| Reviews for The Return of the Betrayed Guardian - Currently being rewritten |
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Guest chapter 9 . 1/24 why Pikachu why |
Deluxe chapter 1 . 8/23/2018 Wow |
Evil-Mech Lord Apex chapter 20 . 3/29/2018 This story actually made me tear-up well done. I love the story as well, again well done. |
Pokemon Fan chapter 21 . 1/13/2018 The first thing that disappointed me throughout this whole story is that no Pokemon besides a legendary can survive Ash's Charizard's Seismic Toss. Zippo certainly should not have survived that. |
Sergio644 chapter 2 . 6/4/2017 very exciting chapter wow so anabel cute her self to feel better poor anabel |
DBear26 chapter 1 . 6/3/2017 I think it was about three years ago when i first read this. Its still as good as i remember. God damn its been a while |
Guest chapter 25 . 4/13/2017 f it |
Lucas chapter 21 . 3/16/2017 You are creative af with all these combo names and moves |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/15/2017 fan of Dawn? eh I don't really mind |
Hats77 chapter 3 . 2/19/2017 Grrrrrrrrrr GARY I THOUGHT I LOVED U! |
Hats77 chapter 6 . 1/23/2017 PIDGEOT YAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSS! Mah bro is back |
Bloonslayerz20 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 I say all chapters are good but I believe anabels reaction to ash arriving and having the same feelings was my favorite part |
toumakamijou298 chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 ok found this story and love how it's going |
Kiirus chapter 15 . 9/19/2016 HOLY CRAP THE AMOUNT OF COMBO MOVES IS OFF THE CHARTS |
I chapter 1 . 8/6/2016 I love it keep it up |