Reviews for Nice Smile
wuemsel chapter 1 . 8/25
Awwwww! That was so adorable! Love it. I always love some actual warmth between these two. :)

Thank u so much for posting! :)
RobinRedoe chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
Such a good story, while keeping the guys in character. I enjoyed this one very much :)
avieryfriend chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
That was really nice, I loved it! I don't see enough fanfiction with BA and Face, this was very sweet. Thanks, cj
Paper Crane Song chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
This was a really lovely scene to read. The characterisation was spot on, and you really dug deep into their interaction together - it was very descriptive (e.g. their expressions, their actions) without being too wordy, it made this moment perfect to visualise. Also loved the little details you threw in - like how the team caught BA and then subsequently dropped him in the trust-building exercise, Murdock calling his koala 'Skippy' (that's SO Murdock). It was just a really nice choice of subject to write about. Well done. (PS: I've linked to this story in my 'bookmarks' over on AO3, hope that's ok).
ShadowWriter33 chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
Interesting little story. I like BA's approach at compliments, and that he noticed Face's good deeds.
nomdeplume30 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
What a lovely piece! Hannibal and team building exercises. I shudder at the thought. But what a wonderful moment between B.A. and Face. Loved Face's blush. :) I enjoyed B.A.'s character here and his perceptiveness. He doesn't talk much, but he sees everything. Nicely done!
Lindelas chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I wish there had been a few more little moments like this in the show. We get a lot of interaction between BA and Murdock, and Face and Murdock, but so little between Face and BA. I think you got the characterization spot-on (I've noticed its hard to get BA just right, but I think you nailed it)! I also loved him pointing out Face's little acts of selflessness, and the fact that it shows how observant BA is. Very nice.
LAGC chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
This was a wonderful character piece. So rare to see the soft side if B. A.
You did a wonderful job dropping his walks yet keeping him all gruff.
Showing Face all flustered was the perfect counterpoint.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Loved it! BA is the most perceptible person of them all :)
/B
The-Time-Travelling-Hippie chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This was really good. I loved B.A's reaction at the end. You nailed B.A, his glare, his growl. Excellent!
Kim Borowiak chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I like the way that BA knows enough about Face to appreciate the good things that he does and he gives Face credit for them. Face hating to appear sentimental, at first, refusing to admit what he does for the Team is so like him trying to maintain his cool image. Good job.
MommieJen chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Someone else referred me to this since I'm kind of taking a FF break, and I was pleasantly surprised. This is really, really good. Great. The characterizations were really well done.

And, poor ducks! But fabulous visual!
SupernaturalGeek chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
That was really lovely; poignantly sweet and touching yet without ever going over the top or taking Face or BA out of character.

I wish there were more stories focusing on the friendship between these two, especially as well done as this.
Haro kzoids chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Muy interesante. Me gustó la idea de darle a entender a un estafador que hay cosas que simplemente no puede ocultar y sobre todo de sus amigos.
Me gustó.
SaraiEsq chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Excellent!
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