Tywin is far too arrogant... someone should take his ego down a notch - or 50,

amazing story so far , may i suggest that the North declares Independence from the Rest of the Kingdoms and become very strong , Moat Catlin Fully Rebuilt , etc... Norten Fleets etc...i hope you can update soon.

i hope there is more of this story please update as soon as you can please

When will Ned goes Kings of Winter mentality when he is the new. Warden paramount of the north (Ruthless but fair, Ironfist but Just, and most of all, a player of the game of the defender of the First Men and the Old Gods)

Man, when can you restart this fic AU?

IMO Tywin's surprise at the Vale and Stormlands rising in support of the Stark is IMO off the mark. He would have to be Jaime level of stupid to be surprised.
Tywin might had been surprised initially but once he got the full facts than such a development was a given.
Aerys ordered Jon to kill Ned and Robert (I'm not sure why Bobby, though. Probably Varys made him do it). King Scab also had the Arryn Heir in the Black Cells - or already dead.
Borys

I am confused - Ned set out earlier than in canon yet the Bald Lion still got to KL with enough of a lead to storm it?
I was hopping for a Battle At The Gates :)
Borys

It's reading this chapter that actually makes you realise how wrong Westros is. How everyone thinks Ned a fool for trying to save Elia and her daughter. Looking forward to another chapter if you continue this.

Good day and stay safe.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

You have a really great plot dynamic here, wish it was being continued.

This is amazing. Why not continue it?

HOLY SHIT! This story... there are few stories that have as interesting a setup.

Great start cant wait for more :)

Awesome intro

I admit I didnt finish, maybe its better further to the story, but I stopped, because everyone was like Robert. Even Ned, who is probably the most different character.