Reviews for Shinobi Adventurer, Land of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you stop? T~T |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your innovation about the dimension transfer thingy. it's better than the ones where he goes BAM!, then he's in Fiore |
![]() ![]() ![]() The new bar maid girl after the S class examinations |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...try Flair (the girl raised by giants ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good stuff but I think you have stopped writing? Sad, I see a lot of potential here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ffs please don't join a ghost guild! Fairy Tail! Not a guild full of dead people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is awesome... Good work... By the way.. The word "His or Him" are used to refer a male and "she or her" is used to refer a female... Plss update soon dattebane |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! Length and grammar are good, too. Hope you update soon. BTW, I think that since (SPOILERS FOR 670-UP) Sage chakra can be used as a cloak, he could develop someway to use it like a Susano'o, but that looks like Kurama (So that it representates Sasuke (His best human friend) and Kurama (His best friend and partner)). But I don't know... |
![]() ![]() Was that... Bravely Default Pirate Asterisk? Was it? Dang, finally! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the approach this takes to the Naruto/Fairy Tail crossover, most that I've read so far have Naruto searching for a way home but here he's just building back his strength and exploring the world. Very nice. And it'll be fun to see what all Wendy has learned by the time the Nirvana mission comes up! As for Naruto's power ups, on one hand, bijuu/chakra cloak modes are nice- especially for Yang powered healing, I think you should consider his Six Paths techniques. The Truth Seeking Balls were very interesting and I think that kind of jutsu would work well in this world as well. And another thing, seeing the wimpy chains Hades used in his battles with Fairy Tail made me want to see him face some Uzumaki chains and see how it's really done, so there's an option as well! Hope to see more of this before long |
![]() ![]() Lol narutos getting all the girls attention lol I can see those ichiyas squad seeing him as their rival in love lol |
![]() ![]() Add hinata pleeeeaaaasssseeee |
![]() ![]() Awesome fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would you bother with the whole first chapter if you were going to de age him. I mean I just never understand the whole thought process behind it. I just can't stand to read about it, because it feels like I can no longer relate to the main character anymore and it makes reading about him nothing more than a chore. I mean look at all that training you said the hokage put him through about teaching him how to control himself and act more responsible and everything, then the first thing he does is freak out like a child. It honestly would have been better to just skip the whole first chapter so that way we wouldn't have our expectations of the story that you gave us crushed in just the next chapter. |