well, this story probably won't be updated again, but I liked what was there. It didn't have a chapter where Harry willed his enemies out of existence, but I'm sure you were working up to that.

I've never understood why Hermione flinches at the word voldemort. That's a Wizarding idiosyncrasy, not something a normal person would do.

I think I spent just about the rest of the chapter after Remus appeared waiting for Harry to ask 'so, how have you been the last eleven years?' or something that line.

A very well written time-travel story, with a quite different perspective.
And as expected here, abandoned. Pity, this would have definitely been one of the best, as such is just a frustratingly lost possibility.

This is an outstanding story. Harry is sent back into the body of his younger self.

Recommended.

Wonderful story, you’ve combined just the right amount of humor and managed to keep the plot interesting and fresh. I hope to see this continued one day.

I’m extremely disapointed in this so called story. It’s plagerism plain and simple. You haven’t changed any of the plot away from cannon. You are having things play out exactly the same. What is the point in reading this if events are exactly as canon even though Harry isn’t the same person? There isn’t.

Love the humor, a breeze to read.
Love Tonks and that she's sorts part of the trio.

First year events are pretty much exact canon.

That Harry didn't think about scabbers disappearing was a bit stupid.

The apprenticeships are a mistake in my opinion. That would never happen to a second year. The overpowered Harry is a terribly boring trope.

Story is worth a read for the banter and humor between Harry and Tonks.

It would be cool if the story was edited, to strip out the apprenticeships and Harry uses second year to talk to the Basilisk to ensure that it does not cooperate with Tom and deal with Flamel, making him a confidant.

this was quite the amusing read, and the relatinship betwee all yur charaters is amusing as well ans engaging. i really wish you continue this story one day

this is great! i really love this so far and am looking forward to the changes 2nd year bring. adding Flamel is interesting, and it'd be awesome if we got more Luna (I love herit worked be really cool if lockhart still got hurt. :D. canter wait to read the best

Hopefully you will come back to this story someday, as it’s quite good...good characters, neat ideas, and just well written. I get your idea of making Sirius destitute, but it does conflict with canon a bit...yes, some writers take the wealth thing to extremes, but it is stated that he’s wealthy in canon, and he does buy Harry a Firebolt, considered very expensive in canon, so he can’t really be destitute. Anyway, would love to see where you were going with this...but thanks for posting this much of it.

Love the story so far, especially the tone. There are all sorts of little mysteries to explore and different directions you could go. I'd love to see it continued if you get the urge.

I have to ageee... Remus isnt a bad guy, but...well Jacob apples disorder of the pheonix displayed him well. A man who basically abandons everything to play the why me game or the I'm a monster shit. I like Remus as a man, but I hate him as a character.

What ‘legitimate reason’... you mention there is one but there’s no mention of what it is.

just reread the story. great stuff but a shame it is abandoned.