Hey! I'm Alicia, but better known as 'aliciathewolf45'. BlackPetals23 asked for me to read this. And I'm in love with Shadamy. You can tell by my stories. XD but I wanna say that I'm getting into this. Love the action, and Mulder is pretty interesting. Can't wait for more after the third chappie. :3

XD aliciathewolf45 XD

Okay, first off, I agree with one of the reviewers: last chapter was a little violent for T. If anything, I would tone it down or make it M for violence. Second off, you must learn how to use the thoughts correctly. You seem to be doing it the way I do it, ya know? Without commas. I do that because I hate writing something like this:

'What should I do?' Amy thought.

It wastes my time! I don't know why, but I just DESPISE writing it like that. So, that's how I got to start writing it without commas on it's own line. But I try to make it so the readers (and me) won't get confused with who's thinking. This happened several times in your writing. Normally, I'll start writing a sentence about Shadow or Amy or whoever I want to show their thoughts to the audience just before I actually do so. Sometimes, I dwell on that character for paragraphs before actually getting down to the thoughts.

Anyway, that's two major issues I saw. So, the first part (before the very first page break) wasn't dull but it wasn't interesting much to me anyway. Go get Scourge because they need resources he has and they don't, which sparked a question in me, though it doesn't always happen to be 100% true: What does Shadow need that he doesn't? Something that DOES happen 100% of the time is Shadow getting what he wants because that's strictly his character. If he has to be mean about it, he will be. It doesn't matter if there are robot armies trying to keep an emerald safe, Shadow will get to it if he wants to.

The second part we learn a little more about Mike and Alex's characters. That's always nice to know (hey, I'm still oddly shipping AlexXSarah because I'm getting more towards SonicXSally. I'm thinking about just ditching Sarah to the curb in my newer batch of stories when I'm done with the ones already on FF XD). OMG...I FINALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT HAPPENED AT THE PART I GOT CONFUSED AT. IT WAS A FLASHBACK...Dude...You need to work on those. Put them in italics or something, I barely understood they switched to a different time, I had to reread it. But after the flashback...We're introduced to MORE characters. Sadly, they're fancharacters. There is actually a difference between original characters (OC) and fancharacters (FC) and most of us interpret them as OCs nowadays when all are particularly FCs. Anyway, I'm going to frown upon you on this one. Lord Kelvin would and so would I. Why use so many FC's when other characters from the Archies or SEGA could be in their spots? The Chaotix? When I read about the cat all I thought about was Blaze, she could totally have replaced that one chick. Nack? Though he's typically evil, he could be in there somewhere. I've learned not to use so many FCs, The Hunt has become a disaster thanks to that so I'm finishing it quickly while ignoring the FCs, hence why I'm not reluctant to throw Sarah, Samwell, or Michael out the door. Watch how many you use, it could possibly become more about the FCs than the Sonic characters. And that's when a story doesn't belong on FanFiction but FictionPress.

What is a kyuubi? All I'm thinking about is kitsune. *shrugs* Anyway, Amy doesn't sound like one to say: screw you and your brighter side of things." She's generally very optimistic and even hot headed from time to time. She'd be agreeing with Mike if anything. Let me get this straight...Alex..being a demon and a player basically, can change his form from male to female? *shudders* AlexXSarah just lost a few points there. Haha! I feel bad for Mike, he needs a woman in his life! Hehe!

Now I understand why this chapter is so long...They talk about guns half the time. No offence, but I don't want to read this story and have to skim a lot of it because they label different guns, talk about them, and then the guys are there just getting their shit together. It's boring filler for some but for others, like people who actually like guns in this type of story, it's enjoyable. But it's still boring because it's repetitive. I've been writing so much filler for the past week and a half that I'm about to die. Seriously, I'm only doing this because I need a break. I'm pushing myself to finish this long chapter. Almost there, almost there, almost there. Not to come off as rude or anything, I just don't normally read these long of chapters. I'm normally in a hurry.

Then you have Amy being sentimental with Mike, whom I thought was waiting for marriage but then later find out that he's been married five times...Boy, oh, boy. Maybe he doesn't need a woman. He needs like a pet or something. I don't know, something that won't cheat or that he has to kill. A pet is perfect. That or a car. Or both. I liked the parts with Fiona and Scourge with Amy, Mike, and Alex.

Anyway, that's all I got. Reading so much action in one chapter made me sleepy, and I did not make it all the way to the end but I'm too tired to care. :/

It went smoothly before I caught hold of a sentence that rather made me laugh internally. Shadow...being beat a female? Shadow being beat at all? There's another flashback moment you could write-and a rather hilarious one at that. Boy, would I have fun with that one. And I thought the peach color on their arms, seeing as it match their muzzle, was like...skin?

And Mike...boy does that remind me of my character. Haha! So, I'll just skip over him and his checking-out-Amy moments! XD The ending...'Wait...Shady?' That's actually a group of small fish...or maybe it's shaddy that's a group of small fish...either way, I don't really see that nickname coming out of Amy's mouth. I try not to write it. But it added a funny ending.

So, let's see if I've kept along with the story via skimming, because that's all I ever do now. XD Um...Shadow and Amy met...Shadow was on a ledge of the 56th floor (that part was comical!) and he disguised himself...Amy met him...went off...Shadow went to save her...something about finding trash shoots. Met Mike and went down one, which was hilarious. Crap...Forgot the rest...I'm trying to talk to a friend about story ideas and plans for tomorrow while trying to remember about this chapter...Umm...*scrolls back up* Right, basically a moment that makes me flashback to a part in That City Girl went Shadow helps Amy put on Blaze's tight dress. The bra part, dude. Anyway...I like it. I could get use to this.

And I love the references to My Little Pony. I don't watch Doctor Who, sorry! :/ I felt like I had something else to write...but I'm spacing out big time...Man, I'm tired.

By chapter one, I've got some things to say due to your request of criticism...Shadow's awfully friendly to this Mulder guy. I'd probably put in a flashback of how Shadow became buddy-buddy with him or the readers will see the same thing I did in the first few paragraphs: An OOC Shadow the Hedgehog. Well, he's not terribly out of character. He's just really friendly. So, I want the past history on Mulder and Shadow. And using the stars instead of just spelling out the cuss word...you might as well not put the cuss word in there in the first place. Sure, it's letting younger people read this, but this story is rated T. Most ages that are allowed to read rated T things can deal with seeing the full on word. And besides, most people I know don't count 'shit' as a swear word.

So, let's see what we have here to begin with: Shadow's been framed by someone named The Doctor. He's chased but gets away before falling into an unconscious state due to The Doctor's bomb.

The end of chapter one, folks, onto the next!

Haven't forgotten about the Anghel Speak (people must be wondering what I'm talking about) but one does not simply type a review like they're a crazy/eccentric manga artist that's a dove, by using a 3DS. But enough waffle. Chapter was awesome! Don't worry too much about the length. And I'm sure I can see a few references in it...also, Amy fights like a boss. It had to be said.

Hummm... isn't this a bit violent for a T? Just wondering tho

Overall, you got the story working, and I kinda find the references funny :p. You also captured the character, although one does not simply say Shadow is a 'hero'.

Keep up the good work!

Just so you know, this chapter made my day! There's nothing quite like coming home (after nearly freezing outside) and finding that the story you like has been updated!...Yes, I know this review is meant to be in Anghel Speak, but maybe next time. But, awesome!

Another awesome chapter! :D I like how you're portraying the characters, especially Mike, who's as entertaining as ever. Keep it up!

Seeing as I don't want to fangirl up the reviews too much, and I thought this review could be more interesting, I shall review in Stereotypical Polite Upper Class Speak.

I say, good sir! This chapter was marvellous! I'm looking forward to the next update.

Reviewing in Anghel Speak would have been more wordy (and less understandable) but that's not the point. Good chapter!

This is looking great so far, Mike! :)