:)

the shirtless, sexy fucker and the pineapple-broom guy.

better love story than twilight, am i right? XD

How can this only have ten reviews?! This fic was my firsts for a lot of things, I don't know even know where to start. This is the first MarcoAce fic I've read where one of them doesn't return the other's feelings at the start. And then this is also my first time reading about MarcoAce having wedding. And these firsts are all good, so I thank you!

My only problem is the format. Dialogue can be in individual paragraphs, especially in conversations. Plus, if I read this on the computer, it would look very blocky and uninviting. Try to put more spaces next time. That's my only concrit.

The smut scenes are amazing! You also did a very good job writing them in character. I can't remember how many times I've read Ace being portrayed in a womanly/girly manner. Just because he's usually the "woman" in MarcoAce. *rolls eyes* You're my number two fave author when it comes to character writing MarcoAce, the first being Reiki (Forbidden Fruits is just *loses words again*).

Well, thank you for writing! I'm sorry if you felt uncomfortable by my review. I hope you write more MarcoAce! :D

so beautiful and good :D

can you do another like this

o m g BEST STORY EVER OMG YOU ARE THE BEST

Uh, uh, uhhh! Marco is so hot in this one! The way he talks and acts, it's just sooo good :3 Oh god, I'm really falling for Marco x Ace, mostly because their fanfics are always really good! Are you going to write more of this stuff? Pleeease? :)

I love that one so much!
Especially rough, hot, sadistic Marco whos ordering Ace around.

PLEASE write more like that!

I liked it! The humor was great as was the plot. Very nice. :)

that was ficken awsome is there a squel

Genius story, really. Your imagination is really something. I eagerly awaited each next sentence, right till the very end.

If you don't mind some advice, I think you should try breaking down the big paragraphs into smaller ones. It makes the text easier to read.

But seriously, good job! I myself would never manage to write a story that has so many words. And the ending is just so, so sweet!

i love this! it was really sweet and sexy ;) i cried when whitebeard was going to make marco leave and ace went to take the punishment instead. it was sad but i'm glad that it worked out I only wish that Luffy had still been at Dadan's when ace returned that would have been cute to see the brothers together but it was still great the way it was.

OH
MY
GHAD!
THAT WAS SOOO HOT!
Is this a one-shot?!
Please don't make it a one-shot!
Add chapters like:
-More lemons
-How the whitebeard pirates live with all the sleepless nights and nosebleeds
- misunderstandings
- more hot ROUGH bed scenes (I APPROVE OF THIS!)
-MORE SADISTIC ROUGH MARCO
-MORE ADORABLE ACE (OR SLUTTY hehe)
I WANT MOOORREEEE OF THHIISS!