Reviews for The Return of the Betrayed Guardian - Currently being rewritten
Guest chapter 9 . 1/24
why Pikachu why
Deluxe chapter 1 . 8/23/2018
Wow
Evil-Mech Lord Apex chapter 20 . 3/29/2018
This story actually made me tear-up well done.
I love the story as well, again well done.
Pokemon Fan chapter 21 . 1/13/2018
The first thing that disappointed me throughout this whole story is that no Pokemon besides a legendary can survive Ash's Charizard's Seismic Toss. Zippo certainly should not have survived that.
Sergio644 chapter 2 . 6/4/2017
very exciting chapter wow so anabel cute her self to feel better poor anabel
DBear26 chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
I think it was about three years ago when i first read this. Its still as good as i remember. God damn its been a while
Guest chapter 25 . 4/13/2017
f it
Lucas chapter 21 . 3/16/2017
You are creative af with all these combo names and moves
Guest chapter 5 . 3/15/2017
fan of Dawn?
eh I don't really mind
Hats77 chapter 3 . 2/19/2017
Grrrrrrrrrr GARY I THOUGHT I LOVED U!
Hats77 chapter 6 . 1/23/2017
PIDGEOT YAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSS! Mah bro is back
Bloonslayerz20 chapter 1 . 12/17/2016
I say all chapters are good but I believe anabels reaction to ash arriving and having the same feelings was my favorite part
toumakamijou298 chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
ok found this story and love how it's going
Kiirus chapter 15 . 9/19/2016
HOLY CRAP THE AMOUNT OF COMBO MOVES IS OFF THE CHARTS
I chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
I love it keep it up
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