Awwwee! I really loved this story and it’s such a shame it ended! I understand your reasons on why you decided to end it, Just wanted to comment and say that I really loved it, and I hope you come back for more story’s one day! :D

what intaminte means?

Again, all speaking and no narrating. But I already got used to your style (I think).
Green is giving everyone the cold shoulder, why? I got it for him thinking that Blue is a slut and etc, but what's his problem with the others? He had a fight with Silver and doesn't like Gold for the Crystal issue, as far as I understood, but he can get along with everyone else, right?

Oh boy, that was such a wrong move, Ruby... you can get ready for hell when Sapphire knows you stood her up!
But again, she shouldn't have rejected him after having agreed to wear the dress, so I don't know who's side to take this time...

There is nobody able to stand in Blue's way. That I am 100% sure of!

So... Crystal is an amazing DexHolder, and she still got so badly beaten as easily as this?
Plus after all she suffered, she simply forgave Gold like nothing happened? I could understand about him dating Taylor, because it's his free choice to date whoever he wants, but to let it meddling in the path of friendship with her and all the others? To believe the bitch he barely knows before his own partners? Now that's another matter.

Whoa, this is such a mess!

I think Crystal really needs a nice Eusine in her life, who treats her respectfully with all the tender and care she deserves. But this chapter stranged me a little, it felt like she thought nobody cared for her or she felt lonely or something, when she has many friends and companions that love her.

About Green... well, truthfully speaking, he was quite OoC calling Blue a slut. I can't believe he really thinks that way, and even less saying it out loud. But I guess this is your story after all, and I certainly have no intention to forcing you about it should be written. So, I'll simply keep reading.

Five chapters already and this still looks like a dialogue-base, so I'll assume the whole fanfic will be chatroom-like. At least the story feels nice and funny enough :D
And I actually love that Gold and Crystal aren't immediately lovey-dovey, because I don't really like the couple at all. She deserves so much better, I always imagined her with Eusine, so even if at the end of the story they end up together, at least I hope to see Gold actually working his best to win her heart.

Well... this is too much dialogue/speaking and close to no-narration at all, so I am not sure what to make of it. Did you intend this like some sort of chatroom, perhaps? Because if yes, you are doing it quite good; but if no, then you really should think twice how you are writing this.
I don't mean to criticize, so please don't take it bad. It is just my opinion... but since this is only the first chapter, I'll keep reading and hopefully this will get better :D

Cool story, not to flame or anything, but could plz minimize on cussing? Ty

Oooh Sapphire wont be too happy at that. Spicy

*facepalms* Ruby, you idiot...

Drunk Johto is the best! XDD
*Totally didn't completely forgot of this story and had to re-read a few chapters to catch up again*

Please update I can't wait for Crys to get her revenge

I DEMAND MORE
please update