I couldn't stop laughing
this was too cute!

this story is precious i wanted moore!

I'm guessing this is complete. Nice! I'm not a fan of oneshots or short stories at all. Many aren't really satisfying - leaves me wanting more cuz either leaves me wanting more (even if in a good way) or more often, feels incomplete in a bad way...but this was very nicely done...and with even a lovely ending to it. Thanks for sharing.

Nice story. It may have not been the most romantic confession but that works as well. XD as they say, actions speak louder than words and most of the time the people around are the best judge to your relationship. _ Any plans of making a one-shot on their wedding preparation?

Much better ending than that stupid canon chapter! Maybe a little abrupt in the ending after he confessed, I'd have liked to see more of her reaction and their happily ever after. But still very well done and why can't it have gone this way in the manga?!

wonderful! :D

AMEI!
Eu também fiquei irritada quando a Kyoko foi a festa com o Kijima (T_T), então, é muito bom saber que não sou só eu que penso assim!

Adorei o primeiro capítulo e estou ansiosa pelos próximos! Parabéns! D

I can barely breathe from trying not to laugh aloud at 2 AM.
I loved this. SO much.

Completely in love with your fanfic great job yes plz do a sequel to this love to see what you have in mind for the wedding n what kana does after reading the morning paper seeing that she knew none of the happenings in her best friends life as concerning ren lol I'm guessing their conversation will be hilarious can't wait until next time.

i loved this twist that you did for this scene; especially when you referenced their times as the siblings (my favorite arch). i would love to see what comes next if possible. i can see this giving me a lot of laughs! :)

This is a very cute story. One can see the seeds for your present writing. The escalating situation comedy is here. Nice.

Love it! I really do! I mean how you had everyone think they were dating for like forever and had Ren then get Kyoko out of there and then confess to her in his aparment after the party! Love it!

D'oh, I love this way too much! I really shouldn't be fangirling about fanfiction, but I can't help it! Definitely going in my favorites :)

Wow, this is a great first fic! Really cute, I felt like the character kept within the realms of their characters. I mean them staying over would be somewhat eye-brow raising, but it worked well so all forgiven! ;p I love how you built up their leaving the party with tales of their interactions. I bet Yashiro was having a field day! _

ayyy que lindos ojala fuera las cosas asi de faciles pero claro no habria mucha historia y drama si fuera cierto todo esto gracias x el capitulo