This was wonderful, and I really enjoyed reading it! Thank you for writing and sharing it!

I like this Story and i have a favor to ask. Could you do Chapters for each of the Crewmembers?
I hope you get what i mean.

Luffy is the BEST captain and every single Straw Hat is loyal to him. It takes a lot more than broken bones to break that; I think you captured that here perfectly :D love this fanfic

that made me feel all warm inside, Luffy really will go through hell and back for his friends wont he?

I really live how you described Sanji's thought process. Mt favorite line was when he thought that nothing could hurt him, he was safe, because Luffy was focused on him completely. I really feel like this is what anyone would think, because Luffy is so protective of anyone his cares about, especially his nakama, when Luffy comes to rescue them. Well done and well written!

Awesomeness.

3 nice

Yay! Sanji is okay!

YAY :3 Sanji whump and intense nakamaship, my personnal jam :3

Good evening.
Most times I don't like it when Sanji is weak and unable to save himself but you managed to bring so many deep feelings into this short story, so much pain and nakamaship and it is just great. Really, really touching and I strongly believe I would have have started to cry if this was just a sentence longer. Really nice work.
Silberfuchs

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This story is beyond wonderful.

So eight hundred words isn't much for a story. That said this was absolutely breathtaking. In less than a thousand words you captured why Sanji is such a beloved character, and why One Piece is a legendary manga. Loveable misfits that come together to form a family so fierce that even the World Government hesitates to challenge them.
Well not yet but they'll get there at some point.
Back on track the only thing I could want for would be a longer story.

Thanks for writing

Short but really nice.

That was really sweet! :)