You evil-doer... Why is This so addicting to read! I love it~ |
narukeforever2639 chapter 6 . 2/23 ¿Ocean is a color? |
yamahahaha chapter 18 . 1/27 hey you cant overdose on acid. acid is the street name for LSD. LSD aka acid is also less addictive than weed, if addictive at all. i'm guessing you meant to write heroin? |
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 31 . 1/16 Love this so much! thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us! god bless you! |
TeamAlphaQ chapter 8 . 12/1/2019 Well, it's quite obvious that when I read this story, I was at a different place, in a different time. Unfortunately, it hasn't aged as well as I had hoped. But I suppose not all stories can. Some of them seem better in the moment than they are when reflected upon in the cold light of day. Such is life. :( But, the trip down memory lane was a worthwhile one, even if it wasn't the one I expected. I know that you've probably all but forgotten about this story, but I'm glad that you've left it up. Finding it after all these years is enlightening. ~Q |
TeamAlphaQ chapter 3 . 12/1/2019 Man, that line about "I had him going for a solid hour about the American government" made me laugh. Like, an hour is nothing my dude, I used to be able to consistently get my dad going for three or four hours at a time every other day about politics. And they weren't repetitive rants either, he always had new things to go off about. It was absolutely wild. Reading this story is such nostalgia tho. Definitely different than what I remembered, but it's still got that charm, y'know? It reminds me of a different time in my life... Idk, I went searching for this story this evening because I had a powerful memory of a portion of it and I felt the intense urge to relive it. Hopefully, it continues to bring back memories. ~Q |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/30/2019 So if Eren’s bad at school then how’d he get into college at age 15? Doesn’t make sense. Not to mention if he barely passed his classes then how did he end up working for a perfectionist like Levi? Major plot hole |
Tyytyys Yaoi chapter 31 . 10/27/2019 I really loved this story. Thank you so much for writing and completing it. It was really cute and sweet and the feels. Ugh. I legit rested up when we lost grandpa and I was easily wrapped up in all the characters and their stories. It was truly a great read and there’s just nothing like finding a good completed piece like this. Thank you again! |
TamBek chapter 31 . 6/10/2019 The story was very good, an awesome read for when you’re bored. There were a few spelling mistakes though... other than that, thanks for the awesome fanfic! |
KarmagisaAllTheWay chapter 31 . 6/4/2019 awww this is so cute ! Just got done binging this after a few days of nonstop reading and im so glad i did. this story has also kinda made me be better at putting my seat belt on btw ha ha |
AngelesPG chapter 8 . 4/12/2019 Realmente odio que vean y escriban a Eren tan necesitado de cariño |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2018 I love how you actually right out the french scenes because I actually speak french and it adds a different perspective to your fic. Thank you! |
Kathahari chapter 31 . 9/15/2018 I freakin' LOVED your story! Holy shit! I don't know how many times I've read it before finally creating an account here on FFN to add it to my favorites. It motivated me to finally start posting my own story. Honestly, I would be honored if you'd take a look at it and maybe give me some advise on how to improve my writing skills, so it'll become such a great story as yours is. |
Guest chapter 31 . 7/10/2018 I’m not crying, you’re crying... Best fanfic I’ve ever read |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/24/2018 Hello ! ;) I don't know if you still read your review on this story since you've finished it some years ago but I wanna tell you that I really appreciate your story ! You're a great author :) Also, as I'm french, I've corrected the sentences in french ; "Allait-il comment votre vol ?" is wrong, it's better if you say "Comment s'est passé votre vol ?" ; "Ta grand-mère a dormi la plupart du temps, mais la turbulence était terrible. Elle est bien chanceuse d'avoir pu dormir !" ; "Il est bon de te revoir mon garçon" ; " Oh Rivaille, regarde toi ! Tu es encore plus beau qu'avant, tu ne fais vraiment pas ton âge !" ; "Il a un très beau visage, Levi. Et les yeux aussi ! Très joli." ; "Tu choisis toujours de belles personnes. Petra aussi était très jolie." Sorry for my bad english, though |