Damn. That was a ride. This was gorgeous, as always. You really have a gift with these kids of things, really.

DAMN! THISBIS SO FREAKING AMAZING I LOVE HOW YOU INCORPERATED THE LYRICS AND HOW THAT LAST STANZA YOU PLACED IN THERE TOTTALLY WENT THE LAST PART OF THE ONE SHOT I DDIIIEEEEDDDD

Wow...out of all of them I think Thalia's got it the worst
Phenomenal writing

I find the writing pattern very interesting. Good work!

This made me really sad but happy at the same time, and now I'm confused, so yeah. I like this though! :D

DID ANABETH JUST RAG ON BRINH ME THE HORIZON! THATS NOT OKAY!

Oh my goodness this is the single most wonderful thing ever! I love how you wrote each character honestly and didn't bend their opinions because 'everybody loves Percy.' Don't get me wrong, I love Percy but this explains each of their characters so well. Plus you didn't hate on Jason for no reason at all or make him look like some inconciderate jerk like most people write him like. All in all I really really love this, better than anything most people including me could ever write. :)

This was awesome will you write another? I seriously loved the anger you made everyone feel.
Your fan,
sonofthetrigod