In the second year you mentioned the zoo instance, it’s the one before when talking about his parseltongue abilities that needs to be fixed

Heads up love, the first time he spoke parseltongue was with the snake at the zoo. Just wanted to remind you! The story is amazing so far!

Gracias mil.

Espero que estes bien.

Lo malo que no leo en ao3.

Saludos desde Mexico

28 mayo 2020

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I really enjoyed this story!

why can I only reply twice to a chapter? that lame. I wanna add a bunch of praise to my fav chapters.

on another note, I'm enjoying the story. you know, its keeping me entertained and that's all I can really ask.

I'm so like, angry sad. like, imma rage while crying a river. Harry should get to be happy, damnit! Gah, if Dum-as-a-dore keeps messing with things imma lose it.

Goddessofdeath1995: I'm posting this from my phone, so I'm not sure I'd my username will show up.
I have tried reading this story numerous times and I have only managed to get past the first ten chapters once. Now that the story is finished I would really advise having a beta go over it and make the corrections needed. You have a great story, but the sheer amount of vocabulary and grammatical errors make it incredibly difficult to read. If you are having trouble finding a beta, I'd be happy to do it for you.
I hope you'll think about this.

Love it!

Despite all the grammatical errors, they were easy to overlook because the storyline was just that interesting. You made me hate Dumbledore more than J.K.R. made me hate Voldemort. I did not like how easy you made him to be able to kidnap Harry more than one time, though. That was ridiculous.

I see absolutely no reason for Harry/Evan to fo back to Hogwarts.

I like this fic ! and good ending.

Loved it! Dark, super, creature Harry. Everything I enjoy. Thank you for sharing with us.

I am so glad that by the crystal egg blowing up it killed those awful people. They had that coming for a long time now. *grins evilly* This should happen to all child abusers.