not bad so far. however one thing that's bothering me is the name of you're O.C. i think its to western for a show so influence by eastern culture.

New inspiration will come as a new storie line that might not fit in with the current one so chances are the storie will be " half baked for at least two more chapters any way

I have a question.
Shouldn't it be firelady instead of firelord since Ursa is a woman and not a guy?

I really love this story of yours it is really awesome! :) I can't wait for the next chapter.

cool

Hahaha! That was a great way to end the chapter! I cannot wait to read what happens next!

This story rocks mako giving up korra is the worst discussion he's going to make. I love captain Jason I kicked makos ass lovein it.

Those spirits are to funny like "you want him". Lol

no offence, but you seriously need to work on your grammar.
Priorities,
1. Capital letters on names, and at the start of sentences, NO EXCEPTIONS.
2. When Dialogue switches to a new speaker, it requires a new line.
3. Commas... just commas.

It's really good! Well done! Want to help me write a story about one of the future avatars?

Great story so far! I am very interested to find out who the mysterious "employer" is. Please update soon!