Reviews for Somewhere Beyond |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this! It's so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No that was a very nice romantic story and thanks for the read I hope you did the sequel to this i would like to learn how Elyse grew up |
![]() ![]() ![]() the ending just melted me! so so adorable to see them as parents! loved the whole way their relationship progressed. the first time they made love , Lisbons shyness the next day and the way he went over her house to solve the problem. even their first fight, so good to see them talk it out and be together! ! all thanks to Cho we got the cutie baby Elyse yayy! thank you for this amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an absolutely wonderful read! It was very well written, pretty much in character and super cute! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Like the story need more chapters. |
![]() ![]() I beg you for a next part! This is one of my favourite story ever ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... Yeah, I just love this. Love that you went with Lisbon being the one freaking out, while Jane has those bittersweet moments in which it's clear that things are changing, and that isn't always easy - the way you chose to illustrate that with just the mention of the wedding ring rather than a ton of internal angst is brilliantly subtle. I do see things happening this way with the two of them, in my heart of hearts (not that Bruno would ever see it this way, of course): Jane having made up his mind, certain as only Jane can be, while Lisbon doubts and frets and has to work up the courage to risk her heart after he's broken it one too many times over the years. Yep, this is just perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this, and I'm thrilled. Was just longing for well-written, shameless fluff... And here it is! Wonderfully written, and I love the way you weave in those unexpectedly powerful punches ("Maybe she had fallen asleep on her desk in Washington, or even in California, and there was no Blake Association, no Chief Lisbon of Cannon River. Jane had never left, had never strangled someone in a park one sunny day." - BEAUTIFUL) so effortlessly. Or at least you make it seem effortless. At any rate, thanks for this - now I'm off to read the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was looking through my followed stories to check I was up to date and ended up reading the last few chapters again! Then I realised I didn't review them! Bad bad me! Loved this story! Loved all the fluff! Loved the ending! Great job as usual! And of course whenever your muse wants you to write that sequel I'll be here...waiting...whenever? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is soooooo fluffy! Nicely done, every single chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Starry19, thank you for this beautiful story. It is really awesome. I totally love it. So Lisbon said yes. Who knows maybe at some point it will be accidentally in six months)) Hope for a sequel)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm okay I'm okay, i thought i wouldn't be able to survive all this fluffiness But I'm okay. |
![]() ![]() Wow just read the first chapter. Amazing and so emotional. Look forward to the rest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, so cute! I would love a sequel sometime! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this was an übercute story, from beginning to end! |