phew what a long road youre done! hows it feel? i thought for a second the rating was gonna change with the bedroom scene but im glad it didnt...gotta remember youre young stay that way. at least they got back together in the end. whats next for you is the question my fav. bit about this was actually in the beginning going throug shevas depression and regret. she was all getting done up and jus not feelin it. im surprised she went through with it instead of scrappin the dance since chris was at home in a funk. on a plus side also, youve done a very good job keeping shevas very practical mom in character the whole way through. i like that about her shits goin down and her daughter is having a fit and shes just so straight lined and pragmatic it aint even funny. sheva must get her emotional state from her pa cause momma is a mountain. so good job on keeping her in character the strongest. i came down kinda hard in the last review but i can be fair the last bit ill say is that while ive readon other stories with the RE cast in HS and they go aroud like an episode of Degrassi which begs the question where the eff are the parents hahaha you must be pretty grounded individual im available for moar criticism/praise in the future cuz im sure youse got the writing bug and cant stop nao!

Sheva Redfield, ¿Qué te puedo decir? Mi inglés es pésimo pero trataré de traducir la crítica jaja!
Quiero decirte que me encantó tu fic, es lindísima, muy tierna, así como debe de ser un amor juvenil, me hiciste recordar mi propia época de adolescente y me trajiste muy buenos recuerdos con mi primer amor jajaja Claro mi novio de ese momento no era tan perfecto como Chris, de ser así yo ya estaría casada y no escribiendo Fanfiction jajaja! Ok creo que a mis 21 años no son tan vieja todavía jaja!
Muchas felicidades fue una historia muy bella, totalmente blanca y dulce (no como los pervertidos como yo que escribimos limones en las historias jaja) Espero y sigas con más historias que te hagan crecer como escritora y nos sigas deleitando con tu escritura. Fue un placer leer tu fic y te deseo mucho éxito en tus historias futuras.
Larga vida a los amantes de CREVA vivan por siempre Chris y Sheva! Abrazos! :D

I want to tell you that I loved your fic, it's very pretty, very tender, as well as must be a juvenile love, I did remember my own time of teenager and I brought fond memories with my first love jajaja Clear my boyfriend at that time was not as perfect as Chris, so I already it would be married and not writing Fanfiction jajaja! Ok, I think my 21 years are not so old still jaja! Congratulations was a very beautiful, completely white and sweet story (not like the perverts like me who write lemons in the stories jaja) I hope you continue with more stories that make you grow as a writer and us continue delighting with your writing. It was a pleasure to read your fic and wish you much success in your future stories.
Long life CREVA lovers live by always Chris and Sheva! Hugs! :D

Ahh really? This is kinda to fast.. But its alright.. I'll wait for next sequel Trials of Love :3 Arigatou

Ohh.. What will happen next? I can't wait.. What's gonna happen at the dance party tomorrow? Huh.. Please hurry! :3

Hola! Es sin duda una historia bastante diferente a las que estamos acostumbrados a tratar en Resident Evil, pero debo admitir que es bastante linda, es una historia muy bella, demasiado tierna diría yo, no sólo se entretenida, al menos a mí como lectora me has hecho sentirme bien, me has hecho sentir como si otra vez tuviera 16 años y estudiara la preparatoria, eso es algo que como escritor es muy difícil de conseguir, pero cuando lo logras es algo maravilloso. Felicidades, continúa así con este bello relato, tienes mucho futuro como escritora. ¡Abrazos!

of COUSE the second I decide to skip all the reading and scroll down and prematurely write a review, you had already done both of the things I said you wouldnt' /didn't do. 1 being ending this soon and 2 being doing something with the jill/chris thing. ah well. im big enough to admit when I blow my load prematurely, wont be the last time. glad to see thing coming to a close so you can focus on other better stuff! :D

ok. I don't mean to be discouraging but you should seriously consider wrapping this up. not offering you any constructive criticism wont help you grow as a writer. this story has multiple short chapters that could be condensed if not deleted because it adds nothing to the main plot-which isn't focused on any one thing. this story reads like a stream of consciousness run on. YOU ARE BETTER THAN THIS. ive seen it in your other little one shots. if that is your forte, and it seems like it is, because the writing is so much better its as if you aren't the same person. stick to the short stories, then expand to a multi chapter behemoth like this one. but yeah, id love to see this end because it is suffering from lack of a main plot, relevant events that add to continuity, among other things im not intelligent enough to call them out. there is no end in sight here. consider figuring out how to end this, head in that direction and stay there until the end. I know there is another chapter after this so I may have jumped the gun but I doubt it. I know its hard to focus on the positive when you get a review that isn't gushing with encouragement and positivity but focus on what I put in caps up there bro. if you want to flame me back or pm me that's my real pn I just didn't log in cuz im lazy. hey so, be good, sit on this tho

Hello Sheva Redfield i just wanted to tell you that I've been following your story since the start and just wanted to tell you how much of a great story this is. At one point i thought you gave up on this story but i'm really glad you didn't. Cant wait for the next chapter. See ya soon.

Peace N Love

Man-United-4life Out

My god.. Why Jill needed to be do that ._. She's really meant.. I think I should prepare a tissue when the next chapter is updated.. Poor Sheva :'( Daijyoubu desu Sheva-san, Chris will explain everything

Great work :-)

I can't wait for the next chapter :3

How embarssing. When oh when will they have sex?

Please update! Please! I just read this entire thing in like a day! I need you to! When I first started, it said that your last update was 14 hours ago! I need you to! I will be waiting!

How embarssing. Oh, when oh when will they have sex? Please update! Please! I just read this entire thing in one day! I need you to!

Okay, as long as they don't run into wherever their going, then I look forward to the next chapter.

(even though it's already up)

I can tell why you named this chapter what you did.