Reviews for Story of us
CityofJade chapter 1 . 5/6/2018
Oh Mai you dumb idiot. I love you terribly. And Yasu, I'm not even surprised at his antics at this rate. This was terribly amusing and now I can't stop smiling.
loveladytime chapter 1 . 2/22/2018
Ooooooohhhhh! That was so cute. Oh my god. You got me there. Really laughed hard when Lin came into the office. My mom saw me smiling and laughing in front of my laptop and thought I was going mad. Kudos!
Lady Kimi chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
I have a Wattpad account I_Cherokee_I if you want to talk on the site. Possibly
.. xD
caitybug13 chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
That is so like Naru! This is the first fanficI've read where Naru was so... Naru! And ended up with Mai!

I love it :)
NaginiFay chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
0.o I don't even know what to say.
Fher34 chapter 1 . 1/19/2015
thank goodness indeed for not allowing such thing lol!
Anyway, XDD i had so much fun reading this! I bursted out laughing so hard it's crazy, man! this was so good! :D and fun, and oh so much moreeeee!
Ishval chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
Rofl Naru is very devious. Love this.
slvrphoenx chapter 1 . 9/13/2014
love this story. great writing. Naru is so sneeky
yukihime88 chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
oh gosh your shrewd Naru...
kuroneko-bakeneko chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Thank you,thank you,thank you!
U gave me inspiration 4 my new project...:)
And the story's just soo cute
Picandy chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
This is just simply splendid. Naru is being as smart as ever, and Mai is being an... idiot as always.
KataraJanae chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Lol I love it.
VeryObsessedReader85 chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
AWWW that So sweet an at the Same-time crafty and Cunning!
konohinamoto chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
U should do another chapter! I love it!
xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Cute.
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