Reviews for Mistake
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
Laateee. But this is cute
Golden Goddess chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
cease stop
seize to take
artilyon-rand chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
really?¡ like fuck Kristoff and thats that?¡
HAFanForever chapter 4 . 1/25/2014
Awesome ending! Elsa really did contribute a good part in helping them make up, because if she didn't, I'm sure Kristoff and Anna would have been too stubborn to work it out themselves. But at this can teach them a lesson in what they can do next time they have a disagreement or argument. I love the end here, with both of them taking each of Elsa's arms. I also like that Kristoff is getting used to the idea of being friends with Elsa, as well as her being like a sister to him. Yes, they are the same age (21), but he would probably think of her as a big sister to him, and I'm sure she would warm to him that way, too. Not to mention how it would make it easier to accept him as a potential brother-in-law.

Another well-written story! :) I can't wait to see what you write next. And as for my name, yes, Moira is my real name. It's Irish for Mary, and I was named that to reflect a part of my heritage. And hey, I was looking over your profile and saw that you like Hey Arnold! I've got stories and essays written for that, too. ArnoldxHelga is my favorite cartoon pairing. :)
HAFanForever chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
Very good chapter here! The way both of them feel towards each others as sisters sounds so the same, yet they are so understanding to each other, and that's just why they need each other. This reminds of my story "I'll Always Be Here for You." :)
HAFanForever chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
I'm sure that Kristoff would feel a little uncomfortable talking with Elsa about what happened between him and Anna, but because of what he did for Anna in the past, I see why Elsa is giving him the benefit of the doubt. She loves Anna with all her heart, and she wants Kristoff to treat her as well as she should be treated. I like your explanation from Elsa on why Anna yelped when Kristoff wrapped his arms around her from behind.
HAFanForever chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Whoa, this was a very compromising position! I don't blame Anna for trying to run away, but I know Elsa wouldn't want her to. Anna told Elsa not to run away from her, so now they must do it the other way around. I can bet Elsa didn't want to freeze Anna's feet, but she had to get her to stop.

And their conversation...man, Elsa is such a loving, trusting, and understanding big sister, and the same can be said about Anna as a little sister! Now that their relationship is healing, they realize just how much they need each other. But it's clear that they will never shut each other out again. :)
Olafqhace chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
AWWWWWWWWWWWW! SISTERLY LOVE (including sister-in law) NOOOO THIS CANNOT BE THE END! Oh well maybe, there are some stories that just end and well end, but this was so amazing, aww i would want a big sister like elsa! However i know that if i had a sister, she'd probably be more like Anna and i'd be annoyed, my big bro is annoying haha, but i love him, however we're not as close as a sister would be, although in these times big sisters are more likely to be kinda bullies, back to the point, AMAZING JOB! I shall keep this fic in my frozen heart!
Olivia Bjorgman chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
:) I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter!
Random Guy chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I sincerely hate how you made Kristoff...he would never do this to Anna.
Olafqhace chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Haha! Nice and sisterly! I believe we will be seeing the "talk" anytime soon by elsa hehe, motherly elsa wow, NEXT CHAPTER PWEEES!