Nice read. I always enjoy the many creative ways Harry and Ginny meet and fall in love.

Great start to an interesting story. I’d like to read the development of this adventure.

This story was excellent.

This is cute

Hmmm interesting

I loved your story. Yes, you have trouble with spelling, but it didn't hurt the flow of the story. You really should consider writing more.

That was a twist that I didn't expect. If anyone who died could give warnings in a dream, then it would definitely be Luna who figured it out.

Great chapter. I love Harry and Ginny together in any universe, J.K.'s or AU.

I am glad that I found your story. It is only the first chapter and I am already hooked,

I like this little au fic. I have read many in which the beta/s were thanked and they had mistakes also. Do your best and take your time typing. Look a word over, reread a sentence and see if it makes sense to you. Don't rush. I just had :sense: spelled as :sence: and got a red mark under it so just put my cursor over the word and right clicked and the correct spelling popped up. Try it but don't give up.

You vile vile house elf! You destroyed the real beginning of harry Potter and how he defeated voldemort.

great chapter

Okay that's very nice, very detailed descriptions and as it seems to be a personal project I'll point out the little mistakes and discrepancies. Now please don't take it as an insult. I might have missed some.

"even the ocean when she was vacationing near it;" but then you tell us "But she had never encountered water like this before" and you're talking about her swimming in an ocean as if was her first time. Nothing major but I'm still pointing it out

"course": did you mean coarse ?

"a remembered": and remembered

"she'd hoped she'd been": I think it would make more sense without the first d, she hoped she'd been.

"hadn't' ": hadn't,

I'd be glad to read it.

great chapter