Nice moments...ungrateful dwarrow/males. heh. Thanks.

Aww. Loved it.

This story is quite sweet. And yeah, Bella seems to need someone pushing her in the right direction.
I like this one and I like your style of writing. Keep doing it like that. (

... well, I think I really have to read This is not Farewell - but not till tomorrow

Lovely! I LOVE how she is oblivious to Thorin's feelings!
And how she managed to get the Dwarves into the barrels!

once again, a very entertaining and worth reading short! I agree about the thick-headedness of certain characters (not to point out anyone specific) that go get a bit infuriating ;)

That was a sweet moment, when Bella caressed Thorin's hand through the bars of his cell.

Instantly fell in love!