Ok this Story is a bit short but on my opinion a nice idea...
I reallly love perlia or the bro sis relationship from thalia and Percy and it’s great that you write about it.
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ColorfulAxe

Cute!
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awww... this is great. I really liked this small one-shot, because it deals with something not often addressed in fanfiction: Thalia's thoughts on the Prophecy, and her giving it to Percy. It's given me ideas for my own Thalia/Percy friendship story. If you'd be willing to help me, that would be amazing.

Great work, and I'll see you on the far side!

Awwww, really sweet. I love it.

Aw, a touching and well-written short snippet! Small typo: I think you meant for Talia to say "I know what it FEELS like," but other than that small misspelling I thought it was a good piece that fans of the series can reflect upon. Nice work.

great job! loved it :)

Nice idea, I wish that Thalia had tried to explain it to Percy more, but still good job :)

I like it. The idea is good and I think you pulled it off really well. Percy and Thalia both seem IC. The spelling, punctuation and grammar are all, as far as I can tell, perfect, and you used a good variety of words and sentence structures. The story moves at a good speed, not rushed but not dragged out.

I remember editing this a few months back! Just like then, I think this is really appropriate. Even though it never actually happened, I can see it happening between the two. They're connected in a way, since at different times, this prophecy was each of theirs.

Awesome work, my friend. ;P